'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27

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Hey guys.......jst tot of righting a FF
had it in mind frm long.....but never had a place to share.....
so hr im .......😊

hope u like it........plzz do comment frankly
W*Hr its negative or positive!!

The Innocence

The story is situated in a suburban area... Story revolves around tina basicaly, bt othrz r also imp as dey belong wid her.
Herez a character sketch so tat u can relate 2 dem..


Tina( as Dharsti Dhami)-
a simple grl frm a middle class family. Jst 16 yrz old enterin into her youth.
Has a beautiful lyf surounded by her family n bunch of frnz. Shes an avg studnt wit cute luks.
Shez clean n pure physicly n mentaly. Never been in luv...inocence is her treasure.




Natelie(nat)(as Mauni Roy)-
cumin frm a rich family has no worries abt future n is a hot babe.
Had a confused luv lyf n stil has. Not at all studious bt alwayz into sports n livs lyf 2 fullest!.
Tinas groupi n alwayz takes her suprt in hard tyms.




Anjali(anji) (as Rati Pandey)-
The most frnly grl hu mingles wid ny1 n evry1. Already in luv wid her chilhood
frn n has a steady realationship wid him since 6 mnths. Tinas groupi n also her chilhood
frn as she undrstnds her d most.





Azra(as Jennifer Winget)-
One of d mst intlgnt students in d class. Tinas groupi, Copy of tina u can say,
nvr been in luv n is pure bt 1 difrnc tat azra doesnt belv in luv! Shez a beauty wid
brains hu also playz sports. Alwayz hyperactive!



Vikram(as Gaurav Khanna)-
The handsome stud newly joins d skool aftr getin out of a boardin skool,
evrybody has an eye on him! N nt 2 4gt is Natelie's Far cousin. As From a rich family
cares abt nothin, hez a spoiled brat!



Tarun(as Karan Wahi)-
Natelies confusd n so cald bf! Hez complty confusd bout nat n shez havin sum
idea abt it! Hez one hell of a charac! Hez thr clasmate, Studious kid n has no idea abt hw 2 b a bf.
Tinas frn as hez a part of nat's lyf.




Dese r d main charc 4 nw, wil b changin as v pass by

n sum supporting char


Manoj(as Mohit Sehgal)-
vikrams frn



Suhani(as Sanaya Irani)-
anjalis youngr sis




Akash(as Arjun Bijlani)-
anjalis boy frn



Serina(as Surveen Chawla)-
Nat's enemy n also has a thing 4 tarun



Jess(as Amir Ali)-
a senior studnt havin a crush on nat.




P.S. My Maan aka Gurmeet fans plzz dnt get mad at me 4 not adding him......i got him a special spot later so hav patience 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome tasneem....luved characters.....
tina is kinda lyk mee i must say....lukin 4ward to it
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interestin i must say tas!!! do continue:) and do add me to your pm list:)
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hey thnx guys....!!
glad u lykd it......i hope more ppl lyks it!!

Character sketch - Page 1

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 - Page 7
Part 4 - Page 15
Part 5 - Page 19
(PM list)
Part 6 - Page 23
Part 7- Page 27

Edited by kooLgrl786 - 14 years ago
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Part 1

Its 7am on the clock n evryone is ready to leave 4 d skool as its d 1st day in d new class.

At skool...

Evry1s rushing into d main door n searchin 4 thr name on d class' students list to find in wich section dey r...


Tina,natelie n azra entering....

Tina: hello my frnz... Hw r u doing grls?
Nat: hey babez im doing gr8, jst feelin sleepy so annoyed 2 wake up early in d morning *yawns*.
Azra: ello my besties, feels so gr8 2 b bak 2 skool...yeh nat ko toh bas sona he!
Nat: chup oye! Whrz dis anji? Dnt temme shez stuck agn wid sum1 talkin blah blah early in d mornin!
Tina: hehe..seemz lyk, hamesha ka he uska. Btw grlz lets chek which clas v r in.

Anji rushing towards all 3 of em n hugs em all2gethr tightly!

Anji: me aagai..! Acha batao kis kisne mujhe miss kiya!
Azra: welcum sweetz! Whr wr u?
Anji: actualy i came 10mins bak bt i found a new grl searchin 4 her clas so i helpd her..aur pata he kya! Woh na mere gaw ki nikli..toh me usse thodi baate shaate karne lag gai. *smile sweetly*
Tina: oye kutte ki duhm kabhi sidhi nai hoti suna tha ajj mene dekh bhi liya!
Anji: haha! Meri jaan! Akhir dost kiski hu?
Nat: uff anji u n ur ppl frm gaw! 1st of all cumin late n dn chokin me 2 death by huggin me so ti8 u r blaberin all nonsense..
Sayz furiously.

Anji patting on nats bak says calmly..

Anji: nat beta, y r u alwayz so frustratd? Calm down.. I mean no harm *laughs insultingly*
Tina: uffo tum dono phirse shuru hogai? Cmon lets hav a luk on d student list!

All of em searchin 4 thr names in d sec A list...hoping all of em r 2gthr..
N as soon azra finds thr names..

Azra: yeh toh hona hi tha! V all r 2gths agn..yepi!

All em hi5s lyl typical skool besties..

Tina: n dint u notice? Tarun is also in our clas... Hehe

evrybody gigglin except nat hu makes sum wierd xpressions.

As dey wr abt 2 get in, tina drops her bag n wen she bends down 2 pik it up...jst thn a handsome boy arrives n bends down to pik d bag 4 her
his hand lands on tinas hand n wen dr hand collides...
Tina gets a wierd feelin..n wen she luks up 2 c huz her helper..
.she seez a perfect pair of black shoes worn n as she luks up she can c strong athletic legs wearing a ti8 pant...
lukin furthr she seez a well built body wearing a neat white shirt tucked well in d pant, wid a tie hangin widout d collar button on,
n finaly she seez his cute face wid a gentle smile on it n eyez glowin n glarin at her...shes mesmerized by his appereance n luks at him 4 abt a min...
Wen he tries 2 hand ovr d bag 2 her he sayz


boy: hey hrz ur bag gorgeous!

Jst dn tina realizes shez nt dreamin abt such a guy bt hez ri8 in front of him...
Thousands of emotions passd by her, she felt sumthin, sumtin diff 4 d 1st tym
Recoverin frm her amazment...

Tina: oh yea k...i mean ari8...i mean Thnx!

The Boy lukin at her 4 a moment n dn raises his hand towards her 2 shake hands wid her...

Boy: hie vikram hr, nice 2 meet u!

Tina lukd nervous n helpless, dint knw wat 2 do..tot 4 a min
dn shook hands wid him...


Tina: hie tinaz wid u, pleasures all mine.

Nat dashes into Tina....
Tina has no idea wats goin on.....shez standing still lukin at vikram


Nat: What r u upto Tina?? v all r waiting 4 u.....

Nat notices vikram....

Nat: ohhhh my bhhaaii.......!!!! *hugs*
hw r u viks?.....atlast u arrived, gud to c u hr!!

Tina amazingly lukin at Nat n thinking.....
vikram iska bhai he??? *confused*
Edited by kooLgrl786 - 14 years ago
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its adorable. i love it SO much. please continue soon :)
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nice update tas:) do continue:)

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its soo beautiful tas..luved it.........
lukin 4ward for tina and viks and other couples..upd soon
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awe!!!sweetheart its awesome!!!....lovely cherecters!!.............freash story!!!.......add me in your pm list jaan......................
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thnx sweety!
surely ill send u PM!!
xx

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