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Posted: 14 years ago
that is great update...so loved it
and maaneet care for one another..
do keep writing and waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!
lol n vicky!hahahaha
true....hez not less dusht!
after all he is MSK's bro!
lol....really luved dupdate!
n maneet getting married sooon
n maan gnna do sumthing special in his way!
update sooooooon!

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH MY GOD!!!!!!
They're getting married on that very day!!!!!
Hayye!!!
Please update real soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg, fantastic update! Waiting 4 d marriage, yipee:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Thats Awesome......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..........
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved the way Pari demanded Maan......😆😆😆........
Loved Maaneet's phone conversation......😳😳.......
wow so kisine Maan Singh Khurana ko hi Surprise diya hain......😉😉.....
Eagerly waiting for the next part.........
Pls Update Sooooooooooon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayeeeeeeee..........😍...........Neeru..........😛.........Truly Awesum 👏,the last part took my breath away........☺️...................Geet at home & Maan totally surprised.......😲..........Mar Jawan aise pyaar pe........😉😳................
Kitna maza aaye,agar Maan shaadi ke pehle Geet ko terrace pe mile wid all his special arrangements - uff,as soon as geet enters the terrace - rose petals on her & Maan singing - Aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahaar banke - mere dil mein yun hi rehna tum pyar pyar banke........🤗☺️.............wow,Neeru - m a die hard fan of ur updates.....⭐️👏......Love u jaan........😉..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shaadi? Tonight?
Cannot wait! 😃😃😃

Thanks for the PM and continue asap ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

My dear Winnie...after so long I could catch up with Ur FF....read it from part 29....lovely story...love Maan and Vicky's bonding.👏👏.love they way Vicky could tease him...love they way they all conspired against Maan..hah..ha..ha..😆😆😆what a surprise ..so aaj raat shaadi..can't wait to attend the big celebration....pm me. I donot want to miss U this time.🤗 A big hug to you after a loooonnng time.

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Posted: 14 years ago



PART-33




Maan dint respond He just walked out....He had lots to arrange,
and Being MAAN SINGH KHURANA he knew how to get the things
done within no time......


firstly he thought of outhouse.....Geet would be there he knew........
So, he reached the outhouse..... he stood right at the door....He slightly
tilted his head bending a little forward to see.... as if he was sneaking....
but found no one..... He waited to hear any noise....but no use... It was
just silence.... which came on his way.....He sensed something wrong...
stepping in the outhouse....he glanced the whole way.... but found no glimpse
of His Geet...he started walking out disheartedly,but he felt a hand on his
shoulder.... he turned slightly,saw DADI with a wide grin on her face....
she started her version....

DADIMA : Maan bete......? aap baahar kya kar rahe hai???
aapko tho andar hona chahiye...arrangements
dekhne... ke liye....

DADI smiled to herself seeing anxiety..
in Maan's face... to see his Geet.
Maan was actually eager.... but he decides to hide his feelings as ever...
so,he gave his usual rough look ----> like the MAAN SINGH KHURANA
and said


MAAN : MAAN SINGH KHURANA kisi ke liye
arrangements nahi kartaa....
DADI giggled.... which made him more irritated....Firstly, he dint find Geet
and to add ... DADI is playing ...He shouted...

MAAN : DADIMA ... aapne tho kaha tha Geet yahi hain...
Mujhe lagta hain aapko chashme lene padenge..
kyu???

DADIMA : MAAN ......😡
humhe chashme ki koi zarurat nahi....
waisey humne... thode hi kaha tha ki
Geet outhouse mai hain/???
humne sirf itna kahaa tha ki wo yahi hogi,....😉

DADI was really loving Maan's irritation....

MAAN : DADI plzzzzz aap paheliya bhujhana bandh kijiye..
aur Batayiye ki Geet kaha hain???😡

DADIMA : Maan....Geet jaha bhi ho? tumhe ussey kya?
waisey bhi shaadi se pehle ... Dulha---dhulhan
ka milna manaa hain....Jaantey hain aap???


