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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey Jassi

Thanx for dedicating it to me
Cuming to the update
As all ways fab loved the way Geet n Maan were fghting
I hate u coffee is my Fav dialogue in this update😆😆😆
Bachari coffe pe saara izlam n kasur hai Dil ka😆😆😆😆
Geet really cant control her anger n always speaks a lil more in frnt of Maan
Whereas Maan always looses himself in her😆😆Maan control urself was also fab
Maan never leaves chance of gng close to her End hi lelo he was jus getting more n more close
1st day ye effect aaeg pata nahi kya hoga😆😆😆😆
Update soon

Yay!!!
Another one of my fav commenters!
I'm sooooo happy you liked the update!!
And ya, the coffee dialogue is one of my favv too!
And I'm trying to show you guys Geet's character
in my FF, and I'm happy u are liking it
Please keep commenting
ur comments are veryy much appreciated!
Love You
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

OMG!!!!
Thank You sooooooooo much!!
You are one of my faavvvv commenters
because you always leave me smiling
after reading your sweet comments!!
I always look forward to ur comments
and it's not surprising that
again u are one of the people who this part
is dedicated too
I don't even feel like updating
until I get such comments
Thanks soooo mcuh for making me feel soo special!
Love You!
Thanks Again
-Jassi

awwww i genuinely felt all giggly once i read this simply cos it makes me feel so happpy that my comment made u happy 😆 - i think maybe cos ur update made me happy and thats y i was able to leave u a nice comment 😉 very honestly, i simply told u what I felt thats all 😃 which then made u happy and so we're )all happy hehehe 😆 loving ur fic, do continue sooon!
(i popped by after seeing that u were the last person to comment on the post.. and i thought maybe u had updated 😳 😆 but nope not yet!! lol)
*wooops forgot to say.. ur sooo welcome! 🤗 and shouldnt i be sayin thanx..? firstly 4 continuing and secondly for a rocking update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
lovely update!!
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
OMG dat was amazing... GR8 work plz plz plz plz plz update sooonnnnnnnn i reali loved itttt like MHAWZZZ and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hi
loved ur ss ❤️
its soooooooo good 👍🏼
loved geet chewing bubble gum infront of the great MSK 😆
and really like their conversation
well i can't say conversation its more like arguments 😆
btw loved both the parts
update soooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Mina H

OMG dat was amazing... GR8 work plz plz plz plz plz update sooonnnnnnnn i reali loved itttt like MHAWZZZ and thanks for the pm!

Thank you soo much!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

hi

loved ur ss ❤️
its soooooooo good 👍🏼
loved geet chewing bubble gum infront of the great MSK 😆
and really like their conversation
well i can't say conversation its more like arguments 😆
btw loved both the parts
update soooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thanks for your wonderful comments!
I'll update shortly!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Dedications:
Saz - Chotii
Afsha .sireesha.

-Your comments were very encouraging!

Once again the whole part is only MaanEet!


Recap:

"No! I'll go alone!" yelled Geet annoyed. Maan got angry. It was the first time he was actually helping an employ of his and instead of saying, 'Thanks! That's really nice of you!' she was showing him attitude. "Geet! You Are Coming With Me!" he yelled very loud. "No, I Am Not!" she yelled even louder. She started walking, when Maan quickly came infront of her and blocked her way. She was about to go from the other side and took a step. Maan did the same blocking her way. She took a step from the other side. So did he and once again blocked her way, their noses were almost touching. Geet tried pushing him back, but his muscular chest was too strong for her. "Your coming with me!" he murmered stepping closer. They were so close now. "No" she said taking a step back. "Yes!" he said taking more steps forward on impulse to get closer to her. She moved back until she hit the wall with 'MSK' engraved on it. "Aap mujhe force nahi kar sakte! Aur iss waqt aap mere boss nahin hain!" she said miffed at his behaviour. He took a step forward, and murmurred "Peeche dekho" close to her ear, sending chills down her spine. She looked behind and saw 'MSK' written and turned around only to find Maan extremely close, gazing at her. She downed her eyes. "Chalo mere saath" he whispered in her ear, and held her wrist. They both had butterflies in their stomachs. He pulled her with him and made her sit in his car.
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Once Upon A Time...


