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Posted: 14 years ago
omg u updated! Yay bt bt bt bt why dnt it open? wait a min
yh toh same hai - iread this a few days bak -toh phir yh aaj phirse post kaise hogaya??
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Neeru,m sorry for replying so late.....😔......badly stucked in office schedule................as usual,the update is very nice & very near to the heart....😍👏❤️. & guess what ????? when I was reading ur update naa,the same song was played in my laptop playlist......☺️......Wow,we all r fascinated by Maaneet connection & look my laptop is connected with ur updates.....😆🤗..........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa

Hey,

I like you FF. I just finished reading the first two parts and they are great.
The expression that comes to my mind is "Light n Fluffy" - lolz....now i am hungry.
But that is how I felt, reading the convo between Pinky and Geet.....it was no light, nice, friendly and full of love and how Geet innocently works towards a plan to go to the Mela.
Loved it.
😳
Rachana



hey thanks Rachana....

i am glad u r liking my FF

keep reading.... i will come up with more updates....

WELCOME TO MY MANEET WORLD🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

omg u updated! Yay bt bt bt bt why dnt it open? wait a min

yh toh same hai - iread this a few days bak -toh phir yh aaj phirse post kaise hogaya??



Hey tumne tho Raaz khol di yaar...

us din main hadbadi mein teekh se

update nahi ki thi....

if u noticed main ne uss din...

part-34 nahi likha tha....

i dint Pm anyone and also the page seemed

like exceeded the maximum post space...

and it was displayed on the red part

which i dint like....

so aaj fir se khoshish ki

ki woh puraaa update white page pe display ho

but my effort does'nt seem to work😭
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Hey Neeru,m sorry for replying so late.....😔......badly stucked in office schedule................as usual,the update is very nice & very near to the heart....😍👏❤️. & guess what ????? when I was reading ur update naa,the same song was played in my laptop playlist......☺️......Wow,we all r fascinated by Maaneet connection & look my laptop is connected with ur updates.....😆🤗..........



OYEEE Hoyeeeee🤗

Tumhaaraa tho mai kya kahu meri Jaan.....

u r always connected.....

i was like reading ur comment with my mouth wide open....😲

LOVE U for ur LOVELY COMMENTS🤗

AUR haaa tumhaarey HRIDAY PARIVARTAN ka KYA HAAL HAIN???

How is ur DD?????????😉


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh



Hey tumne tho Raaz khol di yaar...

us din main hadbadi mein teekh se

update nahi ki thi....

if u noticed main ne uss din...

part-34 nahi likha tha....

i dint Pm anyone and also the page seemed

like exceeded the maximum post space...

and it was displayed on the red part

which i dint like....

so aaj fir se khoshish ki

ki woh puraaa update white page pe display ho

but my effort does'nt seem to work😭

😆hahahahaha awwww im sorry meri jaann
but but but ek baat batoon??? a😕ctually na iss page mein kuch kharaabi hai!!!!! - i tried opening on my fone(⭐️cos thats where i read most updates⭐️) and it kept closing down n then on pc it kept doing errors😕 - thats y - isliye woh pura white pe nahi araha!!!! - i duno y????😲
but yhhhhhh............see i thought i was having dejavu or i had actually dreamt of this update?? - yh dnt be shocked this happened many tyms to me - once i had a dream that the next update for another FF was on page 10 - n guess wat..........next morning it was bang in front of me PAGE 10
then i had a dream that part 19 was posted for another FF - n the next day i saw part 19 but i thought i had already read it....n so waited for 20....n wen i read 20 i was like - confused sorts..then i realised i had skipped 19 - having thought i read it before
likewise i thought i had read urz already tooo - hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!
btw i mean page 61 mein kharaabi hai - rest is working fyn
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART-35

it was early evening.... now they could wait a second to be awayfrom each other...........


......... Maan called Pari to ask her ..............????


Maan called Pari.....


MAAN : Hello PARI.... ?

PARI : hmmm..... Mere courier ke baad bhi call????

mujhe laga ki tumhe...

MAAN : PARI MUJHE GEET SE MILNA HAIN ABHI.....


he stressed his words now.... which made PARI sense something wrong....

she dint know how to respond....it took a few moments for her to respond...


MAAN : PARI PARI..... TUM SUN RAHI NA......???

PARI snapped out from her thoughts....

PARI : hmmm... haa MAAN mai sun rahi hoon....

par tum Geet ko aaj shaadi tak nahi dekh saktey.....

MAAN : PARI main kuch nahi sunna chaahtaa hoon....

tum bas kuch bhi karke Geet ko Spice World

ke paas leke aao... abhi.... jaldi karo plzzz....

no more arguments... mai nikal rahaa hoon...

He dint give any chance for PARI to speak another word...

Pari had no other choice but to follow Maan's order....after all he was MAAN SINGH KHURANA

he will take his own decisions............

PARI ran to the room where RANO was deciding Geet's jewellery , dress , and other accessories

for the Marriage.... While Geet was lost in thought.... and was simply nodding to show a positive response to all the selection done by RANO...

PARI sat beside Geet , Her sudden entry made Geet and RANo jump in surprise....


RANO : PARI... yu bachonke jaise behave mat kiya karo.....

tum hamesha khoodti kyu ho????

