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saying that geet had drozed off nt nwing wot the futer had for her in store

maan and dev went back to thier hostel

maan: yaar another two more hoursssssss

dev: yaar im nervous... wot if sumthin goes wrong...

maan: if u worry dat much den sumthing will go wrong... like dude just chilll

dev: i will try too

maan: and promise me u wont talk

dev: wot

maan: yea this party dat party... like wot party man it was like as if u shit in ur pants or sumthing u shouldnt b dat easi in a relationship... like luk at me have a blast and den leave a blast

dev: leave a blast...

maan: yea either txt it over or emails or simply just avioding helps as well

dev: maan man

maan: its true, hey luk at the time its 9:15 i think we shall leave to pinky room

dev: bt luk at the time no boys allowed after 9 o clock

maan: stupid rulezz, call pinky and den lets go

dev tryed callin bt no one picked up, dev got worried "i hope pinky is fi9"

maan: yea it 9:30...

just then a maan's fone rings its pinky number "helo pinky yaar kidar hoo?

sasha: it me sasha,

maan: sasha

sasha: yea maan pinky is nt feelin well and the wardan and me have taken her to the clinic and she is tellin u and dev to get sum geet 4om the station

maan: bt how will i reconizne her

sasha: i dont maan... i have to go bye

maan told dev wots happening, dev got worried "maan do me a favor and get geet 4om the station and bring her to the clinic, i ll be dere, okay

maan: bt i dont nw how she will luk?

dev in huri: she will luk like a gurl... k bye

and dev felt

maan: a gurl, thanks dev for the info... yaar i beta nt miss my party for this geet girl

and wid a face maan left for da station

on the other hand geets train had reached 15mins earlier and she was wating on the paltfrom, it was dark wid no sign of any person just a cheap shop guy

geet thot to herself 'yaar pinky plz ao jo, kadir hoo'

maan luked at the time in his car it was 9:45... 'yaar in 15mins her train will arrive, den ill leave her to the clinic which will take, another 15mins... meaning ill reach da party by 10:15 gr8, late cuming is always a fashion for MSK!

maan step on to the paltform and thoted 'nw where is dis geet gurl... well i guess dere is another 5mins to go' just maan's eyes gazed on a tensioned gurl who was sitting on the bench, who seemed she was about to cry 'wonder wots up wid her, hmmmm, seems like she eloped... and must be waiting for her bf to show up, bt he stood her up... so clasic and boring...." just den while maan was lukin at her, her tear droped 4om her eyes to her checked followed by her lips, maan felt reali bad for her so he walked to her

maan: hi

geet luked up wid a teary eyes and didnt answer

maan thinked: poor gurl cant even talked.. she is dumb also nw dats sumthing new twist to a sad love story, mayb she is deaf as well... dats y she didnt reply cuz she didnt understand wot i said...oh godd

maan in a loud voice: I FEEL REALI BAD FOR U, I CAN DROP U HME IM JUST WAITING FOR SUM1, DEN I LEAVE U HME

geet: why r u shouting?

maan luked at her wid a smile: u can talk, and also listen as well

geet luked at him as he was sum lunatic,maan understood her expersion veri well, maan took a step back and luked at his time... it was 9: 10

maan again in a loud lousy voice: god where is this trainnnn

geet luked at him wid the same expersion

geet thoted to herself: geet yeh toh koi pagal lag raha hai, b4 he would does sumthing lets go... bt where will i go? wasey lukin 4om his sene of dressin he doesnt luk pagal, bt who nws baray sher baray pagal?! geet looked at her watch.. it was 9:15 and she worried more, even maan worried for his party... maan got tried of standing so he sat down next to the gurl

maan: delayed train...na

geet again luks at himand just nods her head and thinks 'yeh to picha par gaya hai, baba g save mee'

just den maan's fone rings it pinky number: helo

dev: hey maan, did u get geet

maan: nt yet, how is pinky feelin nw

as geet herd pinky voice, she knew the person sitting next to him had to be dev

dev: she is beta nw... bt dude if she will nw dat geet is still nt wid u, she will spaz and make her sick again, find her

maan: im tryin to, bt thier is literly no one is here...

dev: idk find her

dev hangs up

geet: ur dev naa, im geet, for this long time i was waiting for you, well for pinky bt i jus herd she is nt feelin gud, dats y she is late, i was so nervous (geet says all this in one breathe)

maan: thank god ur geet, i was so worried dat i mite miss my party

geet: party

maan: yea party... party for studyingg

geet luked at him wid wide open eyes

maan: its how we study in mumbai okayy... nw lets go

maan and geet both r siting in his car, maan starts to drive reali fast

geet: dev ap toh bhoot taz gari chala ta hai, can u plz slow down

maan nt caring to she was saying he blasts of car's buffer and da song dats playin is break ur heart by tio cruiz (if u guyz havent herd u mite want to its reali gud and it kinda goes wid my ff maan)! maan driving reali fast was makin geet sic and her head wid da loud music

geet starts to think: pinky likes him like he seems so different 4om wot pinky had described dev, he looks to carefree and -- just den she spots a dog in the middle of the road and maan was busi in changin the song he doesnt see the poor animal

geet: DEVVVVV

by screaming his name she turns the straing wheel towards the left she had made dem go 4om the road to a bumpy road which BANGED into a tree

maan: WOT DA FF--

geet: u totally dont nw how to drive, is dis how u drive u were about to run over a poor animal

maan steps out of his car: my car my beauty, my baby omg you (he luk in total anger and points at geet, geet gets scared)

maan walks reali close to her dat geet could feel his breathing on her...'how dare u do this... like

geet: dev likan dog...

