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Posted: 15 years ago

hey

nice part
liked it


keep continue
Thanks for the PM

lots of love .
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice Update.....Loved it.... Waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
congrats for the 3rd thread..........
and that was really a nice update plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
ha ha dadima ab geet ko bhi tease kar rahi hian..wow..!!😆
n yup i've deleted all da pm's..thanx 4 letting me know..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yipee...gr8😉..i always luk forward 2 ur update😃.......dadi n MAANEET 😳mindblowing.....i started 2 read....it ws lovely😳....then dadi n maan cme n their convo lol ....i hid myself in quilt😆...yaar...feeling embaarrass😳.....hehehe...then cover ma ear 2 read d embaarassment part😳😳😳😆😆😆 lol..4 me update ws short😃.....im addict nw 4 longs update...next long walo plzzz.......u doing great job👏...n i simple love ur FF⭐️...cn u plz put recap b4 update...sumtym i get confuse😕😆...wat im reading as u hav reach 3 thread nw👏....waiting 4 more😊........

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Posted: 15 years ago
hello everyone,

hope you are doing great..!!! 😛 alrite, so here we go with the next one. i'm not going to do a lot of bak-bak because of lack of time. i found it difficult to even write this part but somehow managed to squeeze it in between my work. 😃


Part 65

Geet stamped his feet in anger and walked away into the living room. She was about to open the main door when maan came in between her and the door.

"kaha jaa rahe ho geet?" asked maan

"aapko chod ke" said geet furiously.

"woh tum kabhi nahi kar paoge, sapno mein bhi nahi!" said maan confidently.

"accha?" asked geet.

"hmmm!" said maan smiling, he brushed his lips gently to hers and said, "chalo juice pee lo!" and handed over the glass to her.

"nahi! Pehle sorry boliye, mujhe bewakoof kehne ke liye! Aur phir ek puchi!" she said looking away from him.

" tum maa banne waali ho, lekin abhi bhi bacchi ki tarah behave karte ho. Anyways, I'm sorry my love!" said maan and kissed her right cheek.

Geet took the glass of juice and gulped it down in one go. Maan yelled again, "tum pagal ho kya? Aaram se pee lo, geet! kya kar rahi hai". but geet was not listening to him. she finished it and put the glass in his hand.

Maan looked at the empty glass and then her face. "kamal karte ho geet. itni jaldi peene ki kya zaroorat hai?"

"chaliye, mujhe ghar jaana hai!" said geet ignoring his words.

"hmm, pehle mansion jayenge".

They walked into the mansion and went into daadi's bedroom. Daadi was talking to her friend on phone and told her she would call back when see saw maan and geet at the door.

"Come on in, beta" she said smiling.

Maan and Geet sat on the couch beside each other and Daadi walked to the closet to pull a cute little red color heart shaped box. She gave it to geet.

Geet looked at Daadima and took the box slowly. She then turned to see maan. Maan signaled her to open it and see it. She opened the box and found heart shaped diamond earrings. Geet had tears in her eyes.

"Maa, mujhe sach mein iski koi zaroorat nahi hai. main yeh nahi le sakti".

Daadi sat opposite to her and said, "beta, don't you like them?if you don't, then we'll get another pair".

"nahi maa aise baat nahi hai. mujhe yeh pasand hai, lekin shayad mujhe in sab cheezon ki aadat nahi daalni chahiye. Mein shayad iski layak nahi hoon" she said with her voice cracking in between.

Tears rolled down her cheeks. For some unknown reason, she was suddenly shivering and feeling cold. She sat there unable to comprehend her own fears and her eyes and face turned red due to the fear and tears.

Maan slowly put his hand over her shoulder and pulled her closer. Daadi watched her for sometime and then passed her the tissue box. She got up to give her a glass of water, but geet refused it. Daadi spoke up looking at maan, "Maan can you please leave the room for sometime son, I need to talk to Geet alone".

Maan nodded his head and kissed geet on her forehead and left the room , closing the door behind him.

Shimla:

Dev had returned to his suite after a long day of work. He saw Naintara sitting in the balcony with a cocktail and a magazine.

He thought to himself, "iski zindagi mast hai, na kisi ki parwah aur na hi kisi cheeze ka gham".

He walked to her and greeted her, "hello sweetheart!"

"dev, aap aa gaye, mujhe Delhi wapas jaana hai. itni din ho gaye". Dev was shocked to hear her bring delhi into the picture again.

