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that was awesome dear....really loved it
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it took me 8hrs to completely read ur ff...i really like ur version hope they used ur version in serial too...but now tensed wat next is gonna happen wat did she find? pl upate soon
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Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey that was so nice

loved the way maan n geet confronted NT\dev.......both should rot in jail forever

BTW the thing which geet found in maan's room.....was it related to maan's past

keep writing

Thnk u dear … thy both deserve tht or something even worse …. Not exactly but kind of … sure …

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

lovely update.... do continue soon

Thnk u dear … sure …soon …

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

finally Geet Dev NT face off over....phew...thihar jail....wow di awesom update...so Geet is arranging and found the taveez i think ...but dnt u mention she already gave the taveez then wat was tat she found now... all her stuffs maan collected like torn piece of sari, her shoes etc...

Thnk u arti … thy both deserve tht or something even worse …. Yes u r right geet already made maan wear the taviz … so it is not the taviz … U will know …

Originally posted by: mrk_1

loved it ..awsome update yaar...i hope she finds the taveezz



Thnk u dear …she already made maan wear the taviz …

i luved ur ff. plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon dis time.



Thnk u dear …soon … hopefully tonight …

wow lovely update geet found TAVEEZ there i guess

do update soon



Thnk u dear …she already made maan wear the taviz … sure soon …

Well done...Hima will write back in detail ...I a hurry to go dear.



Thnk u dear white … sure … will be waiting for ur feed back …

awesome ... loved it



Trisha Thnk u dear …

that was awesome dear....really loved it



Ansha Thnk u dear …

nice update

continue soon



Thnk u dear …sure soon …

it took me 8hrs to completely read ur ff...i really like ur version hope they used ur version in serial too...but now tensed wat next is gonna happen wat did she find? pl upate soon

Preethia Thnk u dear … wow tht's sweet of u … must say u r really patient … thnks a lot …. sure might update it hopefully tonight …

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Part 39:-

Just little bit information as the story will b going on a bit faster from now onwards …

When geet got married she was appx. 2+ months Preg* …

Right now while searching the stuff geet is 3+ months Preg * … continuing from where we left …

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Geet decides to arange their room while maan is off to office … after cooking for the family & asking maan to come home for lunch …. Geet was re arranging things in her room ….

Geet is now checking the dressing table cabinets & taking out unnecessary stuff present in there … Geet while checking out some cabinets now is opening the bottom most cabinet … & what does she find … She finds some thing which she least expected that she will find over there …

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While Geet was arranging things in her room … maan enters the mansion as he promised Geet that he will be coming home for lunch …

Maan has come early than he promised … while geet finds the stuff in the cabinet maan was ascending the stairs …

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Geet After finding the stuff in the cabinet ….

Geet surprised & to herself – "yeh sab ….. yahan …. Kaise "

Geet is now taking out all the items in the cabinet one by one & placing them on the table in front of the sofa … she is amazed at what she finds in maan's room …

While Geet was laying out the items on the table … maan was in the corridor …

Geet with a small tiny smile on her face … While covering the items …

Geet – main bhi dekhungi wo mujhae kya jawab daengae … iss kae liyae …

Geet covers those items with a cloth … as soon as geet covers the items with a cloth maan enters their room … geet's back is facing maan as he enters the room ….

Maan notices that geet's back is facing him & her dark thick long black hair is lying on her back … maan closes their bedroom door without making much noise … he sees that Geet is busy in some thing & has not noticed him entering the room ….

Now maan is walking very very silently like a cat which comes into the kitchen to drink milk without making any noise …. while maan is walking towards geet … she is checking the stuff whether it is properly covered or not …

Now maan is behind geet & he hugs her from her back with his arms over her arms & placing his chin on geet's right shoulder … Geet turning her face a bit so that they both can see each other's faces & their noses are just few millimeters away from each other …

Geet – aap …

Maan while hugging her … with still his chin on geet's shoulder… & looking into her deep eyes …

Maan – aur kaun ho ga … kisi aur ka intezaar kar rahin ho kya …

Geet smiling – haan ek Dusht Dhanav ka intezaar kar rahin hun …

Maan – acha tho uska intezaar ho rahan hain …

Geet smiling – haan … ho rahan hain … koi aitraaz ….

