Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 15

GEEET
awesome chapter Girl
sorry for this short comment have to study

this is for YOU dear



batao kaisa laga

aw
that was such a nice update, really sweet and deep lol
cant wait for more now
do continue soon

Maheen xx

aww its good to read a caring sweet maneet update!! this weeks episode have been soo sad .. nice to have a change of emotions regardin maneet!! i loved it maan n geet are jst soo in love and meant to be together!! it was all well written and i'm glad their separation is over!!! 😊

Another rocking chapter in Geet aur Maan ki Prem Kahani!!

Awsome job!!!

Can't wait for more!!

cheers!

Khushi

lovely update.....romance in the air.... waiting for next

Hi,

Guys..

I'm so so glad I could make you feel better about it all!!

ALso..I would LOVE some suggestions..about what you want to read..and how can I make it better...

Please feel free!!

also..I know you will one day murder me for not replying to you all personally..except on random moments..

Again,..I apologize...I know that's quite rude of me and I'm so sorry..

I love you

Okay..here is the next update!

MAan and Geet ar ein the car..holding hands.

Slowly, they look at each other..as if drinking in each others' sight again..as if not three days but a century has passed since they saw each other..as if Maan didn't see her picture every day or Geet didn't read his note and kept that rose close to her every where she went.

Geet shyly broke the eye-contact

MAan- Nahi geet..Please..Aaj nahi

Geet looks up..

She comes close to him and kissed him on the cheek...blushing all the while

MAan smiles and doesn't say anything

They reach home..still hands held together..(ab nahi chhodenge)

Go to the mansion where Dadi and Vicky are waiting

MAan goes to hug Dadi and Vicky..taking Geet with him

Vicky- Bhai..Won't you leave her hand?

Maan- NOpe..Not now..not ever

Vicky- But..

Dadi- Vicky bete..Let it be..
MAan..you go to the outhouse- you deserve it.. 😉

MAan blushes

Maan- Dadi..we can stay..of course..have dinner together

Geet- ji Dadima

Vicky- Nahi nahi..go you guys..ME and Dadi were anyways going out on a date

He winks at Dadi and the two of them send our love-birds off to the outhouse

Geet- Maan..Go freshen up..and I'll set the table for dinner

Maan was hungry..but..not for food..ahem ahem..

He said okay and went upstairs to the room, where after getitng ocmfy in his jamas and vest, he lit candles

(okay..guys I loved yday's room when Geet was sitting on the bed..so the atmosphere is like that)

and then went downstairs..

Geet- what took you so long?

Maan- if you thought that was long..you have no idea what you're in for...

( CUrtesy CHUCK AND BLAIR..Gossip Girl)

Geet blushed and sat down..as Maan glared at her when she had tried to serve

They ate..
Raajma-chawal

Maan- Geet..wow..this is simply amazing

Geet- haa..of course it is..You're not the only good cook in this house Mr Khurana..
how was your trip

MAan- How do you think? I had meetings all day long and I couldn't sleep at night..all because of you

Geet- What did I do?

MAan- I closed my eyes I thought of you..I opened them, I saw you..You drive me CRAZYY

Geet- Haha..Says the man who wrote a POEM that gave me sleepless days and nights

Maan- ohh..woh..main..

Geet- Chup...bilkul chup..Ab kha lijiye

Maan smiled and ate..

finishing dinner..

He picked her up and took her upstairs..

Geet- arre..MAan..samaan..

MAan silenced her with a look

he lay her gently on the bed
and sat where her feet were

Geet- Maan..I missed you..so much..

Maan-I missed you more

Geet- I don't think that's possible..if you did..i wonder how you're alive still

MAan- I managed..

Geet- hmm..woh toh dikh hi raha hai..
LEt's stop being al melodramatic..I want to say something to you

Maan- Hmm..bolo

He caressed her cheek

Geet- woh..main..kehna chahti thi ki..

Maan- hmm..ki...

MAan kissed her cheeks

Geet- woh...ki...main aapse..

MAan- haan Geet...

Geet pushed him away

Maan- kya hua?

Geet- Aap sun nahi rahe!!

MAan- Geet...YOu are not saying anything!

Geet- I love you!

Maan's eyes filled..

Geet cupped his face

Geet- I love you Maan..more than I ever thought was possible..I love you..

MAan got up and walked away

MAan- Geet..No one has ever..loved me so much..or told me...
you did both...Main..

Geet- shh...you don't have to say anything..

He came back..and laid his head on her lap..

She just let him lie there..in silence..let him feel her love..while she felt his.

okay..that's it..

Hope you like it!!

love to all

Ur last line took my heart away...she let him lie there...in silence..she let him feel her love while she felt his....remarkable.....loved it....please update soon