Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 13

Hello shello..yellow..all my darlings suffering from Maneet blues?! 😆 😆

Without further ado..here is an update.

Okay..so I won't bring people here..only Maneet..cuz I don't feel like any interruptions abhi..hope uguys don't mind

Maan in the flight

He was staring out the window when he felt a rustle of a dupatta..
He closed his eyes and let himself feel the sensation...

MAan- Geet...

Air hostess- Sir...

MAan- Geet..

Air hostess- SIR!!

Maan- haan..What?

AH- Would you like to drink something?

MAan(thinks)- Abhi toh alag hua hoon..abhi se hi...MAan..have a whisky and go to sleep..so that you can dream

He orders whisky and AH goes

Geet at outhouse

She's in the kitchen..where she remembers how Maan's hand got burnt..She decides to make PAsta for herself..

She doesn't eat it..

Geet- pata nahi unhone kuchh khaya hoga ya nahi..baad mein khaalongi..abhi I don't feel like eating

She decides to go to office

Has a very busy day of work..and comes back home

Geet- Dadima!!

Dadi- Kya hua Geet?

Geet- Dadima..MAan ka phone?

Dadi- Geet..MAan trips pe phone kam karte hain..he's too busy

Geet- maine socha..

Dadi- Koi nahi..HAve something and go to sleepyou must be tired

Geet is thoroughly disheartened and says no to food

Dadi- Geet..MAan humara kya karenge agar he got to know you haven't had dinner..iska andaaza hai aapko?

Geet- Dadima..please..I had food a couple of minutes back in office..I'm not hungry at all

she lies, kisses Dadi who holds her back

Dadi- Bete..HE will be okay

She smiles a little and leaves

Geet goes back home and takes a quick shower,getting into her night suit she falls asleep

Maan has been trying to call Geet..but it was coming unreachable

MAan- PAta nahi Where she's kept her phone..into what DEEP recesses of HELL from where it's torturing me by not getting connected
I wonder if she's even eaten anything..Knowing her..she wouldn't have

It's 4 am and Geet's hone is vibrating..She picks up

Geet- Hello
MAan doesn't say anything...for the overwhelming love he's feeling that time

Geet- MAan...

Maan- HAan.woh..how are you?

Geet -MAan...WHERE ARE YOU? Do you know how worried I have been..EK baar toh phone karna chahiye tha na;...


she waited for his outburst that never came

MAan- Geet..did you eat?

Geet- WOh..how was your meeting?

MAan- Geet..Answer me...did you eat?

Geet- HAan..

MAan- Then why are your hands twitching right now?

Geet- 😲 how do you know?

MAan- ...used to it..you lie so much..

Geet- 😡 Maan..sunane ke liye phone kiya tha..

MAan- Why do you think I called?

Geet- 😳 😳 uh..um...Everything is fine at home..Dadi and Vicky,they are okay..Went to office today and everything going good there too

MAan-...Geet...How are you?

Geet- i'm okay

Maan- hmm..

Geet- Did you eat?

MAan- haan..nahi I didn't get time

Geet- toh Now toh you have time na,..EAT.

MAan- Geet..It's okay..

Geet- Maan..don't make me come out of the phone and make you eat

MAan- I wish you would..(sighs)

Geet(softly)- MAan..please eat

Maan- fine...but we will eat together..go downstairs..

So they have a phone dinner
😳

Not talking much but just feeling each others' presence..even though at a distance..not quite apart
..never quite apart

Geet yawns..

MAan- Geet..C'mon it's quite late..You should sleep..and don't go to office today..take rest

Geet- What will I do at home..?

Maan- Go shopping..take Pinky and Adi with you.. 😆 😉

Geet- YAY..MAtlab..

Maan- whatever makes you happy

Geet- YOu do..but you're not here

Her eyes fill up and

MAan- Geet..nahi..please..Do me a favour?

Geet- Hmm..?

Maan- go upstairs..to my room..

she does..to the closet and opens it..drawer mein se..

MAan- what do you see therE?

Geet- a hanky?

Maan- good..KEep it with you and let it remind you of me

Geet- I don't need reminders

Maan- Geet..If you drop a single tear that I cannot wipe...I will never forgive myself..

she smiles..

Geet- MAan..Goodnight

Maan- Goodnight Geet..aur suno

Geet- ji...

MAan- i love you

Geet- 😲 hmm

They don't talk of the note..Geet doesn't mention it and Maan doesn't either..it's unsaid..and so more poignant for them


the next two days pass with almost the same routine except Maan talks to Geet earlier and they make a pact of sending each other texts whenever the other is eating..

Finally it's time for him to come back

He was expecting Geet to come receive him...but instead other girls greeted him...

Maan rushed away through the crowd..his eyes searching for that one face..among all others...who was standing distant..away from the crowd..

Their eyes met and their hearts stopped..

MAan rushed to her..and just gathered her into his arms..not saying anything..not that she was expecting to hear anything

She hugged him tight...never wanting to let go...

They broke apart..and sat in the car..

they held hands- this time never letting go..this time..not allowing anything to come in between..


Okay..

I tried to make it sweet...so that..our deppy mode comes to an end..

Hope you guys liked it.!!

Love you all

lovely update, loved the phone dinner, it was soo well written that i had a huge smile whilst reading that part... please do continue soon and thanks for the pm!~

Awesome update!! Aww it was really sweet!! The phone dinner was also very nice...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon

Such a sweet update .. definitely brought some relief after the emotional turmoil of the last few days!!

wooow.... its really nice ya... Loved it... so sweet... both caring for each other... the extent of their will really make me go mad.. Phone dinner idea was nice... please continue soon..

Hi,

so sweet!!!!

superb....but it was shorT!!!

update sooN!!!!

wonderful update geeta.... lovbed it...

"Maan- Geet..If you drop a single tear that I cannot wipe...I will never forgive myself.."

what a dialogue!!!!!!!

It was really a sweet update

Both knws each other so well that hey can catch their lie also Atlast Maan is back n both will be happy now

sweet update

loved them having phone dinner it was sooo sweet

cont. soon