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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#701

hey sumi di update was gud 👏 👏 👏

liked the last para where ashna name of the devil but adi lis a cute , rough and tough devil😈 😈 😈

and last but not the least after reading this part i am eagerly no not eagerly but very very very very eager to read the next update plsssssssssss. continue soon😃 😃 😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#702

just loved it...

ha ha ha...yeh xpression tha mera ud padhne ke baad...!!! hala ke pura ud tum ne ashna ke galiyon se bhar ke rakha hai...phir bhi...baht achha tha...!!! in fact kai sari batain samne bhi aa gayi...

sahi kaha ashna ne yeh adil toh kahin bhi sochna suru kar deta hai...!!! par is baar reason ashna thi...yeh madam ko nahi pata...!!! khair aaj nahi toh kabhi na kabhi toh pata chal hi jayegi...

adil aur us ke mom ka scene baht tochy tha...!!! jab adil kahte hai ek baar us ka naam sunn na chahta hai n voh pura scene...yeah...us scene me jaise pure adil k dil ka pyar apne maa ke liye tum ne likh diya tha...

sahi hai yaar...kafi kam age me use itna kuch dikha diya ke...yeh khud ke liye bhi nahi mushkurata...!!! par chalo koi baat nahi...ab kam se kam chup chup kar hi sahi par asahna ke liye toh hass hi deta hai na...!!! bhale hi ashna na dekhe...par main toh bade pyar se dekhti hun...

mr raichand ne adil ko adopt kiya tha...par dekha jaye toh voh rishav se jyada use pyar karte the...!!!sahi bhi hai...kuch logon ke acts unhe pyar ke layak bana dete hain aur kuch ek ke nafrat ke...

yeh Rashi ko kya ho gaya hai...kahin pyar-vyar ka toh chakkar nahi hai na...!!! agar hoga toh voh sayad sab se pahle ashna ko hi batayegi...

ashna ka office scene ek damm mast tha...kitni galiyande rahi thi voh adil ko...par janab toh apni cabin me baithe use aise dekh kar mushkura rahe the...!!! chalo ashna ko aise dekh kar hi sahi voh hassa toh...

ab yeh kya file phenk kar maregi...are hindusthani nari apne pati par hath nahi uthate...itna nahi pata hai ashna ko...ha ha ha...

vaise voh scene baht hi badhiya tha...

aur adil ko ashna ko 'apnewale ghar' se dur rakhne ke liye jyada kuch nahi karna pada...voh khud hi apne ghar chali gayi...aur toh aur adil ne jo idea lagaya ke 'jaldi kaam khatam ho jaye toh office aa jana'...us se us ne aur jyada late kar diya...matlab surprise party...toh ashna ke liye sach me baht sare surprises le kar aanewale hain...

hope ke ashna ke dad ke dairy se use aur haimain yeh pata chal jaye ke adil ne use shadi kyoun ki thi...!!! ab baht ho gaya yaar...kab tak dono ko aise sirf khayalon me ghumati rahogi... kuch toh rahem karo hum par...

Sumi...dekh lo...is baar maine jaldi comments ki hai...isi khushi me surprise party ka ud jaldi post karo...aur khabardar jo is part ko LONG kaha toh...!!! kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala aur tum kahti ho ke long part hai...HUH...

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#703

Hi Sumi

Update was really gud as always..👏👏

It seems Adil is one of the most complex character I have come across..he is very similar to Sujal and Shlok of GI..I cud never understand these guys coz their thinking starts where mine ends.😆😆😆

Wat does he keep on thinking??? Even Ashna is as fed up as me..😆

But he was really not happy with his mother's condition and he seemed really tired of everything..Poor guy!! he never had any time for enjoying life..He was always shouldering responsiblities and duties..at every step he had to proove himself..

Mr.Raichand was impressed with Adil and he adopted him..he truely cared for him but his death lay heavily on his concious..

