ff(maneet)Cause we Hate each other updt 48 note 54 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh and thanks for the PM...buh i was super fast in reading and commenting😛...was done before i got it the PM even...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
loved their fight...but need a long one nxt time plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
lol dat was too good
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Cause we Hate each other
part 7
by narrator>>>
Geet was about to open the door of his room. But it opened by its own.

"ye darwaza kaise khul gaya ,jadoo" geet to herself.

She peeped her head to the room & saw damini coming towards her with a cart on her hand which was full of geet's stuff.

"waah'maine to adhe se jyada saree saman hi pehkdi." Geet muttered.

She looked for maan but he wasn't there. She looked at damini with questioning eyes.

"he is in bathroom trying to bandage himself" damini answered.

Geet felt relieved but thn went to bathroom to check him. She is a doctor afterall. Helping patients is her main duty. & she was somehow feeling guilty as he was hurt because of her.

The bathroom's door was opened. Geet hesitated to go inside. But no other way'she had to go in.

"ahmm'maan khurana" she called him whn she couldn't see him there.

Thn she saw him standing infront of basin struggling to weep his wound. But he failed as it was on her back shoulder.

He was not wearing anything except his trouser. His bare shoulder was attractive.

Geet gaped at him for sometime thn cursed herself 4 looking at him & having those weird thot. He doesn't worth it.she thot.

"main madad karu?" geet said calmly.

Maan looked at her through the mirror. Geet could see rage in those eyes. She looked at those eyes. They having an eyelock. Geet broke the trance.

Geet walked to him & stared at him. She took the first aid box & took out Antiseptic Alcohol Wipe Towelettes. & pressed one on his wound causing him howl in pain.

"don't touch me" he shrugged. While looking at her through mirror.

"jaise main ise chune ki liye mari jaa rahi hu" geet muttered under her breath. Ignoring him she again started wiping his wound.

He thn turned & grabbed her wrist making her looking at him surprised.

Maan: kaha na apni dikhawa band karo. Mujhe apni chize khud karna aata hai.

. Samjhi tum? Now leave."

Geet: mujhe dikhai de rahi hai ki kitni safai se kar raheho" geet tried to b calm.

Geet shook her head & held him to turn around so tht she could bandage him.

But he was stubborn. He leaned to basin facing her so tht she couldn't weep his wound or could go to his back to bandage him.

"fine" said geet ruefully.

Thn she turned to leave bt a strong grip held her wrist & pulled closer. Maan was smirking.

Maan: haar gayee na.

jab janti ho ki meri aage tumhari nehi chalne wali to larne kyu aati ho'oh I forgot, ye to tumhari fitrat hai. Galti karo thn paschayatap ka chuta natak. U know I don't need ur sympathy. So u can go now. I'm finished with u."

Saying so he left her wrist & indicated her the door.

She followed his gaze thn smiled & turned to him.

Geet: but I'm not finished. Lagta hai tum geet handa ko avhi tak nehi pehchana. Main bolne se jyada karne mein believe karti hu. watch me"

Maan couldn't understand wht was she talking. He stared at her & thn saw her coming closer to him.

& at his disbelieve she hugged him. One hand circled around his neck. Pressing him close to her.her head rested on his shoulder, breathing on his neck.

She again took towelettes & started wiping his wound. This made him come out of shock. He got wht she was doing. He could not let her win. He tried to push her aside. But as much he pushed, she clenched to him more.

She slowly wiped his wound, put antiseptic cream thn bandaged him. He was left surprised. He bend his head in pain & rested on her neck.

She felt her breath & his face on her neck. It tickled her senses. She closed her eyes & thn again opened & resumed her work.

One would say tht they were having a passionate hug. Bt we know wht was tht😉😉

she finished & whispered in his ears
"see maan khurana, i won"
thn left him & room as well, leaving a shocked maan behind.
maan was standing there for sometime as he was spellbound. thn regained his sense...
"avi to tumhe tumhari toufa v dena hai...jeet ka..."
& he smiled wickedly....
😈
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phew...here u go...😳
read & comment...
luv,
shabourni
Edited by _maan_ - 15 years ago
despicable_me thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
i couldn't sent PMs to all of u....i'm so sorry....
i am in hurry.....forgive me.....
maanmishti thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
loved it special the fake hug🤗...anyways it was romantic plz do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
amazing update!! now what is maan up to?? lolz
cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
OMG THAT WAS TOO GOOD
cant wait to read da nxt part
looking forward to see wat maan has got up his sleeve for geet
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Part 6

Great update as always!

I love the way they both constantly try and irk each other 😆 😆 😆

They're fighting like a married couple already... 😉

Favourite dialogues have to be:

"manhole ki dhakkan, tuta bench, atanni'" 😛

"mogambo ki saheli, nakchari, kumbkaran ki matajii'" maan was cursing her also. 😆

"dusht danav, khote, das sar wale ravan'" she continued. 😃

Thanks for the P.M. ⭐️


Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 7

They're constantly at it, aren't they? 😆
Always trying to compete with each other...

I'm glad they're starting to feel affected by each other! 😳
And the hug 😍

I wonder what Maan is planning?

Thanks for the P.M. and continue asap ⭐️

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