Maan – nahin … mujhae … kyun aitraaz hoga bhala ….

Geet giving maan a sweet smile …

Maan – waise … agar tum apne dusht dhanav sae milnae kae liyae ithna bekaraar ho … aur usse ithna miss kar rahin ho … tho teek hain … main tumhe tumhara dusht dhanav sae abhi milwa daetha hun ….

Maan plants a kiss on geet's shoulder … geet closes her eyes … Maan is proceeding next to her neck …. Plants a kiss on her neck … Geet moves away ….

Maan quickly holds both her hands with his hands (maan's right hand holding geet's right hand & with his left hand holding geet's left hand) & pulling her backwards towards him in such a way that her back touches his chest … & his arms are over her arms again & he folds both of their hands in front of her womb so that now … their hands are resting on her belly … maan starts feeling her hair with his face …. Then moves her hair forward to her right hand side … then starts kissing her back … below her dori … then above her dori … then proceeds to left hand side of her neck … geet is blushing & still her eyes are closed … she is feeling every single breath of his on her … she is totally lost in the moment … but … now … geet speaking softly …

Geet – maan … chodiyen … mujhe …

Maan still kissing her … & giving her a naughty smile …

Maan – kya hua sweet heart … abhi tho tum khud dusht dhanav ko yaad karr rahin thi … ab kya hua … kyun chodnae kae liyae keh rahin ho …

Geet turns & hugs him …. With her hands criss crossed on his shoulders … maan too hugs her with his hands on her back …

geet – ab bahut hogaya … yeh bathayiyen … aap jaldi kyun aagaye office sae …

maan looking into geet's eyes …

maan – kya geet … mera poora mood kharab kar diya … yeh kaun sa sawal hain … jaldi kyun aaya matlab … tumhare liye …. Aur kiskae liyae …

Geet – acha … tho aap … mere liye aaj jaldi aa gaye office sae …

Maan – haan …. Aur nahin tho kya ….

Geet - roz tho bahut daer tak kaam karthae hain … aaj kis kushi main jaldi aaye office sae … bata yiye … tho zara …

Maan moving his hands from her back to her waist & holding her by the waist now ….

Maan – tumhi nae tho kahan ki lunch kae liyae ghar aane kae liyae … phir … tum khud poonch rahin ho … kis kushi main … bhulakad ban gayi kya geet …

Geet – main koi bhulakad nahin hun … aap hi kaam chor ban gaye hain …

Maan – maan singh khurana aur kaam chor … ho hi nahin sakhtha …

Geet – acha tho lunch time sae pehlae ghar kyun chale aaye …

Maan tightening his grip on geet …. As geet was trying to free her self from him …

Maan – teek hain main tumhe sach bathatha hun …

Geet – bathayiye … main bhi tho sunu aap ka sach …

Maan - meri partner jo pehlae meri secretary rahan karthi thi … aaj chutti pae hain …

Geet – oh ho …

Maan - tho office main mera dill hi nahin lag rahan tha … aur poora office mujhae kaatnae kae liyae daud rahan tha … isi liyae socha … partner na sahi biwi hi sahi …. Tho … biwi kae saath thoda dill laganae ghar jaldi aa gaya …

Geet – aha ha ha ha … partner nahin hain … tho biwi ki yaad aayi … nahin tho biwi ki yaad nahin aathi … Maan Singh Khurana ko …

Maan – haan bilkul nahin aathi … tumhe kya malum meri partner kitni khubsoorat hain …. Kitni hot hain …

Geet – hot …

Geet was blushing … while maan said hot …

Maan – haan … hot … suno … uss kae baaren main bathatha hun …

Geet still blushing … & Maan is describing geet(secretary/partner) … is feeling the body parts what he is describing …

Maan - Uski kaale kaale baal … (when describing about her hair runs his hands through her hair & kisses it ….)

Maan - uss ki jheel sae bhi gehri aankhen (while describing her eyes kisses her eyes)

Maan - uss ka yeh teekhi naak … aur Uss kae gore gore gaal (kisses her nose while describing her nose & then her cheeks)

Geet blushing on one side while maan was praising her ….

