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aashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hey dear superb part yar loved it please update soon and thanks for pm

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

God i LOVE Twilight But Hate Edward 🤣, This Was A W E S O M E ! Will Be Back res

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SoniRita

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Posted: 14 years ago

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m really really really sorry for late comment jaanu bt kya karooo so so busy today u knw naa see didnt even came online much today anyways aditi januuuuuuuuuuuuuu u uploaded ur OS finally woohooooooo n so so sweet of u dedicate it to me n zee aww u such a sweetheart love u ok now i should stop my bak bak n write da comment omg omg omg u need to get a standing ovation for dis man wow wow m totally spechless reading da updateeeeee so wow here sammy can read thoughts of gunji wow wow n loveeeeee how he was all intrested wid gunji n he was attracted towards her also wow wow n den in classroom scene omg omg he got so addicted wid gunji blood n all gosh loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee how u expressed sammmy feelings n everyhting gosh i totally loved it man omg can u believe i read it like 2-3 times mujhe itna aacha laga hehehe wow u need a big hug from my side jaanu🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 u realy rocked it n made my day jaanu thnx a lot for dis OS n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 14 years ago

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Ultrachic

@Ultrachic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

amazing update!!
just loved it so much!!
please do continue soon!!

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Mystery

@desiresoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

awesomeee os loved it superb plzz contineu soon n thanx 4 the pm

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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

grr88 updateee

thnks for da pm...

update jaldi karnaa plzzzz

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

heyyyyyyy adiiiii
amzingggg start yaar

lovvved it
n i luvvvv twilight 2
n belev u u were superb in ur 1st update...
rockngggg

cont sooooooooon n
thnx 4 d pm

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Res Dang m sooo Late!! Okay Aditi firstly have u read Midnight Sun partial draft?😳

n second u dedicated it to me..awww luv u dear🤗🤗

n d help was nothin..nythin for a friend like u🤗

Now coming to the OS😊

The best part samrat could read Gunjan's mind:D:D

I really admire the transition in samrat n gunjan's thoughts, samrat's emotions were intense n gripping in the class, and that part was like the highlight of the whole chap!!👏

u incorporated gunjan's thoughts rlly well n gud in samrat's mind, n the plot as i told u is very different n interesting, m dying to read the next part, wanna know real bad-- wat next?

n hey u didnt mess up or nything, it came out brilliantly! u r fab dear, one of my fav writers, so cheer up coz u penned a beautiful OS!😳

Now goes without saying Do continue soon...n i so want to be the first person to reply next time!!😆😉

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Nice title huh! Always There ....For You! (yeh main tujhse keh rahi hoon😳)

Take care hun, dont strain urself, Get Well soon @}--

Luv U..will always!

ZJ🤗

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gunjan

@me_mohit

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Adi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat an OS darling!!!!!!!!!

simply amazin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mmmmmmuaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Here goes the second part of my OS....hope you like it:):):):)

Dia's vision made my day more and more miserable. I wanted to run away, run away from what?

I dint get any respond to my quest. The face of that innocent human child was sailing smoothly in front of my eyes.

She looked carefree, her mind far away from any thoughts. She was smiling, though not in complete satisfaction, but in lure!!

I wasnt stunned, coz I found most of the human girls attracted towards us!!

But her innocent smile took my breath away, becoz she is far away from the thoughts of her horrible future, she never know the truth, She had no idea how close to the truth she was!!

I was fighting to keep the deadly thoughts from my head, instead going over tactics to reach my destination.

Once again, I was shocked by how sharp she was. The look might not be able to kill, but the man behind it definitely could; in fact, he had.

My eyes had seen adequate carnage to last eternity. I'd been that monster for long enough, done despicable things that I could never take back. I couldn't tack this girl's death onto the end of that long list. I would wrestle that demon until I was destroyed. The monster would not take over now as he had decades ago, especially not with one who had such a clean soul.

She blushed again, and I was nearly undone.

Finally, the bell rang.

I sprang up, grabbed my books and fled from the room. I would not be attending Spanish this afternoon. From the stress of my last hour, all of my willpower was shredded.

Once I left the confines of the building, and the fresh air cleared out my head, I was able to think clearly.

How could I have thought of harming that poor, innocent girl?

I wondered why Dia hadn't come to stop me. Maybe it hadn't been as bad as I'd thought.

I decided to check in on her.

Her thoughts were filled with Benji?

She knew the hurdles we were approaching. She knew the terrible future looming over Gunjan Bhusan.

Why wasn't she watching over her? Did she not care?

Yes, he'd struggled at lunch, but he was perfectly calm now, his course sure and steady.

It was mine that was so shaky. Anger at my own weakness filled me as I walked to my Maybach. It was best for me to spend time away from temptation.

Abruptly, Dia's thoughts switched back to Gunjan.

She still saw the same image, a newborn vampire with dark, flowing hair. This time it was clearer than before, so much more certain.

How could that be? She'd survived the class.

I sat for the next hour making decisions and changing them according to the future seen in Dia's head.

No matter how I tried, nothing changed for Gunjan. All that would change was when it would happen.

I briefly entertained the notion of giving in. Mayank and Benji had their fair share of slips.

Why not me?

When Mayank had met that woman hanging up the wash, he'd not given a second chance to attacking her.

Of course, he had been much younger back then. And he had never been blessed with my control.

Control that father had always been proud of, even when I was still a newborn. It had allowed us to move near humanity earlier than he'd expected, leading him to Mother.

If I drained the girl now, he'd never judge me, not even in his own thoughts.

I knew, however, that the disappointment I'd see in his eyes and hear in his tone would crush me. I didn't want to be the monster I knew I was.

I had to fight this, had to find a means to stay away from Gunjan Bhusan.

Out of nowhere the solution struck me.

I would remove myself from the equation. I would switch from that section of biology.

Elation hit me as I knew this was the correct way to go.

I looked to Dia for confirmation, but she was no longer searching for Gunjan, having gone back to Benji.

No matter. I didn't need her to tell me this was the path to stop that vile future. Avoidance wasn't just the best course of action; it was the only course of action.

I rushed to the office, where Mrs. Tamanna sat. I tried to convince her to let me switch classes, but that seemed impossible.

She was intent on not allowing me into another section.

I even offered not to take the class at all, to make it up the following year.

Still she refused.

A thought of dismay and despair haunted me like anything.

It's just until college, anyway, Gunjan. Then you're done and you can go someplace warm and sunny.

I was trapped.

There was no way I could leave without some inhuman display of speed.

I readied myself for her presence, hoping to scrape together the remains of my willpower.

It was a lost cause.

There was no way I'd have enough time as she was closer than I'd thought. The door opened, and a rush of Gunjan Bhusan scented air hit me like a wrecking ball.

In that instant, I was not able to deny her lure.

I breathed deeply knowing that soon, her blood would be mine.

There was no other decision.

Wherever I went, she seemed to follow.

And I knew I'd never forget the luscious scent of her.

It drove me crazy, the taste of human blood is always great!!!!

I became monster again!

TO BE CONTD.......

Hope you guys liked it....Hey folks I beg ur pardon, if I committed any silly mistakes....this is my first try on super naturals n fantasies ...So do bear with me.....n if you liked it then do press the like button.....dont forget to comment guys n positive critisims are always welcomed!!!!!

ur's
Aditi

Edited by Dr.Zombie - 14 years ago

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