Why is Rashi behaving so coyly??? I hope she is not in love with some1 or else he is in big trouble coz Rashi's AB wont let him marry his darling sis that easily..😆😆😆

Ashna is indeed too much fed up with all the office work Adil keeps on throwing at her..poor girl doesn't even have time to eat anything and she is continously cursing Adil and he is busy noticing her from his cabin..😉😆😆

Adil is not planning to surprise his wife on her birthday..Rashi is planning everything..😉

Aashna got to read her father's diary which was full with praises for Adil..she can see that her father was all impressed with Adil..

I hope she comes to know abt some more positive traits of Adil..😆😆😉..I ll think she'll fall for him much more soon but falling in love seems a long way first let them b friends atleast..😃😊

Pls continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#704

hi 😊

the up is good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

so adil and aashna came back to mumbai and they were welcomed by rashi who had a nice makeover 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

but adil woh aate he goes to meet her mother gayatri jee 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

gaytri jee is really happy😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 to see adil back home but adil he is upset as the doc said that there is no improvement in her health

adil ko aase udhas dekh kar g jee ko bohot dukh hota haai 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

aur aaj hume yeh bhi jaane ko mila ke adil is not the biological son of mr and mrs raichand 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲he was adopted by them 😲😲😲

but though he adopted he performed all his duties very nicely😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 and still now he is taking of the family as well as the business 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

so rashi and adil both are palnning to throw a party for aashna 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😳😳😳😳as it was her birthday

aur adil woh aashna ko baatana nahin chahata that he remembered her birthday aur isliye he is behaving rudely showing his attitude as usuall😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

aashna is feeling nostalgic after going back to her home 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

she is reading her father's dairy and cheerishing the older days😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

anyways looking forward towards the party 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

hope to see some good romantic moments betwwen adil and aashna😳😳😳😉😉😉😉

plz cont soon and pm me

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sorry yaar...is baar toh lagta hai record tod kar late hun...!!! No problem sweetie....records hote hi hai todne ke liye...😆😆kal raat hi ud padha...par comments karne se pahle hi net chala gaya...Oh....waise I realized u read yesterday.....coz usse pehle ur 'like' wasnt there!! 😆😆 Waise jaldi to bilkul nahi hai mujhe....coz I knw der se hi sahi....u'll definitely read!! 😉 And rahi baat comment ki....wo agar tym na milne pe tum dono comments ek saath bhi de deti....I wud not complain...😳

Brilliant ud...aur mera fav scene bhi koun sa tha tumhe pata hi hoga...vohi yaar...jab ashna adil ka defination dhundh rahi thi...ha ha ha...Yeah...pata hai....coz sabka fav scene yehi tha.....jabki I added this scene as a fill up.....bas part ko longer karne ke liye...😆😆

ashana ko toh pata hi nahi hai...aur voh pata nahi adil ke bare me dil hi dil me kya soch rahi hai...kabhi kabhi toh galiyan bhi de rahi thi...!!! par humain pata hai na...bichara ashna ko le kar hi absent mind me hai...Yeah....and agar Ashna ko pata hota then gaaliya nahi deti.....shayad shocked ho jati ki uski bolti bandh ho jati...😆😆

sahi hai...in fact yeh bimari mujhe bhi hai...aur jyada tar normal logon ko toh hai hi..Eggjactly....😉.ab kisi chiz me khud ko uljhe hue mehshush karte hain toh bas koi bahan chahiye kisi chiz ko dekh kar apne aap ko tatolne ke liye...!!! adil bhi vohi karr raha tha...!!! kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke adil hamari tarah hai aur kabhi kabhi lagta hai NAHI...Haha....Adil hamari tarah hai coz he is normal like us...😉 and wo hamari tarah nahi hai.....coz he has Dimag unlike us....😆😆 wo bas khudko tatolta nahi hai.....uski uljhan ko suljhane ka hal bhi hota hai uske paas....😉😉 thats where he gets ahead...😳