Maan – aur sabsae badi baath … Uskaae naram naram raseelae hoath(lips) …

Now when he was praising her lips … she knows what he has in his mind … so Geet is acting angry but she is not angry at all …

Geet – acha … ji … tho jaayiye … ussi kae paas …

Maan tightening his grip again on geet …. While geet is still trying to free herself …

Maan – kya geet … dubara mera mood off kar diya … kis nae kahan tumhe baath karnae kae liyae …

Geet – mood off … lagtha hain … mood swings aap ko ho rahen hain … mujhae nahin … mere preg* ka side effects aap pae bhi pad rahen hain … hain kya …

Maan – geet … ab mazak chodo … yeh tho batao …. tumhari tabiyat kaisi hain … subah office nahin aa ungi keh diya tabiyat karab hain bol kae … ab kaisi ho ….

Geet – main teek hun …. Yeh tho chal tha hi rehtha hain … aap janthae hain na … phir iss ki wajah sae pareshan hone ki koi jaroorat nahin hain …

Maan – pareshan hone ki koi jaroorat nahin hain … geet tum aisi baath kyun keh rahin ho … tum janthi ho na tum mere liyae kya ho … phir bhi …

Geet – teek hain baba … agli baar nahin kahungi … waise … issi liyae aap jaldi aa gaye office sae …

Maan – yes partner … issi liyae jaldi aa gaya … meri pyaari biwi ki tabiyath kharab hain yeh soch soch kae …. main kaam kaise kar sakhtha hun … concentrate hi nahin kar pa rahan tha office main …

Geet – oh yeh tho achi baath nahin hain …

Maan – kyun …

Geet - aisi choti choti baath kae liyae aap kaam chod kae aa jayengae tho achi baath kaise hogi … batha yiyen …

Maan – mere liye pehlae tum ho geet … baaki sab baad main … office bhi … samjhi tum …

Geet – oh fo … teek hain … baba teek hain … aap sae main kabhi jeet payi kya iss mamlae …

Maan – yeh hui naa baath …

Geet - waise … aaj aap ki chori pakdi gayi ….

Maan – chori …. Kaisi chori …. Maine kaun si chori ki hain …

Maan holds geet by her shoulders now ….

Geet – dikhathi hun …

Geet then slowly removes the cover from the top of the things she discovered in the cabinet …. Maan is surprised to see his prized possessions lying on the table … maan's blushing ….

Maan - tumnae yeh sab kyun nikala cabinet main sae ….

Geet – agar nahin nikalthi tho mujhae aap kae baaren main patha kaise chaltha …

Maan kneels down … sits on the floor … geet too sits besides him & is looking at him …

Maan now touches all the items with so much love in his eyes … they are his prized possessions …

His geet's memories which he preserved in his cabinet very very securely without anybody's knowledge … when he started to have feelings for her … he himself did not know at that time what made him save all those things of hers ….

But he did save them & kept them in a very safe place … when ever he wanted he used to take them out & look at them …

His 4 prized possessions were … his geet's torn saree piece, some dried petals of white rose which geet bought for him as a token of thank you , her shoe which by mistake fell on his head ,dried marigold garland which again by mistake she threw at maan in the launch party hall …

The taviz was one among them … but geet already made him wear the taviz on the wedding night …. maan was looking at the Taviz before he left for the mandap & kept it on the dressing table which geet found while strolling in their room … & later on made him wear that on their wedding night itself …

geet – kya hua … kahan kho gaye aap …

maan – haan ….

Geet – aap nae kabhi bhi mujhae bataya nahin ki aap nae yeh sab cheezen sambhal kae rakha hain …

Maan – iss main batanae waali kaun si baath hain …

Geet – arey wah …. Cheezen meri hain … aur main hi iss baath sae anjaan hun … yeh kaheka insaaf hain …

Maan – abhi iss main insaaf ki baath kahan sae aa gaya …

Geet – kyun nahin aayega … uss din jab aap ko meri novel main … aap ki tasveer mili tab tho aap mujhsae bahut sawal jawab poonch rahen thae … yeh tasveer kaise aayi …. Yeh wo karkae … ab mera number aaya aur main bhi aap ko poonchungi … ki kab sae chal rahan hain yeh sab …. Boliye …

Maan winking at geet … loosening his tie & taking it off & then unbuttoning his first few buttons of his shirt …

Maan – waise tumhe samajh main tho aa gaya ho ga na ki kabse chal rahan hain yeh sab ….