"Naintara tumhe Delhi kyon? Yaha kaam khatam nahi hua, and this place is so beautiful".

"dev aap samajthe nahi hai. itne din delhi se, aur main office se, aur khurana mansion se door rehne se, maan khurana aur savitri khurana dono hume bhool jayenge. Aur hamare property ke share ko bhi bhool jayenge. If we keep meeting them often, then daadima will remember us and leave us some property".

Dev took a deep breath. He wished he had a knife or a sword nearby, to run it down her throat. But, luck favored her this time too. She got away.

"Naintara, I, understand that, but please remember, I have to finish this project. It will take me another 2 weeks. We cannot leave before that, warna bro aur daadiji kya sochenge? Ki ek project bhi theek se complete nahi par paya!"

Naintara was lost in thought for sometime, Dev smirked. He thought to himself, "Naintara, I've made a mistake once, in believing you and following your stupid plan, but not again. Is bar wahi hoga jo main chahta hoon. And this is a promise- Dev Singh Khurana's promise to his wonderful wife, Naintara Rathod Khurana".

After 10 minutes, Naintara said, "haan sahi kaha aapne. Hum 2 weeks ke baad hi jayenge, ya phir jab bhi aapka kaam khatam hoga tab jayenge".

Dev sighed in relief. He said, "I'm going to take a shower, then lets have dinner!" Nainatara smiled and nodded her head. She got up and hugged him from behind and said, "Dev, I love you!"

"love you , too!", he said moving away from her hold and walking into the bathroom.

Khurana Mansion:

Maan walked into the living room and sat on the couch. He was thinking about geet's condition. He knew it had to be related to her family, that's why she was getting hysterical. But, did this happen to her often? This was something he did not know. She never mentioned her family except for once in the conference room. Was there anything she was not comfortable telling him or sharing with him? he thought about it for sometime and called pinky. Only she could answer his questions, since she was geet's good friend cum sister.

Maan called Pinky and waited for her to respond.

Daadima's Bedroom:

"Geet" said daadi softly, "Relax beta, its okay, lets forget about the earrings. Is there anything else, you want to tell me? aapko jo kehna hain keh sakte hai".

Geet shook her head in a "no" and softly spoke, "nahi maa, mujhe batane ke liye, kuch bhi nahi hai".

"aap mujhe "maa" kehte hai na! Now I want you to take it in a literal sense. Lets forget the fact that I'm maan's daadima. For sometime consider me as your mother and tell me anything that you want to. If there are certain things you have not told maan, because of various reasons, then we can discuss them now".

Geet looked at Daadima, who was perfectly calm and had a slight smile on her face. Her smile reflected warmth and trust.

Geet ran to her side and hugged her, "aap mujhse itna pyaar kyon karte hai? mujhe darr lagta hai! maan mere liye itna kuch karta hai, aur maine unke liye kabhi kuch nahi kiya. Unhone mujhe mere parivaar se zyaada pyar karte hai, mujhe mere lakh ghaltiyon ke siva apnaya. Main pregnant hoon, yeh jaanne ke baad bhi, unhone mere bacche ko bhi apna liya. Koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakte hai maa? Aur aap ne mujhe naukri di, is ghar ka bahu maan liya, mujhe yeh gift di, kabhi kabhi main sochti hoon ki shayad main in sab ki layak nahi hoon. Maine aapke liye kuch nahi kiya, phir bhi.."

"geet, love is not a give and take game. Pyaar mein kabhi koi yeh nahi dekta ki tumne mere liye kya kiya ya phir maine tumhare kya kiya. Aur geet, tumhe kis baat ki afsoos hai beta? Tumne koi ghalti nahi ki. Tum agar yeh kehte ho ki maan ne tumhare liye bahut kuch kiya aur tumne maan ke liye kuch nahi kiya. Then you're wrong".

Geet looked at daadi surprised. Daadi handed her a glass of water and waited for geet to drink it.

She slowly made geet sleep in her lap and continued, "jo kaam hum nahi kar paye, who tum itne kam time mein kar dikhayi. You've changed maan into a man who now respects relationships, who has opened his heart to love again and who has begun to smile again. It's all because of you, geet".

"par maa"

"geet, just relax. I know what you are going through. You just focus on your health, job and studies. Leave the rest to us, we'll take care. don't hesitate about coming and speaking to me, if anything troubles you, even if the trouble is maan".

Geet smiled. Daadima smiled too. "so, aap bataeye, how is college?"