INTOXICATING ko baht hi badhiya tarike se likha hai tum ne...!!! matlab adil ne hi sahi...par is me dimag toh tumhara hi laga tha na...Ohh thank you.....kabhi kabhar Adil ke saath saath koi meri bhi taarif kar de....to dil garden garden ho jata hai...😆😆😳 waise seriously thanks yaar!! 😳

yeh adil bhi na...use ashna bachhi lagti hai...!!! aur cartoon film se use kya prob ho sakti hai...!!! us se bol ke tom n jerry show dekhe...life ke aadhe prob toh voh dono bhagte bhagte solve kar dete hain...!!!Kitni sahi baat kahin hai yaar.....main to aaj bhi Tom n Jerry ki episode dekhke pagalo ki tarah hass sakti hu...😆😉 par yeha... johney depp mujhe us ki 'pirates of d caribbean' jyada achhi lagi thi...!!! khud ko jis tarah se voh bhav de raha tha...mujhe bada maza aata tha...!!! adil ko bhi yeh film dekhni chahiye...take voh bhi hass sake...True....even I liked him in Pirates of Carabian......and I like his style of acting actually!! And Alice in Wonderland to mere UD karne ke do din pehle dekhi thi....to bas added it...😆😆

ashana...adil ke bare me sochti bhi hai...aur ignore bhi karti hai...!!! par sochne ka percentage approx jyada hai...ha ha ha...!!! tabhi toh us ne yeh merit aur demerit ke list banaye...!!!Yup....hum har kisiko itne bariki se observe nahi karte na....naa hi har kisiko lekar itna sochte hai...😉😉 par abhi use prob hai ke voh adil ko samajh nahi payi hai...!!! sahi bhi hai...jis din samajhne lagegi...use us se pyar ho jayega...Yeah....wo hai hi lovable!! ❤️

adil ki nazar me bhi aaya...ki ashna kuch likh rahi thi...par us ka xpression...ohh God...yeh banda kabhi nahi sudhrega...!!! in fact adil mujhe is tarah se jyada achha lagta hai...Haha....waise mujhe na reply padhne ke pehle ehsaas hi nahi tha....he actually reacted in sum way in that scene....ek aur reply me padha tha and now reading here that his expression was nice...😆....and am glad to hear that!! And ab jaa ke realize ho raha hai....that was so typical Him. 😆

ab toh cont soon bhi nahi kah sakti...isiliye jab tak tum is par comment karo...main next part padh leti hun...Hehe....continue soon kehke fayda nahi hota coz main generally 'soon' continue nahi karti....but iss baar thoda jaldi kiya I guess....isliye tumhe laga tum late ho gayi!! 😳

But better late than never sweetie....thanks for such a truly beautiful comment!! 😳

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#706

heyyyyyyyy....yaaar isse pehle main kuch aur bolun ek baaat clear kar doon....aur wo ye ki i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooveeeee adil.😳😳....yaaar ashna ko nikal scene se aur mujhe daal....i am to totally flat on him...he is sooooooooo cute yaar😳....ab to raat ko neend bhi nahin aayegi...i actually wait for this fic to be updated....its really different ....i mean the way the scenes are written....it gives a very fresh feeling😊.....

adil is really a very gud son, brother and husband too...vo alag baat hai ki husband waaali baat na adil ko pata hai aur na ashna ko😆😆...only i know this😉😉...ashna ne jo itne traits likh rakhe hain usmein ek "funny" bhi add karna chahiye....he is actually funny sometimes....when he said "mera waala ghar" imitating ashna i actually laughed my lungs out😆😆...

shekhar was right adil ko office mein chuti declare karni chahiye thi.....but i guess shekhar ne jaldi bol dia ye..next bday tak paka chhuti declare karega...afterall adil raichand will fall in love hard😳😳...

ok i m not talking about ashna in this comment coz right now i m all adil adil😳😳...waiting to know the rest of diary's contents and party..asur haan party pe ek dance to adil-ashna ka banta hai😉😉got it????????????

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon...i really can't wait😳

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#707

same pinch again 😆.......although 1 day difference....so guess adil se milne ke liye . i shud update my FF jaldi jaldi 🤣..........

...........yipppieee my ADIL back 😳😳😳........ thank god u didn't sent him to Ranthambore after Jodhpur 😉.........