Geet – iss ka matlab … ki aap party wale din sae hi …

Geet looking at maan in wonder ….

Maan – haan … tab sae hi …. Ya shayad tumhara naukri ka pehlae din sae hi … par mujhae samajh nae main …. Bahut daer lagi … aur shayad issi liyae maine rahul ko bhi project sae nikal wa diya ..kyunki uss nae tumhare saath battamizi ki hain …

while geet was swearing maan was staring at geet …

Geet – kya …. Aap nae wo ullo kae patte , gadhe ki aulad,kutte ki dum Rahul ko issi liyae nikal diya … mere liyae …

Maan – haan …

Geet - parr mujhae tho pata hi nahin laga …

Maan – kaise pata lagega … Miss.Hoshiarpur Express ki gadi super fast speed main rehthi hain … isse doosron ki feelings kae baaren main kaise pata chalegi ….

Geet – tab maloom nahin tha … par baad main maloom pada na ...

Maan – acha ….

Geet – hmm … aur nahin tho kya …

Maan – waise geet … uss waqt tho mujhae tumhe poonch nae ka koi haq nahin tha …. Iss liyae maine tumsae pooncha nahin … par aaj main janna chahtha hun …

Geet – kya janna chahthae hain aap …

Maan thinking something in his mind ….

Maan – nahin rehnae do …

Geet – nahin poonchiye kya poonchna chahthe hain aap …

Maan – rehnae do geet …

Geet – aap poonchae gae ki nahin …

Maan is actually thinking if he asks her … she might remember that incident & may feel bad & sad about it … Maan takes geet's torn saree piece in his hand & is holding it close to his heart …

Geet – poonchaengae ki nahin …

Maan – haan poonchtha hun … wo … tumhara saari kaise phat gaya …

Geet face has changed feelings as expected by maan …

Geet – wo …

Maan – kya hua geet … tum teek tho ho …

Geet – maan …. rehnae dijiye …

Maan – geet … kab tak yeh baath tum tumhari dill main rakhogi … kya tum yeh baath mujhsae share nahin kar sakhthi … mujhae janne ka koi haq nahin hain …

Geet – aisi baath nahin hain … maan … aap ko mere upar poora haq hain …

Maan – tho phir …

Geet – wapas … kyun ghade murdae ukhadna … yeh soch kae …

Maan – matlab …

Geet – matlab watlab kuch nahin … jaane dijiye naa …

Maan – geet maine dekh liya tumhari aankhon main …. Tum jaroor kuch baath mujhsae chupana chahthi ho … kya tum mujhae apna nahin samajhthi ho …

Geet – nahin maan … aisi baath nahin hain … aap aise math sochiye …

Maan – phir …

Geet - teek hain suniye …

Geet then narrates him the entire incident that happened with her on the party night … how she was made to wear a saree … how the food order was changed … she said she did not have enough proof as to who changed the food order … but she was sure it was sasha & tasha's work … but as the proof was not there …. she could not take any action against them … & then finally tells maan as to how her saree tore … maan's anger knew no bounds now … how dare sasha & tasha do all this to Geet …

Maan – Geet … tumnae yeh baath uss din kyun nahin kahan … uss din na sahi par mujhsae aaj tak kahan kyun nahin …. Kyun geet …

Geet – ab main kya , kyun aur kaise ka kya jawab du …

Maan – kaise kahun matlab …

Geet – dekhiye … uss waqt shayad haalat hi kuch aise thae … aur hum dono kae beech bhi aisa koi rishta nahin tha … ki main aap ko kuch bata sakhu …

Maan – par baad main tho keh sakthi thi naa …

Geet – ab uss baath ko ithnae din ho gaye … tho kya batana …

Maan – mujhae lagtha tha ki tumhare aur sasha kae beech main banthi nahin thi … par sasha iss hadh tak gir jayegi yeh maalum nahin tha … I will fire her & tasha both today … right now …

Geet - ab rehnae dijiye naa …

Maan – rehnae du … hargis nahin … I will fire her & tasha both today … right now …

Before geet could say any thing …. Maan picks up his phone & starts dialing …. Geet grabs the phone from maan …

Geet – yeh aap kya kar rahen hain ….

