FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 5:

Maan was thinking in his mind how 2 start the topic...

He turned his face towards Geet....Geet's face was glowing today in the candle light...He never saw that kind of Glow or radiance in her face before & was wondering what was the real reason behind it..she was just looking like Asmaan se uthri hui Pari..remembered those words of his wht he said 2 Geet long time back tht she was not a pari & he does not feel anything 4 her ...he knows that was a lie... & was actually smiling at himself 4 that..& was thinking whatever may B the reason she is looking even more beautiful today....looking like a fresh Rose Flower & was also thinking that whatever she wears it always suits her...be it Saree(Kurban Hua)..Blue Salwar(Hum tum)....Half White salwar(Dhaba & Darga) or Red Sharara(when he threw the duppatta on her...he felt like she was a dulhan covered in a ghunghat & where she throws the garland on him unknowingly)...he still has the garland with him....in his prized positions kept it in a secured place...& how can he forget Geet decked with dadima's jewelry was looking like his dulhan..When he saw himself with Geet in the mirror They both looked as thought they both were made for each other ...He remebered Mr.Chopra's words about Geet...that Geet was the perfect partner 4 him...He was thinking 2 himself how come I have realised it soo late why din't this realisation come 2 me before....Maan now was thinking about all the FB...since the time they 1^st met each other.... how their relationship has grown in these couple of months from Hoshiarpur 2 Delhi'.

Thinking all this...he tried to break the silence between the 2...I have 2 talk 2 Geet now...other wise never i do not have much time left with me...seeing the way she is behaving looks like she will not open her mouth till we go back home "Main iska Bak Bak ithna miss karungaa yeh maine kabhie nahin socha tha" & thinking in his mind how 2 start the conversation regarding the feelings he has....he never had such an experience before...

Maan softly says "Geet..."

Geet is thinking something in her mind does not listen to Maan as she is not used 2 Maan talking 2 her in such a low tone...maan now raises his voice a bit & touches Geet hand slightly & says "Geet "

Geet comes back 2 her senses & says --- "Ji Sir"

Maan ' "Main tumse kuch poonchana chahta hun Geet..."

Geet --"Kya sir ...'

Maan -- "Tum tumhara Humsafar yani ki life partner ke baare main tum kya soch thi ho Geet...???"

Geet is puzzled at this question...She is thinking 2 herself ...."babaji....yeh sir ko kya hogaya hain...yeh mujhse aise sawal kyun punch rahein hain...inhone kuch peeya tho nahin hain na..."

Maan --Geet Geet ...kya soch rahin ho Geet...

Geet -- Jee sir ...

Maan --- maine tumse kuch puncha hain Geet ...uska jawab dene ka kasht karogi..please...

Geet does know what 2 say how 2 say ...she is having a tough time now...remembering all the past incidents she had in Reg. 2 Dev...actually nobody asked her that question before...& she never thought about that in her life before prior to this...

Geet -- "Main nahin janthi..."

Maan -- nahin Janthi Geet...ya phir tum mujhe batana nahin chahthi ho....Teek hain...Acha ye batao agar main yeh kahun ki tumhara life partner yehi kahi pe hain to kya kahogi Geet....

Geet - jee...

maan -- haan yehan par...

Geet - yehan...yehan pae kaun hain sir jo mujhse shadi karna chahtha ho...mujh jaisi...chote shaher ki ladki jo salwar kameez pehanthi hain aur jiske lambe baal ho aisi ladki se shadi kaun karega sir ...waise bhi mujhe shadi nahin karni hain ...main akeli hi teek hun...

maan 2 himself-- "almost 6' lambu idhar main khada hun aur yeh bolthi hain ki idhar kaun hain...lagtha hain yeh aisi baath nahin maanne wali hain..."

After saying this Geet is again looking out of the grill...

Maan was thinking 2 himself ..." kuch kar Maan aisa lagta hain yeh ithni jaldi kuch bhi nahin kahegi agar yeh nahin kehna chahthi to tu khud bulwade iski muh se....ya phir tum khud use boldo....jab tak nahin bologae to tu uska Sher kaise banogae...."

Will be updating the next part very soon...

Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago

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Sireesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Thats Lovely😊

pls continue soon

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hey this is cute...!!! Do u have a PM list..if yes, pls add me...!!!

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rozeena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

awsum start!!!!!!!! cant wait till the next update.

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

wow sweet update.. do continue soon

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dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Sorry friends 4 the delay.....had a problem with my computer...

Here is the update ....but it is short...hope u all will like it...😊

Part 6:

While Maan was thinking how 2 bring the confession out from Geet...Even Geet was thinking to herself why is it that Maan Sir is behaving in such a weird way...

Geet 2 herself ..."Kuch dinon sae main dekh rahi hun Maan sir ajeeb tarae kae harkatein kar rahein hain mere saath main...

Aisi harkatein tho wo kisi aur ladki kae saath karthe hua maine abhi tak tho nahin dekha....to mere saath hi kyun...aur wo mere saath pehle jaise gusse kae saath baath bhi nahin karte hain.....bahut hi shanth aur politely baath kar rahein hain...

Iska matlab kya hain...baar baar mere duppatte ko pakadna, baar baar mere paas aana ya phir mujhe hamesha apne ithna paas lena...Aur paas aake mujhse aisi baathein karna..mujhe chuuna...aisi bathein aur aisi harkatein tho wo kisi aur kae saath kyun nahin karthe...

Aur Jabki unko phoolon sae ithni nafrat hain aur ithni nafrat hone kae bavujood unhone mere liye safed gulab ka phool leke aaye..Aur aaj aaj yeh cottage ko aise phoolon sae sajana aur aaj mujhse yeh question karna ki mere life partner kae bare main....main in sab ka kya matlab samjhun...kya Wo bhi wohi sab mehsson kartein hain jo main mehsoos kar rahin hun...aur agar aisi baath hain to...to ab main kya karun Baabaji...meri madad kariyen'meri kuch samajh main nahin aa raha hain ke main kya karun...haan...mujhe malum hain main kya karungi...Mujhe kaise bhi karkae Maan Sir sae dur jaana padega yehi sahi hain hum sabke liye.... aur Friday ko jab sab busy rahenge party main...main usi waqt nikal jaaungi kisi ko bathaye bagair aur kisi ko patha bhi nahin chalega...".

While Geet was immersed in herself Maan silently walks towards Geet & sits besides her.

Geet does not notice that Maan is next 2 her.

Hopefully will be able to post the next part very soon....

Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago