FF: (new) part: INTRO on page99 - Page 57

Originally posted by: minniemouse1988

Awesome FF Mina.....i just read all the parts in 1 day.....really nice! 😃.....plz add me to ur PM list!

Originally posted by: dimpzz

amazing update!
really luved it!
n stupid sasha y is she bak!?!!?!
huh!hate her
n geet shud understand a little na
tat sasha wz wearing d same kind of dress.........
plz plz she shud listen to her!
hope she does........
n d update wz really nyc!
u updated it travelling all over d world! hehehe :P
nyc!
update soooon!
u really stopped at wrong time....n i hope she listens to him n understands!

luv
Navpreet

Originally posted by: -Premeena-

awww a really nice update m glas it was loonnnnnggggg...

loved the cake part with maan and geet absolutely sexy

loved geeet to lick her lips rather than let him kiss her...LMAO..!!

but a bad ending.. omg no misunderstanding please..!!!

please please please...!!

update soon... amazing one..!!

Originally posted by: Tishuu

minaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

yh kya kiyaa???

ok firstly - u around the whole world!!!!!!!! kya baat haii

u must totally luv us - to do us this much updating

we luv u tooooo :D

achaa on the commenting side

i luved how they were getting sooo close

but to say truth i kind of knew there was a hitch cumin along - when geet started having 2nd thoughts and decided to tell him her feelings if he sed i luv u agen

it was sooooooo - not magical - dnt get me rong - but i dunoooo it was the nyc way of her realising - perhaps my stupid head

but yhhh ending mein kya huaaaa

haiiiiii

i wonder how he's gna patao her

hai rabba

n sashaa

omg im gna kill her

Originally posted by: Mina H

thanks for liking it, and yes for sure you added and omg u read the whole 23 parts in one day... thanks a tons!

geet turns around in total anger, tears are still rolling down her checks

maan: gosh i hate to see you cry and i cant believe i am always for reason for crying

maan takes out a hanky form his back jeans pocket

maan: plz take it...

geet takes it form his hand and throws it on the floor

maan: everytime humarey beech mein dooriyan khatam hoti hai, toh phir se ah jati hain... weneva we get close we again go apart

geet just sits there sutnned at what maan is saying... "dont believe him geet he is a lier..."

maan: i dont why this always happens with us...

maan picks up the hank form the floor and again gives it to geet, but geet takes it and throws it away in complete anger

maan: im now ur angry, and you have all the rite to be mad at me

geet gets up form the bed and stands by the small window and maan follows her and puts his hands on her shoulders and makes her turn around bt geet jerks his hand away and stares studborn outside the window

maan: plz geet i.. i love you, and i reali mean it... woh sasha ne tumhara jissey matching dress pana ta dats why i got confuse... i thot it was you, but it turned out to be sasha...

the anger in geets eyes went away "does he reali mean dat?"

maan: you now how much i hate sasha... i cant even stand her, then why would i wana hug her?

geet turned around to face maan, maan was about inches away form her

maan cuped geets check: i now you must be furoius at the thougth, of me cheating you again, bt that is something that i can never ever think of... ever in my life, I just always and always wana be with

geet at that point had forgotten all of her anger towards maan... all of her misconceptions

geet just hugged maan back really really tigthly with hands warped around his neck and maans hand also went to geet lower back, slowly moving them up and down

geet quitely wishpered into maan's ear: im sori

maan: sori... for wot i should be sorri

geet: no im sorry for thinking worng about you... i thot... geet signhed i thot so much ganda about you, for which im sorri

maan held geet even tigther in his arms: im just glad you gave me a chance to talk...

geet: im glad as well

geet smiled and let go of maan

maan: there is something i want to say...

geet: hmm

maan: but not here... come with me

maan takes geet back to the party

maan sees atlas the cake has settled down most of the guests are cleaned and sum are getting washed out

devky and nedi came

dev: arey we were wondering you guyz went

maan: yea forget that i have sumthing reali important to say

adi ah-ha-ha: wot

maan goes to the center of the hall and gets everones attention

maan: plz everybody... i need your attention as i want everyone to listen whoem i love... yes you guyz herd it rigth, i maan singh khurana short for MSK... has very hardly and deeply fallen in love

dev: really dude... u sure?

maan: dev i have never been this sure, as of now, i am in love, and i finaly now understand how you and pinky or adi and neha react one another... just becuase it is simply love... simple love, inocent love, really love, sweet love, caring love, specail love, warm love, -maan smiles- just love love... and i am one of that lucky person to feel love, and to be loved

adi ah-ha-ha: tell us the name already

dev: yea maan, who is it?

pinky: yea plz tell already

maan laughs: it is none other then....

maan points his hand out... suddenly the spot ligth goes on her

maan: GEETTT... meri geet, maan ki geet

geet blushes and slowly walks towards to maan, but she is about to trip (idk, bt she is clumy i guess) and lands in maans embrace

and everyone whistels and whoots maaneet, geet gets reali embraced and burries her head in maan's shoulder and neck, maan is holding her form her wasit

devky and nedi get shocked

pinky: but you both hate each other...

dev: but i guess love can take over hate, but geet... mera mutlub geet bhabhi

geet holds maan tigther, she just can't face anyone at the moment

dev: maan said so much about you... sooo

pinky: soo you also have to say something

maan: yeaaa, geet kuch bolo...

geet finaly lets go of maan and smiles, everone can tell she is blushing deeply as her checks are red as cherry

geet: wot do i say...

pinky: something you feel about maan...

geet: i...ummm, i feel... i uhhh, mein maan se

geet holds maan's hand with fingers crossed

geet: love youu

maan smiles: i love you too

sudden;ly the dj puts a slow dance number on, and everone starts dancing with thier parterns

maan brings geet closer to him: i never want any sort of misunderstanding ever came in between us

geet puts her hand on maans shoulder: me too

LOL i dont now why i wrote... nways i dont reali now wot kinda a misunderstanding are cuming so plz give me ideas... and yea if there wont be any idea, then i migth just end this ff in the next update...

so plz comment wid ideas! thanks