New Mayur ff: in luv twice?? chap 5 pg17 - Page 10

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part 2.. painful....
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guyss... im pretty sure none of you remember the story..

here's a link to the previous part :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1466476/new-mayur-ff-in-luv-twice-chap-5-pg17

Sorry for, well abandoning it in the middle of nowhere 😳

Nupur looks up to find herself looking in into the most brown n intense n deep eyes she ever saw n all that comes from her mouth is "Wow"

Mayank seems to have regained his senses whereas nupur still seems lost.. he coughs a bit to catch her attention and she regains her senses. They both stand up and Nupur mutters a sorry and runs off...

Hostel room:

Nupur meets her new room-mate who seems to be a nice girl yet a wild personality.. they become fast-friends.

Later that night:

Nupur was just thinking about adi n how she trusted him n yet he shattered er into fragments.. when she remembered that guy at the beach and his deep brown eyes.. "wow he sure is handsome... just like he jumped out of a fashion magazine... *sigh* but thats the problem with handsome guys... sb k sb ek jese hote hain" she thought spitefully

Same time in the Boys section of the hostel Mayank was sitting upright and thinking about this strange girl who had the guts to apologize even when it wasnt exactly her fault... Maybe she was new here... thats why she was so mannered... "in a few months she will be like the other girls" he thought spitefully

Next day in college..

Nupur visits the Principal's Office as she was new here

N: Goodmorning sir

P: Goodmorning Ms. *looks down to the papers* Bhushan. Have you had a look around the university?

N: No sir i just arrived.

P: Oh okay well i'll assign one of the volunteer students, I think Mr. Sharma would be an excellent guide to help you get accustomed to this place. n since your semester is yet to start i trust you wont be needing a mentor

N: Thank you sir... n yes i dont need a mentor... Thanks alot

P: Good day Ms Bhushan

N: Good day Mr. Lee

The principal rings his assistant and asks him to call Mayank Sharma

M: May i come in Sir?

P: Why yes Mayank come in.. I've been expecting you. I know you haven't signed up for any volunteering yet i still want you to show around Ms Bhushan. Get her to know the place. and if she needs guide her Ok?

M: But sir... i have my exams coming up. I need to study

P: you and i both know your exams aren't to start till the end of the semester and your semester hasnt even started. Now i have told her you're going to help her with the new place.. Her name is Nupur Bhushan. i trust you will help her out

M: Okay sir.. I'll do it

P: Good

M: May i leave sir?

P: Sure. Good day

M: Good day sir

Out of the office Mayank starts getting annoyed... Now he has to show around a girl... oh how worse could today's day get?

He storms off to the library and tries to find peace within the books... and soon he's relaxed.. he thinks 'i should probably find this girl and get done with this annoying responsibility.. but after history class'

During History Class

15 minutes have passed since the class began and suddenly out of breath nupur rushes in and the professor stops her

Prof: Excuse me Madam? How can you just barge into a class like this?

N: Im sorry sir i lost my way

Prof: Are you new here?

N: Yes sir..

Prof: Where are you from?

N: India

Prof: ohh asian? traditionally late and unpunctual i see

Nupur felt her eyes began to well up when they heard a voice. The principal's voice

P: Mr. Sherman! May i know why the new girl is being taunted

Prof: She's late to class sir

N:(In a timid voice) Sir i lost my way

P: just go take a seat Ms. Bhushan

Mayank however was shocked at seeing Nupur. She was the girl from the beach... n now he had to guide her.. well she didnt seem so bad... Guess it wouldnt be so terrible afterall. His conscience had to remind him to shut up

After the class Mayank goes upto Nupur

M: Hi

N: (Looks upto him and recognition flashes from her eyes) *thinks* "tharki kahika... samjhta kya hai just because i was a lil out of my mind main iske peeche lagjaugi... uff idiot monkey" *says* Umm hello

M: im your guide here... Ill help you get accustomed to this place.

N:*thinks* "ohh toh ab ye mujhe guide krega.. books k bahir dunya nazar ni aati har aati jati larki se takrata hoga" *says* Ohh yur Mr. Sharma?

M: Yepp that would be me. Right now the University's over so we'll start tomorrow?

N: *thinks* "peecha kb chutega tumse" *says* "Sure"

Later that night in Nupur's room

N:(thinking) jst a few days and i wont be talking to him anymore cuz nice or no nice dont want any guy even as a friend

M:(thinking) jst few more days and i wont be with her anymore... cuz mannered or not... everygirl is the same

Okay guys im done..

Long tym.. but finally

Comments/ Criticism welcome

Love

Fiz

Edited by mayurian-artian - 12 years ago

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