New Mayur ff: in luv twice?? chap 5 pg17 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
part 1 was awesum!
luvd Mayur's intros!
thnx 4 d pm!
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys here is de part 2 of dis ff
so here it goes
Adi n nupur leave 4 celebration of deir 1 yr anniversary of deir relationship as adi is rich he has planned
a luxurious surprise 4 her
it was in a garden wid red n white rose petals everywhere n a candle lit in de middle of a table n a white table cloth
n "i luv u nupur" printed on it n like a perfect gentleman he takes her 2 a table n deres an orchestra playing behind after de food
dey dance in de moonlight an hour passes n eventuallyy its tym 4 nupur 2 go he drops her 2 her homen returns 2 de same place changes
de table cloth n dis neew one is pink n "i luv u shalini" is written on it n he puts a new candle pink in colour
n he leaves 2 pick his next date he brings shalini n dey have deir food n dey start dancing unlike nupur who enjoyed de peace in dancing
shalini started talking
S:i luv u aditya
A:i luv u 2 jaan
S:tum kabhi mujhe dhoka to nahi doge na?
A:kabhi nahi shaloo tumhare ilawa main kabhi kisi k bare main thodi na soch sakta hun
S:promise karo
A:promise baba
n dey continue dancing
after an hour he drops shalini 2 her home n continues de same process wid a few more girls n leaves 2 his home 4 a gud night sleep
Same tym at night Mayank is sleeping wid a frown on his face as dere is sum1 whos face he cant see wait!! its a girl wid a dupatta blowin on her face n at any angle its completely impossible 2 c her face
God wat a perfect figure wat awesum hair so perfect such creamy arms
suddenly mayank wakes up sweating as if he had a bath
Mayank inhales a long breath n slowly exhales thinking abt his dream it wz so.... he couldnt find a word 2 explain his dream or his situation at dat tym
he exhales a few more breaths n den lays down n goes back 2 sleep
A few more months have passed n adi invites nupur 4 anoder date nupur feels very excited even though its de 3rd date of de week
yet again after having food dey r sitting on de swing nupur in adis arms n staring at de stars nupur suddenly luks at her watch
N:adi i should leave bohat der hogayi hai
A:chalo main tumhe drop kardeta hun
N:nahi adi mai chali jaoongi gi u take care
A:take care jaan
after nupur leaves
A:thnk god wo chali gayi baal baal bach gaye kisi bhi waqt sophia aati hogi
n xactly according 2 him in 5 minutes sophia entered n hugged him
S:hey baby hw r u?
A:hey jana m gr8 after seeing u
S:aww.. luv u
A:luv u 2 jaan
S:jaan aaj main tumse pehli baar kuch maangne jaarahi hun kia tum mujhe wo doge?
A:ofcourse tumhare liye to jaan bhi haazir hai
S:nahi mujhetumse ek promise chahye
Adi mentally sighed he knew dis was coming all de girls he dated continuously asked him dis queastion he was sick of dis wuestion
A:bolo jaan<he said faking a smile>
S:promise karo tum mujhe kabhi bhi chodk nahi jaoge
A:ofcourse jaan i would never leave u
A voice from behind him said"ya u should hope nt"
Adi n sophia turn around 2 find nupur in tears
A:Nu..Nupur
N:haan adi main
S:wait? tum ho kon?
N:will u shut up 4 a moment<referring 2 sophia>
turning around 2 adi" she screamed"hw could u do dis adi maine itni mushkil se apne aap ko ek mauka diya tha u knw wat asdi? thnk u soo much k tumne mujhe phir se ek baar yakken karwadiya k duniya ka har mard eksa hi hota hai" n she burst into wat seemed lyk a non-stop ocean of tears
Adi went 2 nupur n held her by her shoulders she jerked him off n slapped him moved 4 ward n took her mobile n left without uttering a word
She went home in an state of shockn as soon as she reached home she collapsed into a chair n fainted n de only thing she heard b4 fainting was her mom n di screaming her name
NM and dia rushed 2 nupur n sprinkled sum water on her face thus reviving nupur
n when nupur opened her eyes her mom n dia were shocked nupurs eyes were blood red thus clearing it dat she had crying continuously 4 a long tym
she sat up n again burst into tears
N:m.mom d...di he cheated on me usne mujhe dhoka diya
NM & Dia immediately understood her situation
nupur continued speaking" itni mushkil se maine apn aap ko ek mauka diya"
NM & dia hugged her n consoled her n put her 2 sleep
in de night
NM's door opened n Nupur entered
NM:kia baat hai beti? itni rraat ko?
N:mom mujhe london jaana hai
NM:par kiun
N:taaki main adi ko bhula sakoon maa
NM:dekhti hun beta main kal dia se baat kark decide karoongi ab tu kaak jaak soja
N:ji maa
Nupur leaves n after sum tym dia goes 2 nupurs room n peeks in n sees nupur curled up in a ball in a corner of her room her head buried in her chest n her arms hugging her legs
sitting dere lifelessly dia's heart wrenches at de sight of her sister like dis she goes in n puts a hand on her shoulder
Nupur luked up
N:di mere saath kiun? kiun di?? kiun???? ........ n she burst into another ocean of tears dia hugged nupur while nupur
clutched dia tightly
D:bas meri jaan bas aur nahi meri jaan aur mujhe ek baat batao tum apne itne precious aanso kisk liye baha rahi ho
us aditya k liye nahi jaan he's nt worthy 4 it
N:main kai karoon di main khud ko rok nahi sakti
D:rok sakti ho nupur yaad rakho tum kuch bhi karsakti ho akhir tum dia bhushan ki behen ho
Nupur burst out laughing dia felt so happy n relieved to c her laughing
N:acha di ek baat poochoon?
D:haan bolo jaan
N:di mujhe london jaana hai??
D:nupur london???
N:haan london
D:par kiun?
N:taaki main adi ko bhula sakoon
D:aur maa
N:maa se main baat karchuki unhon ne kaha k aapse baat karrkbataeingi di plz mana mat kijiyega plzz di mujhe aditya ko bhulane k yehi ek mauqa hai
D:acha nupur
N:thnk u so much di
dats it guys
i knw its pretty senti bt dis part was pretty important
ill cont soon InshAllah
anywz plzzzzz comment/criticize
n plz press de like button
luv
Fiza

Edited by mayurian-artian - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
i didnt get u =/
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
awwwwwww i felt sad for nupur
us adi ko tou main.........

accha he hua- Nupur k liye myahank hai na.........

now i'm waiitng 4 mayurs meeting.

nice update fiza

update next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
awesome update lov
can't wait mayur meeting
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
thnk u thnk u thnk u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: fariaa70

awwwwwww i felt sad for nupur
us adi ko tou main.........

accha he hua- Nupur k liye myahank hai na.........

now i'm waiitng 4 mayurs meeting.

nice update fiza

update next part soon

thnx farii 4 likin it
luv
fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
tapar nhi punch kerna tha....
lovely update ....n continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
awesome update fiza amazing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
woah whts with adi..serial dater😕 ..but gr8 update!!

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