ff(maneet)Cause we Hate each other updt 48 note 54

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@anufa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

superb!!!

maan ki entry...cant wait!!!

update sooN!!!!

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@anufa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

awwww....

geet's dream!!!!

superb!!!

update soon....pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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charlie1950

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

oye 😡 tera precap kaun se update mein pura hoga.doin well in pullin our leg😆

Edited by sapnaajay - 15 years ago

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Sireesha

@.sireesha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

wow thats Amazing

Ye Maan bhi na kyo Geet ki neend Kharaab kardi

Ab aage kya hoga?

waiting for the next part

pls continue soon

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Hi

i just read ur fic n its so cute, sweet dear
it seems really intereting story
all updates was awesome, fantastic..............just loved it
Can u plz add me in ur pm list ??????????? plz plz plz plz plz

Luv
Naina

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neahakhan

@neahakhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Hey -maan-
u didnt send me a pm:'(
anyways awesome work.
Continue soon:)

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mehreen.

@mehreen.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Hey...🤗

Lovely update...subconsciously geet knows her prince charming is maan..😆...It was an awesome update I could peek into their life after marriage😉....Btw where is the bandage scene???

Edited by mehreen. - 15 years ago

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Cause we Hate each other

part 6(continue)

by narrator>>>

*flashback continues*

"Excuse me, maan khurana." Said geet, through clenched teeth,

"Excused" maan smirked.

Geet felt very angry bt somehow controlled her anger & said,

"tumhe sunane ka sokh hai woh to mujhe pata hai par tumhe sunne ka prob hai ye aaj pata chala"

"tumne mujhe behre kaha??" maan roared.

"haan, behre hone ki saath saath tumhari dimaag ki batti v fuse ho gayi hai…isiliye sabere sabere saab ki nend kharab karne pe tule huye ho" shouted geet.

" sabera…miss hoshiyarpur bolne se pehle ek baar ghari dekhlo ki abhi sabera hai ya evening ho gaya hai" maan mocked.

Geet turned to look at her clock & saw it was 11 o'clock. God , geet thot. Aab to ye mera class leke chorega.

Geet turned to face him praying her babaji under her breath. To make him an unspeakable for sometime.

"haan, bt it doesn't mean ki tum itni volume se gaana sunoge. Tumhari aaspaas v log rehte hai."said geet.

"jinhe problem hai who apni kaano mein rui dalke so jaye. This is an independent country. Mera marji main jo chahu wo karu." Maan said shortly.

Thn he again increased the volume making geet outraged. Maan stood facing geet his back.

Geet picked up a bengle frm her dresser & pretended to throw it on him.

Bt he suddenly turned & saw her almost throwing things on him.

Maan: 'toh, aab apni track pea a gayii…kya hua ruk kyu gayi? Mujhe marna to tumhara sokh hai na. aree maro na.' annoying geet even more.

Geet: neki aur pooch pooch. Main wo har kaam kyu na karu jiske liye mujhe sunaya jata hai. Ye lo subha subha mujhe sataneka fall."

Geet started throwing things at him. Cursing him loudly.

"manhole ki dhakkan, tuta bench, atanni…"

Maan was taken aback by her behavior. He thot she wouldn't throw thts why irked her more. Thn he started to throw things back. Everything presented in their rooms were transferred frm here to there.

"mogambo ki saheli, nakchari, kumbkaran ki matajii…" maan was cursing her also.

"haannnmmm" she roared.

"dusht danav, khote, das sar wale ravan…" she continued.

Thn rano & damini stoped thm.

*flashback ends*

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

hey people, here's an small update....i thot of finishing the flashback thn starting a new part....i'm working on the next part....will update in some time....