'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part!! update soon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's so cute! Melikes alotyy!

Update soon Taz! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey thank u so much for the FF...🤗
N nice character sketch....n well nice to see al four girls hvng distinct characteristics...!! Looking fwd to what happens next...!!
Great job..n Congratulations on ur FF 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnku guys!!
will b updating soon!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok..thats a gud one n preety interesting too :) PM me when u write d next part..

Piya..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tanseem nice character sketch!

Looking forward to it.😛
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Originally posted by: ffkhan

Tanseem nice character sketch!

Looking forward to it.😛



hey thnx alot!!

i hope u read d part 1 also....its on d same page!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i liked it....thanks 4 the pm........
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Part 2

Scene1

Tina lukin at nat wid amazment

Tina:*whispering* nat, is he ur bro?
Nat: Yea hez my far cousin. y do u luk so stunned ??
Tina: amm....me stunned amm...noo no....im not ...y r u askin me dis?....im not im normal *hesitatingly*
Nat: Ok yaar chill, i was jst askin u....y r u gettin all wierd?
Nyways viks.....lets get in, u r in our class :)
Tina: Hez in our class???
Nat: ya so ?
Tina: hmm....nothin.

Tina, Nat and Viks enters into d class. Walking towards Anji and Azra.

Anji: Agai Tina!! whr wr u ? v had to send nat to get u bak hehe.
Nat: I dnno, she was jst standing thr lyk a doll.
nywyas guys meet my cousin, Vikram. Hez gonna join us dis yr, he left his boarding school!
Anju: hello handsome!!
Azra: hiee vikram.

Tina jst standin thr widout ny response.

Nat: Tina....i introduced u also to him, i hav to giv u sum invitation to tell him hi?!!
Vikram: hey nat, v already met. She had dropped her bag so i picked it 4 her.
Nat: ohh i c..!! tats nice. Ok viks come and join us, nywhr u lyk to sit.

Tina having a grin on her face goes n sits wid Anji, n Nat goes n sits wid azra,thr desk is infront of tina's n anji's,tats thr usual sitting.
Vikram goes n sits in front of nats desk, whr hez sittin alone. A new entrant comes in n sits wid Vikram.

Vikram: Hey dude! Vikram hr...!
Boy: hello, Iam manoj! nice to meet u

Vikram n Manoj shakes hand!

Nat: oh great Viks u got a new frn! he luks new to d class too.
Vikram: oh i c tats gud!

Every1 is in d class, n all d grls r eyeing on Vikram including Tina hu is jst admiring him.
Later in d class, all d new students were introduced to one anothr and then dey got thr new books.

Its end of the now......1:30 pm on d clock.
Every1 is hurrying to go bak home where as Tina, Nat, Anji n Azra r bzy wid thr non stop talk!

Anji: Yaar nat tera cousin toh bada hot he!!
Nat: chup opye..!!! kisiko toh chhod de!! u got ur Akash na....dnt line on ny n every guy!
Tina: Tats true.....hot toh woh he!! *shyly*
Anji: WAT!!.....Wat did i hear??!! yeh mere kaan kya sun rahe he???!!....Tina calling a guy hot??!!
Nat: OMG..!! Tina r u arri8??
Azra: guys comon stop ur guy talks!
Nat: no no....we gotto tlk abt it!! TINA is sayin hez hot gosh!!....isnt it lyk a dream haha!
Anji: yaaa srsly!!....nyways Tina luked dreaming since he got into d class *hitting tina wid her elbow*
Tina: no no...nothin lyk dat....ammm....i was jst commenting....u u ppl also think nything!
Nat: ohhh commenting haa.....u never commented abt ny1 b4!! haha
Azra: leave it....did u even luk around every1 left! lets leave nw! i gotto go thru my new books.
Anji: uff azra u n ur obssessions wid d books!
Tina: ya lets leave....

Every1 leaves d skool including Vikram huz goin wid Nat.......frm a distance Tina staring at Vikram till he leaves.

Scene 2-Tina's home

Its 2:30 on d clock. Tina has a small flat wid beautiful environment.
She got a small family with a mom, dad n an elder bro.

Tina: hey mom....im home!
Mom: aagai....chalo khana khaalo
Tina: haa mama.......fresh ho kar aati hu.

Tina gets into her room......keeping her bag on d bed, suddenly she can c d flashbak whr Vikram n her hands collided,
whr he piked her bag n handed it to her, whr he told his name n she heard his manly voice 4 d 1st tym, whr vikram shook
hands wid her......n d unusual feeling and emotions rushed in her.
she just cudnt stop thinkin abt him.
Wen she went to eat she cud jst think abt him n feel his tender hands.

Its 10:00pm on d clock

Tina had her dinner ......n nw shes about to go to d bed.
n her phone rings......
she cheks her cell......its a new number
Tina piks up d call.....


Tina: Hello! huz dis?
Vikram: Hey Tina Vikram hr

Tina all confused!!! dnno wat to speak n wondering y wud he call me?............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it........
u like someone think abt them and here u get a call .........its his call

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