Rashi ... sirf bhabhi ko miss kiya 😆............ wat abt Adil 😳😳😳........... me missed him more 😆.................

ashna 😆😆😆...........jaisa SUMI ne kaha na he is complex insaan😳😳😳 toh ab usko samjhne ki zarut nahi hai 😆....& i stopped it long back 😆😆😆............ now i just 😍 ADIL 😆......... uske dimaag ka wohi jaane 😆...........
& Adil u think anywhere any time..... Ashna ko main kahin bhaga deti hoon 😛😛 😆😆😆........... bechare Adil ko sochne bhi nahi deti 😆

awww Mom son convo so emotional 😭😭😭... ..both mom son were 2 gud together .... 😊😊😊 rula diya na Adil ko ....😔... Adil 🤗 ..😃......& Yes Adil missed u a lot 😛.......... 😆 😆

my my chotta Adil ........😳😳😳.... sumiji not fair .......... bechare Adil se bachpan se hi kaam karwa rahi hai 😆

Rashi smart girl 👍🏼.................. & good to remind Adil abt Ashna's bday 😃😃😃..........😲😲 Adil ki wife ka bday 👏👏 .... hope its not on 22 feb 😉..........

& is Rashi is in love😆...... just my wild guess 😆😆😆

Ashna 😡😡😡............. everytime u break ur previous limit i set 4 u 😆 ......... dare u strangle my Adil .....😆😆..... & her way of cursing Adil 😆 ..not supposed to be funny situation....par mujhe hasi aa gayi 😆....... & Adil sirf smile hi kiya 😍 ....chalega.... rite now..... not expecting much from him 😆

Adil ....dont know abt Ashna..... we love to see ur Face 😍........he was really mean ith ashna ........ "ghar jakar sona mat " 😆....
& Shekhar u too 😆😆😆............. Adil is not alien 😳😳😳............... but he look cute even then 😆

Ashna's Dad's diary 😳😳😳.......... didn't i said in beginning of FF ............ love this MAN 😆.......... & Ashna after Adil .......every1 thinks only abt him 😳😳😳........ u vanish 😆😆😆.......... & dad ne kya dekha Adil mein 😍............... me & sumi can explain it in detail 😆😆😆........... will do that later 😆😆😆

adil "mere wale ghar pe " 🤣

Devil Raichand 🤣................ sowie adil ......not laughing at u ........... but the way ashna said it was funny 😆😆😆

& sachchi ........... aisa hota hai.... that think abt u & u appear 😍........dats gud 😳😳....

🥱 🥱............ 😲 😲.,............sumiji slept 😕 😕.............. wake up dear ... 😆😆............coz here we are (im)patiently waiting for next part 😆........so start writing 😆😆😆

...waiting 4 party 😃😃😃.... Adil ne invite nahi kiya mujhe 😛 ......koi baat nahi ...apne bday par kar lega 😳😳😳........... more than ashna his bday will be more njoyable 😆....

itna lumba comment kiya..... but next part ke liye lumba wait mat karwana........ 😆😆😆...
continue soon 😛😛😛 ..

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#708

LOL.....Devil Raichand !! Hahaha ! I hope the diary solves Ashna's mystery abt Adil to some extent !

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#709

Thank you for great update Dear

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#710

Superb part

Adil and Ashna are back home and this has made Rashi and Adil's mom very happy,😃

But Adil is upset 😔about his mother's medical reports. Adil unke theek hone ki uneed rakh kar thak gaya hai. He feels guilty for her condition and thinks that only Rishabh will be able to bring back her voice.

His mom is shocked to see him so tired and defeated. 😭

Adil has always felt indebted to Mr. and Mrs. Raichand for adopting him. He had always tried to live upto their expectations..taking on as many resposibilities as possible. Mr. Raichand's death only increased his burden.

Rashi wants to plan a surprise party for her bhabhi. She seems to be very excited about something...and both Ashna and adil have noticed a change in her...kahin yeh pyaar toh nahi,😳

Ashna is irritated and fed up with all the office work that Adil keeps giving her. She does not get any time for herself😡. She keeps cursing Adil while he is lost in her thoughts...observing her from his cabin.😉

On the day of her b'day, Adil leaves early because he knew that she would not want to see him in the morning. Ashna finds her father's diary at her house and excited to read about herself. She is surprised to see that her father has written so much about Adil. hope that after reading her father's diary she will be able to understand Adil.😍

continue soon

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