Maan – kya kar rahan hun … adi ko phone kar rahan hun … sasha & tasha ka dismissal orders ready kar kae rakhnae kae liyae …

Geet – shayad aap bhul gaye hongae … aap ki hi kahi hui baath …

Maan – konsi baath …

Geet - kisi kae paeth kae upar maarna Maan Singh Khurana ka phith rath main nahin hain … tho aap aise kaam nahin karengae …

Maan – tumne meri kahin hui baath yaad rakha …

Geet – aap ki kahin hui baath main kabhi bhuli hi nahin … aap ki har ek baath mujhae yaad rehtha hain …

Maan – teek hain … phir usse nikal daethae hain …

Geet – maan … maine naa kahan naa …

Maan – tum tho meri koi bhi baath sunthi hi nahin ho …. Aur expect karthi ho ki main tumhari har ek baath maanu …

Geet – maine aap ki baath kab nahin maani …

Maan – batao …. Mere paas ek lambi list hain … ki tumnae meri baath kab kab nahin mani …

Geet – yeh baath chodiye … aur suniye … aap sasha aur tasha ko naukri sae nahin nikaalengae …

Maan – par usnae jo kuch bhi tumhare saath kiya … uss kae baad bhi tum chahthi ho ki main aisa nahin karoon …

Geet – haan …

Maan – par kyun geet …

Geet – uss nae jo kuch bhi kiya mere saath … wo sab uss nae apni jalan ki wajah sae kiya …

Maan – jalan …

Geet – haan … taaki aap mujhsae dur rahen …

Maan – par usko kya problem hain …

Geet – problem … usse kya … poori office …. Ya yeh kahiye ki poori duniya ko problem hain …. aap jo ithna handsome … dashing aur …

Maan – aur kya …

Geet – aise kai gun hain … aap main hain … tho koi bhi ladki … aap ko apne aap sae dur kaise jaane daegi … issi liyae tho … sab aap ko DD … DD … bolthae rehtahe hain …

Maan – DD … dusht dhanav …

Geet – nahin baba … dhak dhak …

Maan – dhak dhak …

Geet – haan office walon nae aap ko naam diya … dhak dhak …

Maan – baap rae … ab office waalae bhi …

Geet is laughing …

Geet - waise … sasha jo jo karthi aayi uss ki wajah sae … hamesha hum dono kareeb hi tho aaye hain … tho isi liye …

Maan – isi liye …

Geet – jaane dijiye usse iss baar … haan … agar wo humari company kae saath kuch bhi ghalat kiya … tab main aap ko nahin rokhungi … aap usse usi waqt naukri sae nikal dijiye … abhi usnae company kae saath tho gaddari nahin ki hain na … tho aap usse chod dijiyae ….

Maan – par … geet …

Geet – iss baar usse chod dijiye … agar agli baar wo mere saath aisa kuch karegi … tho usse main handle karungi … aap beech main math aayiye … main bhi dikha dungi ki Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana kya kar sakhthi hain … Haala ki ab wo aisa kaam nahin karegi …

Maan – arey wah … Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana jo chuha jaise rehthi thi … ab sherni ban gayi …

Geet – haan jab sher sae shadi ki hain … tho sherni tho ban hi jaa ungi naa …

Maan coming close to geet as if he wants to kiss her …

Maan – waah meri sherni … tumhara himmat tho bad rahan hain … kis ka asar hain …

Geet – aap ka asar hain … aap ka saath ka asar hain … aap kae himmat waali bathon ka asar hain …

Maan – acha …

Geet – aur nahin tho kya …

maan smiling at her & touching her forehead with his forehead …

geet - waise yeh tho bathayiye yeh gulab ki pankudiyaan … yeh kya hain … aap nae tho wo … white roses … mujhae dust bin main throw karnae kae liyae kahan tha aur main lae bhi gayi thi … phir yeh …

Maan – yeh unhi white roses main sae ek white rose hain … jo tumhare haath ko chubkae neechae gir gayi thi …