Chapter 3

Once they were seated in the car, Maan started driving.
"Where is your house?" he asked her.
"Main nahin bataoongi...infact, I think you should just leave me here so I can go alone!" she said planning on annoying the hell out of him like he did.
"Aakhari baar pooch raha hoon, tumhara ghar kahan hain!" (I'm asking you for the last time where is your house!) he asked getting ticked off by her behaviour. She just rolled her eyes in response.
"Tum ladkiyan itni zidhi kyun hoti ho!?" (Why are you girls so stubborn!?) he asked angrily. She squinted her eyes at him.
"You know what! If you don't tell me where you live, I will take you to my house" he said ready for her to blurt out her address. She gaped at him with wide eyes and blew another enormous bubble, annoying Maan. Now she was angry! She pushed at the handle of the door not caring that the car was driving. Obviously he would stop the car when the door opens. But, to her surprise it wouldn't budge. She looked at him and saw him smirking. She struggled to open it again. Maan interrupted by saying
"Thak jao gi! Mujhe pata tha ke tum aisi koi stupid harkat karogi so I put the childlock on. You are no less than a little immature kid anyways!" (You'll get tired! I knew you would try something stupid like this so i put the childlock on...) he explained to her. She gave him an angry glare. She tried once more to make sure.
"Girls are so stupid! You tell them anything, they just won't believe you until they have tried themselves." he said rolling his eyes. She glared at him again.
"Gosh Sir! Are you gonna kidnap me or something!?" she yelled at him angrily.
"No, but if you don't tell me your address...maybe" he said amused as her angry face all of a sudden had a scared look and she widened her eyes in fear and then blew another stupid bubble and quickly blurted her address. Maan turned his car and started driving to her house which was 20 minutes away from where they were.
"Open the window and spit your gum out right now Ms. Geet Shergill" he said angrily. She had been annoying him with the stupid gum thing the whole day, he just never got the chance to tell her to stop. He had always hated gum. But, she loved it and wasn't going to listen to him.
"No" she replied. She was being such a pain in the neck and she knew it. But, Maan had his weapon, "Don't forget I can easily kidnap you!" he said smirking. She sighed and spit her gum out the window, but smiled and plopped another one in her mouth. He gave her furious glare and decided not to say anything, or else she would drive him crazy.

