ff(maneet)Cause we Hate each other updt 48 note 54 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Cause we Hate each other
part 6
by narrator>>>

Geet stalked to maan's house. She climbed the marble staircase. Cursing him under her breath.

"dusht danav, das sar wala ravan,"

"subha subha nind kharab kar diya. Khud to sota nehi mujhe v chen se sone nehi deta. Babaji aapko kya main dikhai nehi deti. Ya aap v uski side mein vir gaye." She complained.

"aab isme meri kya galti hai. Ek to isne meri nind kharab ki pher jab main kuch bolne lagi tab mujhe hi khari khoti sunana suru kar diya. Uff'.i hate him'"

Flashback >>>

Geet was peacefully sleeping on her bed. Her window was opened & the sun ray was touching her beautifull face delicately.

Geet was having dream of her rajkumar. She always try to dream about her prince charming bt her the man in her dream always turns into the khote neighbor. Today was same as well. She was running behind her prince. Their was a soft romantic background music going on. She was about to catch him bt suddenly the music changed as well the scenery.

She was now standing somewhere. It was a room. Wait a minute she knew this room very well. Where am I ? she wondered.

Thn she saw him coming frm a distance. Everything was blur thn suddenly became clear.

& she saw him in his black vest & gaped.

"tum" she gasped.

He ignored her & took her hand & started to sing.

Well, I've been thinkin' 'bout it and it's been too long
So put them dirty dishes down and leave that laundry alone
Come home

Take me by the hand and follow me to our room
You don't have to tell me this is way over due I know
So let's go

I wanna be with you, come let me kiss you
And I don't mean a peck on the cheek
Girl, tonight I'm makin' up for lost time
I hope you got a good night sleep

He winked at her singing these line to her & she was staring at him with her mouth hanging open.

I ain't gonna rush it, girl you're gonna love it
'Cause I intend to do it right
But I'll go ahead and warn ya
This is gonna take all night

Now I don't understand how life can get in the way
Of me and the prettiest girl in the world makin' love
But it does

He came closer to her. Put her hand on his heart. His hand on his waist. Looking in her wide eyes. Pulling her close to him, he sang

I wanna be with you, come let me kiss you
And I don't mean a peck on the cheek
Girl, tonight I'm makin' up for lost time
I hope you got a good night sleep

I ain't gonna rush it, girl you're gonna love it
'Cause I intend to do it right
But I'll go ahead and warn ya
This is gonna take all night

She stared on his deep black eyes. Feeling his hard breath on her face. He traced her shoulder with his hand. Coming more close to her. They were now just a breath away from each other.

I wanna be with you, come let me kiss you
And I don't mean a peck on the cheek
Girl, tonight I'm makin' up for lost time
I hope you got a good night sleep

I'm gonna pay attention to every square inch of you
I intend to do this right
But I'll go ahead and warn ya
This is gonna take all night
Yeah, I'll show ya how I love ya
But girl, it's gonna take all night

Singing those last line. He started coming more close to her. Breathing on her neck, leaving her breathless & surprised. Whispering on her ears. Slightly biting it. Thn held her around her waist. Crushing her against his chest. Cupping her face & bending down to fulfill his wish. She closed her eyes to feel it & thn suddenly opened her eyes.

& saw she was having this weird dream.she jumped off the bed. tried to clear her mind.

Thn she realized maan was listening to this song in full volume. & thts why she was hearing it on her dream.

She thanked to her babaji. She was relieved tht it was a weird dream.

Maan was hearing songs in full volume.

He increased the volume more whn he saw tht geet was sleeping.

Geet got up frm her bed & went to the window. & saw him. She glared at him as she would eat him alive.

*to b continued*

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enjoy & do comment

luv,

shabourni
Edited by _maan_ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hey really loved it....but plzzzzzzzz can you update soon. I am desperately waiting for some cute scenes yaar.

and this time need a long update.

Luv You,
Vinithaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
So I just came across your FF...
And I'm in love! 😃

Part 1

Hahaha...Maan seems intrigued by baby Geet already! 😉
He's fast though 😆
Thinking about marriage already, eh?

Please add me to your P.M. list
⭐️


Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Part 2

Now that was adorable!
Maan's possessive of Geet already 😃
I loved the way he was rejecting names for her and then he named her Geet 😳

Their first kiss 😍
It truly was a Kodak moment 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
wooooooooooooooooooooow
i loved the update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
omg i jst loved the song
it was so beautiful
nd da words r so rite
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Part 3

Ooh...Geet is an AYW? 😆
And that too in Singapore? Now that's different... 👏

Well the lovely insults that are coming from her mouth indicate one thing!
And that is Maan 😃




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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Part 4

I see a lot of Greek mythology creeping in here...first Aphrodite, then Cratus, Adonis and finally Eros!😉 😳 😆

They're both at a medical institute...that's my aspiration too 😃

Chota AB 😆 😆 😆

I'm waiting for him to erupt now that Geet has injured him...
Or will she melt him? 😳

Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Part 5

So if Maan is now 21 and Geet is 19, that means he was 2 when she was born!

Wow! He was one clever 2 year old...he staked his claim on Geets at such a young age 😆 😆 😆

If Maan and Geet haven't met in years, it's likely they don't realise the relationship they share!

Interesting...

Can't wait to read more!

Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Part 4

I see a lot of Greek mythology creeping in here...first Aphrodite, then Cratus, Adonis and finally Eros!😉 😳 😆

ya, i had a quiz...& they asked me these mythology things...i couldn't answered...so in frustration i read whole mythology. so iski aasar hai...😆😆😛😆

They're both at a medical institute...that's my aspiration too 😃
me 3.....😃

Chota AB 😆 😆 😆

I'm waiting for him to erupt now that Geet has injured him...
Or will she melt him? 😳
hmmm...thts a surprise....😉 maan's & geet's reaction will b unusual....cause ye log jyada tar jwala mukhi ki tarha fatt jate hai....😛😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Part 6

Still no bandage? 😲

Geet dreaming of Maan as her Prince Charming 😳 😆
Well, they were meant to be...😆




Their tiffs are funny...Maan is so childish trying to annoy her 😃
And Geet's insults! Hahaha....

Please add me to your P.M. list and update asap ⭐️

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