Geet – aur aap nae isse sambhal kae rakha …

Maan – haan … tum jo mere liyae … ithnae pyar sae lae kae aayi thi … tho main isse apni paas main kyun nahin rakhtha …

Geet – uss din tho bada gussa dikha rahen thae …

Maan – haan … wo … achanak roses ko dekha tho gussa aagaya …

Geet – par yeh phoolon ki pankudiyan … kyun … poora phool kyun nahin hain …

Maan – wo mujhae tumpe gussa aaya tho …

Geet – gussa aaya tho baechare phool pae gussa uthara diya … aap ko na anger management classes join karni chahiye … baechara phool ko bhi nahin choda aapnae …

Maan looking at her ….

Maan – geet … mujhae anger management classes ki jaroorat hain … mujhae …

Geet – aur nahin tho kya … dekhiye zara … baechari phool ki kya halat kardi aapki gussae nae …

Maan – acha ab phool baechara hain … aur main …

Geet – aap ko kya hua …

Maan - kya main aaj kal tum par gussa kar rahan hun …

Geet – nahin … nahin kar rahen hain …

Maan – phir …

Geet – par kya maloom aap gussa kis par nikal rahen hain … agar main kal subah ut kar dekhu aur hamari garden main sae koi tree ko aapnae gusse main kaat diya tho …

Maan – aisa nahin hoga … mujhae koi anger management classes ki jaroorat nahin hain … kyunki tum jo ho mere paas … aur mujhae maalum hain mere gussa kaise kam hoga …

Geet – kaise …

Maan comes close to geet's lips …

Maan – batao …

Geet – main janthi hun … aap kya chahthae hain …

Maan brings his lips close to hers … very very close only few millimeters from her lips ….

Maan – acha … tho tumhe samajh main aagaya … tho batao …

Geet feeling shy – wo … wo …. Aap mujhae …. Wo …

Maan now goes near her ears …

Maan – tumhe kya laga ki main tumhe kiss karnae wala tha …

geet bends her eyes … maan reads her eyes & he knows she thought he was about to kiss her … he too wanted to kiss her … but was playing with her wanted to know what she was thinking …

Maan – waise mujhae kisi bhi class join karkae ki koi jaroorat nahin hain … kyun ki tum jo mere saath ho abhi … aur jab tum mere paas ho tho mujhae gussa kaise aayega …

Geet – aap bhi naa …

Maan – raha sawal iss phool ka … tho maine iss phool ki petals ko ithnae sambhal kar kae rakha uss ka kya …

Geet – teek hain … aur yeh jhootha (shoe )…

Maan – waise … shoe ka jhikar aaya tho … shayad tumhe anger management classes ki jaroorat hain … tum mujhsae ithnae gussae main thi kya ki mere sar pae tumnae jhootha pheka …

Geet was laughing as soon as she remembered that incident …

Maan – kya hua … aise paaglon ki tarah kyun hans rahin ho …

Geet – wo …

geet still laughing holding her stomach … maan is like starring at geet as though geet has drunk or smelled laughing gas …

maan – Geet … ab mujhae batao gi ki nahin …

geet – haan haan bathathi hun … mujhae koi anger management class ki jaroorat nahin hain … suniye …

geet then narrates the whole incident as how her shoe got stuck to the step as some delhi ka battameez threw his chewing gum on the steps & how she was trying to remove it & how it flew from her hands & fell on maan's head … & how she got scared after seeing him & ran away from there … maan too laughs along with her …

maan – tho yeh tha mere cinderella ka adventure …

Maan raising his collar now …

maan – waise mere cinderella ko apna prince charming tho mil gaya naa …

geet – kahe ka prince charming ….

