'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27

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Aabray

@Preternatural

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

it was rlly nice chap tassss........luved it
soo tina is in "luv at first sight" wid viks....good.....
waitin for the next chap...y did viks called her? and wat he thinks abt her

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DIPIKA

@dipu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey!!

i really liked your ff,,,,

thanx for sending me pm...

will loved to read it further..plz do pm me whenever you update,,,,,

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Aabrayy
it was rlly nice chap tassss........luved it
soo tina is in "luv at first sight" wid viks....good.....
waitin for the next chap...y did viks called her? and wat he thinks abt her

Originally posted by: annu02
woohw why did he call her

nice part

hehe....tats called creating suspense jst lyk typical tv serials!!
lolz.....tats gonna happen lyk every chapter !!😛

thnx all 4 readin.....n gettin xcited 😊

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Deena

@mdeena

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

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Okay, I'm back! 😃

AH!! Kay that was sooo goood! I absolutely loved it! Vikram sounds so good lookinnnggg 😉😳 haye I wish I could know what he looks like!! 😍 Awww Tina, she's so cuteee. The scenes with her friends are funny, like when they were teasing her and all. I wonder who Manoj will end up with. Anyhow, please do PM me when you update again, I'm really looking forward to reading the next part. It's really good! 😊 It's such a cute and sweet story. The funny moments inbetween bring smiles to my face. I adored this scene:

Anji: Agai Tina!! whr wr u ? v had to send nat to get u bak hehe.
Nat: I dnno, she was jst standing thr lyk a doll.
nywyas guys meet my cousin, Vikram. Hez gonna join us dis yr, he left his boarding school!
Anju: hello handsome!!
Azra: hiee vikram.

Tina jst standin thr widout ny response.

Nat: Tina....i introduced u also to him, i hav to giv u sum invitation to tell him hi?!!
Vikram: hey nat, v already met. She had dropped her bag so i picked it 4 her.

I found that hilarious! 😆 Anyways, overall your fan fiction is pure awesomeness ~

Great job! 👏 Please update as soon as you can. Eagerly waiting to read the next part! 😳

deena

Edited by mdeena - 15 years ago

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mdeena
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wat does dat mean?😳

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Deena

@mdeena

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: kooLgrl786

wat does dat mean?😳

That means that I have saved that spot for myself so that after I finish reading all the updates & am free to comment, I can write everything that I want to. 😊

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: mdeena

That means that I have saved that spot for myself so that after I finish reading all the updates & am free to comment, I can write everything that I want to. 😊

ooo....arri8!!
btw one thing....luvin ur nate n chuck siggy!!
i luv chair......!!! 😃