MAAN decides not to argue...and says...

MAAN : par DADIMA humey batane mai kya harz hain???
aap itna tho keh hi sakti hain na...ki Geet iss waqt
kaha hain???

DADIMA sternly said : NAHI.... BILKUL NAHI,........😳

MAAN was not about to give up....so he started his Magical...charming
talk...He put his arms on Dadima's shoulder... and started walking along
with her .....as they used to do When Maan was just Maan ... not
Dhust Danav....😆 he smiled and made her smile.... and it seemed like
his magic is working... to DADI ... who was dying to see a generous and
loving Maan... for a while it seemed like her dream came true....
she was in her thought.... when Maan waved his hands in front of her
which brought her back to senses....

MAAN lovingly said like a kid....

MAAN : please DADI...... ek baar batayiye....
Geet .... kaha hain???

It was like she was under some spell for a moment...
she was lost in the innocence in her dhust Grandson
for the first time....

DADI cupped his face and said right away....

DADIMA : Hmmm.... aap ko tho jeetna hi tha na Bete...
Maan Singh Khurana jo tehre... [ she giggled]
Wo pari aur Rano ke saath hain...
aur Wo dono kaha hain...?
yeh hum aapko nahi bata saktey...
MAaan looked at her questioningly....

DADIMA : kyuki Pari ne humey khud nahi bataaya....
..... aapke liye naa sahi hum Vicky ke
liye hi sahi... hazaar baar pooch chukey
hain... par Wo bhi aapko takkar dene nikli...
ZIDD MEIN....😉

MAAN : DADIIIIIIIII............. he made faces....
ab mai... k.........

he realised how he behaved just now... it was just not him....
Geet made magic.... she changed him....he snapped out from
his thoughts... listening to dadi say...

DADIMA : MAAN .....mein ye outhouse ki decoration aap pe chodti hoon
Dyaan rahe... mein apni bahu ko niraasha nahi dekhna chahti...

Maan was confused..... happy,delighted... he had mixed emotions....
running like a wave....he actually thought of making out some surprise,
he was thinking all the way ... to bring Geet to outhouse tonight....as
it was the reason, place, the moments.... from where their love
started to blossom....

MAAN : kyaaaaa??? DADI...?? Hum aaj yahaa???

DADI dint know how long she waited to see such happiness in Maan's face....
she smiled heartily and said in response....

DADIMA : Maan bete.... humey lagaa... aap aapki har dard...
har khushi.... aapki zindagi ke har ehem pal...
yahaa guzaarey hain... tho humey laga tha....
ki aap APNI GEET ko yaheen lana chahenge...
kyu ki wo pal... hum jaantey hain... ki aapki zindagi
ka sabse khubsoorat aur yaadgaar pal hoga...

...................... hum ..... sahi...... they na Maan.........????


Maan was in awe feeling the concern his DADI had for him....
she was his strength,his only support... only reason to survive...
before Geet came to his life....He had a lone tear near the corner
of his eyes.... He could not be stubborn anymore....He was Maan
the loving and Generous.... DADI's Dream Maan.... he hugged her...
with which his Heart became feather light...... at that moment...he
was content...happy....eager.... delighted.... he became a small kid
again.... when Dadi stroked his head... and walked away happily....
but on her way back someone hit her.... ???? Who???????


Aur kaun ho sakta hain????? it was VICKY the annoying guy..........😆


DADIMA : VICKY>>>>>>>>😡 aap kya kabhi dekh kar nahi chal saktey hain???
subhey se do baar miley... hain aur dono baar takkar ke saath...
Takkar dena aapne apnaa shauk tho nai banaliya na bete????

VICKY : DJJJJJJJJ dont call me bete.... and all.... aur ha
mai koi takkar nahi diya.... woh tho sirf ek bhaag raha tha...
madhuri ke liye aur aap milgayi....

DADI : MADHURI .......??? Vicks..... ab kaunsa gaana sun raha thaaaa???
zara humey bhi tho pata chale.... [ she made a face ]

VICKY : hmm.... sab bigaad diya... aur gaana pooch rahi hain??