Maan – geet …

Geet laughing – prince charming tho nahin mila … mila tho dhust dhanav mila …

Maan now keeping his hands on his waist while still sitting on the floor near the table …

Maan – tho main dhust dhanav hun …

Geet – haan … aap dhust dhanav tho hain … wo aap kae language main kya kehtae hain … ek cute sa sweet sa dhust dhanav hain … jo koi prince sae kisi bhi maamlae main kam nahin hain … cinderella ko tho sirf apna prince charming mila …

Geet now giving maan a side hug coiling her hands on his waist …. Maan too reciprocates her hug … & places one of his hand on her back so that now it is on her shoulder …

Geet continuing - par mujhae aap milae … aap main mujhae wo har ek rishta mila jo ek ladki hamesha dund thi rehthi hain … tho hua naa aap mere liyae prince charming sae bhi badkar …

maan kissing her forehead …

Maan – meri sweet heart … yeh tho batao ki tumnae iss ki jodi ko kahan rakha …

geet – iss ki jodi ko bhi rakha na maine sambhal kae … mere paas … aaj uss ka intezaar khatam hua … aaj uss ko uss ki bhi jodi mill gayi … uss din jab uss ka jodi bichad gaya tha … tho mujhae laga ki mere saath kuch bura hoga …. Aur hua bhi …

maan now looking at her …

geet – par jyada din tak bura nahin hua … kyun ki uss kae baad aap mere zindagi main aaye … aur mujhae aap ka saath milaa … iss liyae …

maan – haan … so tho hain … aur main hamesha tumhare saath rahungaa …. Geet … iss main koi shakh nahin hain …

Geet – waise aap nae yeh …

Geet pointing to the garland … maan now takes the garland & is now holding the garland too close his heart along with her saree piece … while his another hand is still on geet's shoulder …

Geet - haar(marigold garland) ko bhi sambhal kae rakha …

Maan – aur nahin tho kya … jab tumnae isse mere gale main dala tho …

Geet – tho …

Maan – tho isse main apne paas kyun nahin rakhu … in sab cheezon main sae sabsae jyada yeh haar mere dill kae bahut kareeb hain …

Geet – uss waqt aap tho mujhsae naaraz thae naa … phir …

Maan – naaraz … alag hain … pyar alag hain … aur uss waqt meri andhar alag si ladai chal rahin thi … main khud nahin jantha tha ki mujhae kya chahiye …

Geet – aap nae dill main ithna saara pyar chupakae mujhsae naaraz naaraz rehthae thae … mujhsae jhoot moot ka jagda karthae thae …

Maan – uss waqt … mujhae maalum nahin tha … ki main kya miss kar rahan tha … daer sae hi sahi … par maine sahi faisla liya … aur tum meri zindagi aagayi … aur meri zindagi ko kushiyon sae bar di …

Geet now looking at Maan … Geet & Maan both hugging each other … after some time they both come out of the hug …

Maan – tumhara sara sawal jawab khatam ho gaya tho … main tumsae ek jaroori baath karun …

Geet – kya …

Maan – maine tumhara naam pregnancy classes main enroll kar diya hain … aur aaj sae tum wo classes join karogi … taki tumhe preg* main aasani rahen …

Geet – par iss ki kya jaroorat hain maan …

Maan – malum tha tum aise hi kahogi … iss liye main bhi ab har roz tumhare saath chalungaa …. Hum dono saath main jayengae … samjhi tum …

Geet – maan … aur aap ka office …

Maan – 1 – 2 hours office nahin jaungaa tho koi aafat nahin aayegi … waise adi … aur baki sab tho hain hi sahin … uss waqt wo log office sambhalengae …. Baki kae time tho hum dono office main rahengae … hi rahengae … tho … koi problem nahin hain … samjhi sweet heart …

Geet – baathon main … main kabh aap sae jeet payi …

Maan – acha … tho maine tumhe kabhi bhi jeetnae diya … teek hain ab issi kushi main … chalo ab jaldi sae mujhae mera DD dae do …

Geet – abhi …

Maan – haan … subah tho tumhara tabiyat … teek nahin tha isi liyae maine tumsae pooncha nahin … aur abhi bhi do baar mujhae mere DD nahin laenae diya …

Geet – koi DD … VD … nahin milegi … chaliye … ab lunch ka waqt ho gaya hain… neechae chalthae hain … dadima hamara intezaar kar rahin hogi …

Geet trying to get up …. Maan pulls her towards him … geet falls on his chest … her lips brushing maan's bare chest which was opened up a bit earlier … geet now lifts her head up & looks into maan's eyes … maan now holds her chin & pulls her face close to his face … the distance between their lips is closing in … & finally maans lips are over geet's lips & he kisses her with all the love in the world … & after some time thy both come out of the kiss …