After a few seconds, Geet purposely started to blow bubbles from her gum because Maan hated it. Maan saw it from the corner of his eye.
"God! Why did you make girls so annoying?" he asked dramatically.
Geet was angry at him for constantly critisizing women and the words "Are you gay!?" accidentally slipped out of her mouth. Maan quickly halted the car, turned and looked at her ever so angrily.
"What the hell did you just say!" he yelled hurting her ears by his powerful loud voice.
"Uuhhhh..." she didn't know what to say.
"What do you mean by that!?" he asked angrily.
"Umm...kuch nahi, was j-j-just w-wondering if y-you are... you know..." she said mustering up courage. In anger Maan started coming closer to her. She slowly backed up until she was leaning completely angainst the seat, with Maan inches away. Whenever Maan was around Geet, he'd always end up close to her when he got angry.
"Main gay nahi hoon!" (I'm not gay!) he said in her ear still very angrily, giving Geet goosebumps.
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Maan realized he was so close to Geet he moved back and sat in his seat. Maan! You need to control yourself! How do you always end up so close to this girl you just met today! I just still couldn't believe she called me gay!! She needs a brain to tell her when to talk and when not to! And what to say and what not to! I looked at her. She was sitting there waiting for me to start the car and blew a bubble. Ek toh main usse lift de raha hoon, lekin this girl just won't stop showing me attitude! Just then she butted in with her useless talks.
"It's okay Sir! You don't need to be embarassed. I'm very broad-minded!" she said hiding a smile.
"Shut Up Geet!" he said through gritted teeth.
"Don't worry Sir! Maine Dostana dekhi hain! Aur John-Abhi ki relationship accept karli. Nothing big. I understand. Hota hain... (Don't worry Sir! I've watched Dostana, and accepted John-Abhi's relationship. Nothing big. I understand. It happens...) she said. What the hell!!! Dostana??
"Waise woh badnaseeb ladka hain kaun?" (Anyways who's that unfortunate guy?) she said and started to laugh.
That's it! I can't tolerate her anymore!
"Get out of my car Geet!" I said with a whole lot of attitude and arrogance trying to show her that I'm not just anyone. I was about to turn the childlock off when she replied. Her reply ticked me off. She rolled her eyes and said
"I didn't want to be in this khadara (garbage) anyways!" she said getting out. I looked at her with anger and surprise.
"How Dare You Call My BMW X5 Khadara!" I yelled at her angrily at the top of his lungs.
"Because It Is Khadara Just Like You!" she yelled at me just like I did. She was having fun critisizing me and my car.
"Kya kaha tumne!?" I asked completely miffed at this girl my SECRETARY! She rolled her eyes.
"Just open the damn childlock, so I can get out!" she said not caring. Did she forget I'm her boss! Just then, I remembered my weapon So she wants to leave doesn't she?!
"Nahi kholoonga! Kya kar logi!? Abh yeh car wahi jaayegi jaha main jaana chahta hoon!" (I won't open it! What are you gonna do? This car will go where I want it to go!) I said with arrogance. She gasped. I felt like scaring her more. I loved the expressions on her face. And the way her expressive eyes changed whenever I said something nice, scary, angry. Her eyes always matched with what I said.
"Sir aap jaante nahin mujhe! Main aapko itna tang karoongi ke aapka dimaag ghoom jaayega!" (Sir! You don't know me! I will bug you soooo much that your brain will go haywire!) she said trying to scare him with her warning tone.
"Tumne already mera dimaag ghooma diya hain!" (You've already done that!) I said in a not caring tone.
"Main chilaoongi!" (I'll scream!) she said with a warning tone. I looked around at the completely deserted road.
"Go ahead! Have fun..." I said smirking. I was really having fun doing this. She irritated the hell out of me, now it was my turn.
"I don't feel like going home...I wonder where I should go?" I thought out loud purposely. She looked at me pouting. I ignored her.
"How about I go to the theatres..." I said looking at her face light up at the word theatre. Not so fast!
"To watch a documentary on how to handle business pressure...there's a twelve-o-clock show, it's 11:30, and I'm sure you'd be delighted to watch it. Am I right Geet??" I said controlling my laughter looking at Geet face. She looked like she will puke. I started the car towards the Highway. We reached the traffic filled highway. Geet's frown was slowly turning into a smile. I knew she would obviously take this as an opportunity to scream so I purposely put the radio on with full volume. She plugged her ears and screamed but obviously it wasn't audible compared to the music. I looked at her with mock sympathy and started wondering. Does she really think I would waste two hours of my precious time watching some stupid documentary, that probably doesn't even exist!? God! You should have gave her at least a small brain.