"sab theek maa!" said geet feeling a little better.

"geet, aacha ek baat bataeye! Was Maan's proposal romantic enough?", said daadima winking.

"maa, agar propose kare tuo hi pata chalta hai na, romantic hai ya nahi!" said geet laughing.

"what? My dimwit grandson has not proposed to you yet?"


*ahem ahem* that's it people. hope u like it. sorry had to put a little bit of dev-tara in between. well, their story also has to run parallel, now that naintara has her eyes on getting back to delhi.

so go ahead leave your comments. some of you wanted a small recap , i'll do that before the next update. i will not be able to do that today.

thanks a bunch for the patience people. i appreciate it. and i loved all your comments...!!!!! 😃


Soumya


P.S. please ignore any spelling mistakes. i did not have time to re-check the whole update again..!!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
@nihatri: thanks honey.... 😛



@crazzy-girl: nice to know u liked the scene with dadi-maan-geet...!!!!! 😃😃😃😃



@febin: sorry honey, i had promised to do an update in the afternoon, but could not find time..!!! 😭.... thanks for waiting..!! now, getting back to your comments, i'm sorry i'm making small updates these days, cos of lack of time yaar. and i had to stop to create some suspense u know..!!!! 😉😉😉... jokes apart, am so happy u liked the dadi-maan-geet scene. oh yes, true she did not utter the word in front of daadi , else daadi's heart palpitations would have gone up rapidly.😆😆😆...!!!!



@kashndsel4eva: hi honey, thanks ..!!!!! glad u liked it... 😃



@sarita: thanks 😛


@Fatima: thanks sweets, well the next update is up, so u know why maan stopped her, well ur reason is right too...!!!!


@meet premeer: thanks hun...!!!!! 😛



@Dhara: thanks... 😊



@afsha: afsha honey, thanks a ton..!!! yep, maan was angry on daadi for teasing but he had to remove it on geet...!!! safe option u know.... 😆😆😆



@rituka: thanks hun...!!!! 😃



@simzzzzcool: thanks sweets...!!!!! 😛




Soumya

Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@naina: isn't daadi's entry perfect???😆😆😆😆😆😆 thanks honey..glad u liked it so much..!!!



@koolio: thanks sweets, nice to know u liked the update...!!!! 😃....



@sona-rai: thanks dear..... so happy u liked it... i've added u to my PM list...!!!! 🤗



@noor: thanks a bunch...!!!! 😛



@yasu: thanks...!!!



@radhika: thank you!!!!



@sweetscorpio: thank you...!!!! yep , it is embarrassing and daadi did not leave any stone unturned...!!!!! 😆😆😆😆



@myinfactuationz: thanks sweets...!!! 😆😆😆😆



@jennifer: thanks jeny!!!!! 😛


@sweetcherry: thanks a ton...!!!



@sravs: i'm still waiting!!!!!!!! 😲



@shivangi: yep, daadi's cool , isn't she????? 😉



Soumya
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@samijan: ye, after a long time...!!!! nice to see u again...!!! 😃😃😃 thanks a ton..!!!



@Priya: u still fasting haan????? 😉😉😉😉 thanks honey...!!!!!



@lil-desi-goddess: thanks a bunch..!!!!



@blueryu: hey sorry, not much of MAHIIII playing in the background...!!!!! 😆😆😆 well, i guess it will play in the next update



@anufa: thanks honey..!!! she probably did not expect daadi at that point of time, she thought is was maan..... the usual geet...!!!! 😆😆😆



@Maheen: the cute little nok-jhoks between maneet keep them rocking, dont u think/?????? their fights are cute and that helps maintain the essence in their characters...!!!! thanks honey..happy u liked it..!!!



@vika: good to know, my update made u laugh...!!!! 😛, ur right about what maan would do...!!!!




@sumi: hello sumi, thanks a ton, well jaya has already said it...!!!!! a reply to ur message...!!!!! 😃so saves me time..!!!



@zubi: hi zubi, aww sweet of u to pray for me... thanks honey, i really appreciate it..!!! i too hope i can get done with the work at hand... real soon..!!!!!!


@heavens: thanks a ton...!!! noce to know u liked it...!!!! 😛



@shreyasatish: thanks honey


@kirannaryani: thank you...!!!!


@abhi: good to know u finally got the PM';s...!!! and thanks honey..!!!


Soumya
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
happy that geet let out her feeling to daadi
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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