DADI : huh... aap bhool gaye vicky... sirf DJ hi aapki madad kar sakti hain...
fir chaahe aap jise bhi dhoonde... MADHURI ya fir koi PARI...?
she widened her eyes waiting for response....

Vicky : So... tho.... hain .....? ........ Waise bhi Wo bro dude...
[ Dadi was being angry]
mera matlab wahi.... aapke BAHADUR POTEY.... [ smiled to himself]
woh tho kabhi meri koi madad nahi karta.... hmmmm

DADI was irritated.... she never wanted to hear anything about Maan
that too from Vicky, he always picture's him as Dhust ...which he was
not anymore.... so,she started to walk away... and Vicky instantly came
infront of her... holded his ears... and said....

VICKY : sorry DADI JIIIIIIIIIII

DADI was taken back... he never called her like that.... she eventually
ended up smiling.... and asked...

DADIMA : hmmm... [ acting naraaz ]
ab yuhi baitoge yaaa....?
gaana bhi bataogey???

VICKY : GANAAA ..........? [ his face lights like a star ]
haaa DJ.... aap hi tho mix karengi... 😉
lo earphone... aap hi sunlo...

DADIMA could not stop his excitement.... and heard the song....it was....


BHOLI SI SURAT.... AANKHON MEIN MASTI....
DOOR KOI SHARMAAYE.... HAAYE HAAYE....
ZEK JHALAK DHIKLAAYE KABHI...
KABHI... AANCHAL MEIN CHUP JAAYE...
HAAYE...... HAAYE.....

MERI NAZAR SE TUM DEKHO THO....?
YAAR NAZAR WO AAYEEE....


DADIMA could'nt stop laughing.....she laughed aloud... so did Maan.....
who was looking at them from far away....

DADIMA : hahahha... huh.... VICKS.... yeh gaane ka context tho jaantey
ho na bete... [ she was trying to control her laugh ]

VICKY : Context se kya lena dena hain DADI????
mai tho Madhuri ke liye.....

DADIMA : haan... MAADHURI KE LIYE...
Apne KWAAB mein GAA rahe they
HAI NAAA........???

and she bursted out laughing again

VICKY : KWAAB MEIn?????
Lekin SRK ko tho Dikhthi hain na....???

DADIMA : haan... par uski nazar se,.... tumhaari naih...
tho aap use TV mein dhoond lijiye...
yahaa nahi....

she smiles and walks away....Maan already walked in to the outhouse
to set up for the surprise.... for His Geet....

MAAN KI GEET .........😳

he was very Busy... when he got a call...he lifted the calll
it was Pari.... who started to blabber...

MAAN : PARI jaldi bolo.... kya hainn???
yahaa bahut kaam pada hain...

PARI : arey yaar... aaj ke din bhi kaam...?
mujhe tho laga koi mere behen ko
miserably miss kar rahe hongey...
LEKIN ... UFF>..... THIS BUSINESS MEN........😡

MAAN was walking around... making arrangements even while speaking...
he came across the closed door... and something slided into the house....
from beneath....

He bent down....To look at it.... it looked like a courier....
he was not responding to PARI ....so pari asked...

PARI : tho AAKHIR PAHUNCH GAYA....

MAAN : kya???

PARI : JO TUM KHOL RAHE HO....???

MAAN : PARI TUM BHOOT BHi HO????
TUMey kaisey pata mai
kuch khol raha
hoon???

PARI : kyuki wo courier maine bheja hain
MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA.....

MAAN was confused....

MAAN : TUMNEY...????

PARI : HAAN... HAAN... MAIn....e

she saw GEEET smiling and heading towards her... so she hanged the phone...




WELL that's for the day
hope u all like it...😳

comments are mandatory...😆
kyuki mai spoiler bhi de
rahi hoon...😳😛

GOOD NIGHT DOSTO....🤗





SPOILER :



MAAN at a MALL








Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear that was really nice....i am so loving it...
great update.....maan and his irritation....dadi
is just too good...keep writing

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