I got off the highway onto another deserted street and turned the radio off. She started screaming again incase there was someone on this deserted road. I halted the car and covered her mouth with my hands.
"Shut up you stupid girl!" I yelled at her.
"I want to go home!!" she yelled taking my hand off.
"I was trying to get you home but you left me with no option! You were being such a pain in the neck!" I said to her. I was going to drop her home but, NO she just had to annoy me like that! Didn't she!! I could tell she was angry at herself for being so annoying but, obviously her ego wouldn't let her apologize. I don't care! I'm not letting her off until she apologizes!
"Who told you to drop me off in the first place!" she yelled. Now what was I supposed to say. That I was worried for you and didn't want you to go alone???
"I was just trying to be nice!!" I yelled in response.
"Where the hell was your niceness during office hours!?" she asked angrily.
"Chup ho jao Geet! (Shut Up Geet!) And maybe I might change my mind about the business documentary." I said.
"What the hell! Kaunsi business documentary??!! You expect me to believe ke adhi raat ko theatres pe koi business documentary chal rahi hain!? Not everyone is dumb like you!" (What the hell!! What business documentary??!! You expect me to believe there is a business documentary on at the theatres in the middle of the night!??) she yelled annoyed. Okay! Maybe she did have a brain. But, she was still an annoying jungli billi!
"You just want to annoy me like I annoyed you! But, now I'm gonna annoy you even more!" she said and started screaming. I covered my ears.

"DOOR KHOLO DOOR KHOLO DOOR KHOLO!!! (OPEN THE DOOR OPEN THE DOOR OPEN THE DOOR!!!) she yelled annoyingly. After a while she started hitting me because her yelling wasn't making a difference to me. What the hell is she doing hitting me like this. I held both her wrists and pinned them to her seat. I was leaning towards her and she was pinned to the back of her seat. Our faces were really close. I looked at her with anger filled eyes.

"Okay! How about you stop behaving like a maniac and I will actually drop you home! And listen, if you start acting like some wild animal again, I will actually kidnap you! Got it!?" I said in a warning tone close to her ear. I moved back she sat straight and sighed of relief that I was away from her. I started the car.
"Dusht Dhanav" she said in a low voice but I heard.
"Jungli Billi" I said the exact same way. She pretended she didn't hear.

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I sat on my seat thinking about this long day. It was 12:00 so the day was basically over. Twenty minutes until we reach my house. Ek hi din mein kitna kuch ho gaya (So much happened in one day!) I hope I never have to work overtime! Maan sir will make my life hell! But, it makes up for how annoying I was being today. I smiled thinking how much I annoyed him today. Then I smiled thinking about his beautiful eyes. I swear! Eyes just couldn't get better than that! Oye Geet! Get your mind off Maan sir!! I took out my iPhone, plugged in the earphones and started listening to songs, because I was pretty sure he would freak out if I touched his stereo system.

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Those eyes! There soo magical! What's in them that I always find myself lost in them! She has the most beautiful eyes, I've ever seen! MAAN!!!! For the last time stop thinking about Geet! I tried distracting myself, but I just ended up turning to get a glimpse of her. Then, I went back to driving. She was putting her ear phones in her ears. I guess, she guessed I'd freak out if she touched my stereo system. Just then, I heard some music coming from Geet's side! It's funny that there could be something in common between me and Geet. We love listening to really loud music. The music was from Geet's earphones and she wouldn't stop increasing the volume. I could tell she was listening to punjabi songs.

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"Tumhara ghar aa gaya." (Your house is here) said Maan.

"Bye" she said getting out.

"Your Welcome" said Maan instead of 'bye' hinting that she should say 'Thank You' But, she being Geet just rolled her eyes and walked off. Geet went inside, brushed put on her pyjamas (Spongebob ones) and went to sleep. She knew it would be hard to get up for her the next morning becasue it was 12:30 and she LOVES sleeping.

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12 hours later (12:30 next day):

BANG BANG BANG

Someone was banging on Geet's bedroom door.

"Who is it?" Geet murmured in still half sleeping on her bed with her eyes closed, not paying attention to the time. Just then, whoever was banging on her door quickly opened it angrily waking Geet up. She slowly opened her eyes to see...

Sorry!!! You guys gotta wait for next update!

Keep Guessing who it could be and how he/she got in!

You all better comment!

And sorry I didn't edit it

Ignore mistakes!


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amazing part i really liked the way u described how maan and geet were trying to annoy each other and on the other hand they were getting attracted towards each other.

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