PARI dint give any attention to her, instead she started her own version...HER PLAN Otherwise.😉😉


PARI was starring at Geet continuously.... which both Geet and RANO dint understand

why she did .... She made her way to Geet and started to drag her along with her towards

the door.... untill RANO shouted....


RANO : PARI.........😡 tum yeh kya kar rahi ho???????????


PARI : wahi jo aap kar rahi thi DIIIIIIIIIII.............. still dragging Geet..........


RANO : Mai tho uske liye jewellery set kar rahi thi par tum tho usse keench ke

le jaa rahi ho..... kahaaaaaa????????????😡


Now pari answered with same anger..............


PARI : SPICE WORLD ...............


Rano ran after PARi as she increased her speed.... Geet was utterly confused to give any response.....so she just looked from PARI to RANO.............Rano stopped PARI....


RANO : hmmm... uhhh....huh... PARI/..... SPICE WORLD tho ek MALL hain...

ab Geet ko waha kyu lejaogi???


PARI : DI...... aapne Geet ke chappal dekhe hain????😡

RANO : haan tho???

PARI : Di ....... woh KHURANA KHAANDAN ki bahu hone wali hain....

aaur humaarey Ghar se bidaai hai uski...

itni badi baat aap miss kaisey kar paayi???

ki uske chappal matching nahi hain....


RANO : huh.......? kya???


PARI : haan mai chappal dilaane jaari hoon... bye.........


PARI was tooo quick for RANO to respond........... she was already gone.......

Geet was still silent.... she went to the car.....PARI stopped her before getting into the car...

asked her to turn around.... Geet just followed her instructions.... and to her surprise...........

PARI took out a scarf and hid Geet's face with the scarf....asked her to sit and they drove to the

MALL... where Maan was waiting fully impatient..............


in KHURANA MANSION :


DADI went to Vicky's room to speak to him, but she stopped at the door step

after listening to Vicky's talk on phone..........as soon as Vicky put the phone down....

he came near Dadi to speak....


VICKY : Hey DJ.......? aap yaha??? sahi waqt par aayi hai....

guess what??? Sam is coming..........😉


DADI : VICKY ............😡 tum jaantey ho na... Humey wo pasand nahi .....

fir kyu???hamesha apni manmaani karna teekh nahi hain vicky....


VICKY : par DJ........... wo tho Mere Banjo ko lautaane....


DADI : chup........... ab bilkul mat bolna... tum....

Kya SAM kaafi nahi???? jo wo BANJO bhi....

hum usey ghar mei nahi dekhna chaahtey hain bas....


VICKY made faces.... like a small child he turned away....When DADI realised she was Harsh.....

so she camed to him... and spoke while palcing her hand on his shoulder....


DADI : Vicky.... aap ko hum kaisey samjhaaye bete???

wo .. SAM.... itney saalon baad... ???

pata nahi kyu... humey kuch teekh nahi

lagtaa....

aap humaari baat samajhne ki koshish kyu nahi kartey????

aap humsey naraaz kaisey ho saktey hain Vicky????


VICKY : Vicky haan???? DJ ... aap humey kabhi bhi aise nahi bulaatey ,

aap humey sirf gussey main Bulati hain.... aur abhi.......???


His eyes turned slightly moist.... Which Dadi noticed instantly.....


VICKY : aap bro ki har baat maan jati hain... kya humaari ek baat

nahi Maanengi??? Plzzzz DJ........ maan jayiye na....😭

DADI was taken back.......... Vicky always spreads his cham in melting

DADI's heart like butter.............So she had no choice........ but she dint

want any trouble in the Mansion from now........ after all she went through

in past weeks... she really thought of being cautious.....


DADI : Teek hain Vicks......... hum aapki baat Maanenge.... par sirf....

Sam tak......... Banjo ke liye nahi........ Plzzzzzzzz


VICKY : DADIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIi...................😡

teekh hain.... sam nahi sirf... Banjo chalega??????


DADI had no choice..........


DADI : huh..... hmmm.... humey tho pehle se samajh na chahiye tha....

ke aapke aane se.... ghar ka naksha badal jaaegaa....

teekh hain.... aapki marzi.... lekin aaj agar Banjo se koi gadbad hui

tho apko hum kabhi Maaf nahi karenge.........pehle hi bataa rahe hain...


Listening to this ... Vicky hugs her....... and says.........


VICKY : DADI MERI JAAAAAN ............ I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUU🤗


DADI : uff.... VICKS...... taras gaye the humaarey kaan... aapse yeh sunne ke liye...

humey nahi maalum tha .... yeh sunney ke liye aapki baat Maan na padega....😉

she smiled and left.....

GOOD NIGHT DOSTO............

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya hua- ok u sed not to read and i havent but i glaned n can see the length n can still tell its not complete - right??
kya hua.....u still typing away or stuck sumwhere???
take ur tym luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear

sooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for late reply

For Part30-34

all parts awesome, fantastic dear
loved dem soooooooooooo much
Pari n Vicky r soooooo naughty n funny
Dadi n Maan convo is good
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssss cont soon

Luv u
Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update 👍🏼
can't wait untill they get married😍

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