maan: kya dog... an dim nt dev im maan

geet: tabi main socha hoon dat ur so different 4om pinky and pinky kya no gurl could fall in lov wid you

maan luks in angey dat his hands start to shiver in anger: how dare you 1st u break my car and nw u insult mee

geet luks at maan as he has closed his hand titghly into punch and relizes dat if wasnt a gurl he would have hit her along time ago

both dont say anything other den both luk deep into each others eyse

maan thinks: wot a shameless women, kasi gur rahi

geet thinks: yeh kitna besharam hai, wot is he tryin to prove, dat i was worng

just den maans fone rings again and he goes and picks it up

maan: its pinky wot should i tell her

geet: tell her we are on the way

maan: u will lie to ur bff?

geet: well she is nt feelin well and i dont want her to get sick knowing dat im lost in the middle of now-where... nw which sounds beta... nw pick up the fone already

maan: hi,

pinky: maan where is geet

maan: she is rite

wid dat maan gives da fone to geet

geet: hi pinky

pinky: im so sori i couldnt cum i suddenly fell reali sick im soo sori

geet: no need to be sorri

pinky: acha tell me kitney dar hai?

geet: umm we are still at the station....... as sum of my luggage still has to cum in

pinky: okay cum quickly i cant wait to c u

maan: ur a gud lier

geet: again should i have told her dat maan cant drive so we are stuck in the middle of nw-where...

maan: this is nt the middle of nw-where i was born her and i nw da ways around

geet: u were born jungle??

maan: no i mean i borned in mumbai so i nw the ways nw follow me

geet rolled her eyes

maan: just follow

geet: i would follow if you would lead...

maan luked at her in anger and started walking and geet followed leaving her luggage in the car she had a purse wid her

about 7min geet: how much more longer im tried and hungry

maan didnt reply and thinked: cuz of this stupid gurl i missed my party and she doesnt even nw how im am, veri gurl wants to fall in love wid me... after all i am MSK mazak tori hai

'maan plz' geet sat down on the ground

'kya hai' maan said turnnin back

geet: im tried i cant walk any futher...

maan: luk its another 10mins walk den we hve reached my house

geet: ur house i thot we r goin to the hostel (geet luked @him wid suspisuos eyes)

maan: luk it we would have walked to the hostel it would have taken us more den 45mins, bt my house is close 4om here and its another 10more mins walk... and dont luk at me like dat, my dadi lives dere and plus u think ur dat hot dat MAAN SINGH KHURANA would wana do sumthing wid u... like NO WAYS

geet felt reali embrased and mad to wot he said: well i cant walk

maan: u should have thot about dat wen u crashed my car

geet: and u should hve payed more attention to ur drving makin sure u wouldnt hve raned over a poor inocent dog- geet snapped rite back at him

maan didnt knw wot to say nw and he started walking geet felt sacred so widout much to do she got up and started walking behind again

soon dey both reached maans house, and geet was shocked to see such a big and beauitful house

maan luked at her and saw her expersion and maan smiled in proud

maan: chalay?

geet: hmmm

both entered the house geet saw da perfect kinda a interior and perfect funiture which was matching perfect wid the everything... like evrthing was so perfect

dadi: maan beta tum... like nw... wot a surprise hope evrything is fi9 and whos this maan... i neva thot u would bring a fully cothed gurl to this house im so proud of you

maan: dadimaa plz this is geet she just came 4om hosiyapur and

dadi cut of maan saying: and she will be leving here i have no problem...nt at all

maan: no dadimaa are car broke down(saying dat he luked at geet and geet luked at him) and so instead of goin to the hostel i brought her here cuz this was closer

dadi: well w/e geet im reali happy to c u

geet: same here dadimaa... ummm mera mutlab hai--

dadi cut geet off as well: u can call me dadi i dont mind at all

geet smiled and dadi smiled as well, and all this was makin maan sick

maan: im goin up to my room and then we will go on another car and get ur bags and leave for the hostel

dadi: go... where go

maan: hostel... i just said

dadi: no u will stay here for the nite it is already 11:00

geet: likan

dadi: likan wikan kuch bhi nhai

geet: par dadimaa

dadi: geet dont say anything nw, and wot happened to ur clothes

geet didnt notice bt her clothes were a total mess after walkin in da jungle

maan is a quite voice says: about time u noticed how messy ur clothes had gotten

dadi: wots this wispearin happening in my house, maan u nw i dont like wen people talk low, nt is it is rude manners bt veri indecent as well

maan: dadimaa im nt a kid anymore i knw dat

dadi: if u nw dat, den y do u do it??

maan: dadimaa im goin

dadi gave maan a stern luk and maan said: i m goin to my room

geet &dadi started laughing

maan: wots soo funi??? huh???

geet and dadi together say: nuthing

maan: god womenssssss

and maan leaves

dadi: cum geet I'll show u around my house, bt 1st how about u change ur clothes and wear sumthing clean

geet: bt i dont hve any clothes--

dadi: i nw sweety, lets c u cant wear any of my clothes... as they are all sarees and too big how about u wear sumthing of maans

geet: maans??

dadi: yea dont worii, how about u go and take a shower and ill bring his shorts and a t-shirt

so dadi pushes geet into a room nexts to maan and brings her the clothes and sends her to the shower

maan in his room: god my party.... damm my party

maans fone rings it is pinky cells maan is anger shuts his fone down

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