New Mayur ff: in luv twice?? chap 5 pg17 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Whts wrong With adi ?😕😆 Continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
just hated that adhi
omg
nupur going to london
exciting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
It's AWESOME!!!!!! Do continue soon and be sure to PM me when u do!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
nice update
feeling sad fr nups.....
waiting fr mayur meeting
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
nice ff
read both the parts
continue soon
and do add me to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗
Conitnue soon and PM me.
really like your FF
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: smilesonyourway

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Conitnue soon and PM me.
really like your FF

sure
thnx 4 likin it
luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

hey guys
here is the 3rd part
if u 4got de story plz refer to de last part on pg 10 ;)
nxt day
N:maa kia aap ne di se baat ki?
M:kis aare main beta?
N:mere london jaane k baare main maa
M:nahi
N:par mujhe jaana hai
M:tm wahan jaa k kia karogee nupur?
N:maa wahan pe ek bht achi ummm... scholarship... nahi mera matlab uni ki offer hai
M:diaaaa... kidhar ho?
D: ji maa
M: nupur kehrahi hai k usse london main kisi achi uni ki offer mili hai
D:UNI???
Nupur gave dia a look dt meant 'di plzz i shared wid u dun tel maa she wont let me go'
D; haan toh koi ho gi maa jaane do usse
N:thnk...
D:<interrupting> phle tum meree saath chalo aur mjhe university dkhao
N:umm sure
D:maa hum abhi aaye
M:achha
In the room
D:nups meri jaan m nt sure mujhe tmhe yun iss tarah akele jaane dena chahye
N:di iss main kia bura hai
D:nupur tm janti ho tm kitni sensitive ho aur adi k incident k baad ur more weak a vulnerable target 4 ppl m scared 4 u
N: di di di relax m gona b f9 trust me
D: r u sure??
N: more than anyything
jst den sameer comes running
S:maasi naani ne bola k tum jaarahi ho
N:sameer maasi ko thora sa kaam hai wo kuch din main aajayegi
S:pakka?
N:umm.. haan
after a few days de preparations, admission etc is done nupur leaves 4 de airport
At the Airport
N:bye maa by di bye sameer
D:dekhlo nupur mat jao
N:di ab kaisay mur(turn) sakti hun
S:maasi mat jao
N:arre rote nahi kiddo ye dekho maasi tmhare liye chocolates laayi hai
S:maasi mujhe chocos nahi tum chahye
N:maa plz i cant take more of dis plz u guys stop crying tum log mujhe rote hue bye kahoge??
D&S&M: bye nupur
N:bye
she leaves n reaches in london
from dere she takes a taxi n goes to the hostel where she is supposed to stay
she unpacks, freshens up n den leaves for the beach she wanted to visit from a long tym
sitting dere n thinking abt her lyf bought tears into her eyes bt she wiped dem off thinking dat she should make a new beginning n so she gets up n starts to leave while usng facebook on her mobile she dznt see the person walking in front of her with a book in his hand n dey collide into each other nupur closes her eyes n whn she opens them she finds herself in de arms of a mascular guy n staring into the most brown n intense n deep eyes she ever saw n all that comes from her mouth is
N:Wow.....
thats it
i knw pretty long n boring
anywz comments/criticism always welcme :)

Edited by mayurian-artian - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Hey dear
after long time u updated ur FF
it was lovely update- not boring at all
so now nups is in London
awwwwwwww mayur first meeting was veryyyyyyyy nice- btw the guy was maynk na-.LOL

good update - keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
wow awesomee part

loved it

continue soon

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