Geet blushing – ab tho chaliyae … aap ko aap ka DD mil gaya … utiye …

geet trying to get up … but is pulled again towards maan … this time it's not maan …. maan raises both of his hands to show her that it's not him … but it's the taviz … taviz got stuck to geet's mangalsutra … which is pulling her towards maan …

Maan – dekha geet … well ab taviz aur mangal sutra bhi nahin chahthae ki tum mujhsae dur jao …

Geet – main aap sae dur kahan ja rahin hun … main tho aap kae paas hi hun … ab yeh aap ki nautanki band kariyen … aur lunch kae liyae neechae chaliye …. dadima ko aur kitna wait kar wayengae aap … chaliye … bachpana abhi chodiye … neechae chal tae hain …

Maan – teek hain … teek hain … meri geet … chalo neechae chalthae hain ….

Maan & geet go & have their lunch along with dadima … & then later on maan leaves to office …

Maan tells geet that he will come & pick her up in the evening for her class & asks geet to be ready by that time …

Geet starts attending her classes along with maan , getting tips & learning exercises & practising them …

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After some days … Geet right now is 4 months preg* ….

Maan arranges a surprise for geet along with dadima … after they come from the class … he directly take her to the surprise he had arranged for her … maan blindfolds geet & takes her upstairs …

Geet – maan … yeh aap kya kar rahen hain … aap nae meri aakhen kyun bandhi …

Maan – tumhe abhi pata chal jayega sweet heart …

Geet enters the room … & then as soon as she enters every one shouts

"SURPRISE" …. Geet did not expect this sudden yelling from every one … every one includes dadima & all the staff of khuana mansion nakul ,changu ,mangu ,etc … so shakes a bit … but becomes normal quickly …

Geet – kya surprise hain … maan …

Maan opens her blind fold & then … the sight in that room really surprises her & she is happy to see her surprise … the room has been beautifully decorated for a baby … with all the walls having pink wall paper with all the disney characters on them … she spots that the entire room has been filled with soft toys & all the play things … & there is a small tiny baby cot … along with a cradle … with the softest ever bed sheets on them … just like baby soft … & the bedsheet too has disney characters on them … she finds all the necessary baby items in the room … geet's eyes are filled with tears now …

Geet – yeh sab … aap nae …

Maan – haan geet …

Geet – par aap … yeh sab … kab kar rahen thae … mujhae tho pata hi nahin chala ….

Maan – agar pata chaltha … tho surprise kahan sae rehta hain … sweet heart …

Dadima – geet beta … tu kush tho hain naa …

Geet – dadima … aap bhi inkae saath shamil thae …

Dadima – shamil tho hona padega … ab jo mera great grand child aane wala hain … tho uss ki khatir daari … khurana khandan ki style main karni hi padegi … naa …

Geet hugs dadima & maan … they all have a group hug …

While Geet is attending her classes … maan is attending his office & taking care of both geet & dadima simultaneously … geet's pregnancy is now showing … she is almost 6+ months preg*… then one day he gets a call from his detective ….

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Please let me know how u like this update …. Critise if u don't like any thing … comments are always a welcome … as they are my vitamins to write the next update …. Plz hit the like button if u all like this post …

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Posted: 14 years ago
fab update.........luv it👍🏼👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..... That was ossumly ossumxxx
Abs love it... Loved her pregnancy scenes..hope we get more of them :)
Plzz update soon I wana know what happens.. When I was scroll ing down I was like dont end... Pls pls pls update soon??
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear dew............amazing and awesome update...........loved it.............gr8 job 👏

u always write things which touches my heart.........i wish they get married soon and all dis happens.............very beautiful...........their relation is very unique just like dem and der love.......

u capture it very well..........

m so much in love vd d FF........ur views and off course my MAAN
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super fantic minblowing update pls cont soon dont tell me that Detective has bad new because cant take it cute happy family pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i just love it bindu
really i love these type of long updates
i like the scene where geet found maan prized possessions
really i just njoyed every scene becuse this update is ful of maneet na
ok update the next part asap
thanks for wonderful update bindu
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Posted: 14 years ago
marvelous update
sho sweet of maan
do continue soon

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