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HEY ALL LOVELY MANEETIANS [:p]

Originally posted by: sravani899

hi neeru

wow nice dear

part 15 : wow dear nice update yaar😃

and sasha and the disastser ahhhh 😆

ok sometimes happens but dear no one came to help her except geet its not good even maan😲 oh well what ever 😆😆

i loved the adi smile 😆

and pinky's care towards geet its really fantastic dear 👏👏

pinky is such a sweet and lovly friend 😉😊

part 16:

wow neeru all i can do is this👏👏👏

wow geet and pinky dosti really neeru i love u for that she needs a friend like her dear😉😛

and maan pari relationship is nice😉

i loved that geet is happy after such along time😃😳

i like sasha dear see she left geet and who comes to resq or he geet none other than maan 😉

sasha indirectly playing a cupid role dear so i like the character😉

i liked the way maan is wanted to take care of geet😳

wonderful and amazing part dear👏

do continue dear😊

with love

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Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much dear ..... 🤗

i'm soooooooooo happy that u liked the updates

glad to see ur "SMILIES" [:p]

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Yaar thats Awesome👏

Loved it

Yaar kitna kuch hogaya hain. 😲😲😲

But I Loved the way U moved the story and thats Amazing😃😃😃

First when i read that Geet reached Mumbai and she fainted on the road I was totally Shocked.😲

But after Pari's entrance again as the Doctor Im relieved that Geet is in safe Hands.😊

Yaar ab jaldi se Update karna Please ab aur intezaar nahin hoga mujhse.

Please Yaaar.................

for u only i gave two updates
sweetheart...

and im glad that u liked them....

next update im posting soon 😉

Originally posted by: ansah

too good 👏

awesome....loved it

poor geet felt bad for her....

hate devtara....the devil couple

keep writing 👏

hope geet is fine

Thank u soooooooo much....

and yup i assure GEET is perfectly alright...

Originally posted by: shonasukirti

beautiful update

Thanks a bunch sweety... [:p]

Originally posted by: ansah

really nice...to good....

loved it....

keep writing👏

geet as a teacher

interesting

Yeah..... Interesting... 😉

and thank u soooooo much

im glad that u liked the updates

Originally posted by: desigurl953

wow..such an coincidence...how i wish nice thing like this occur in the show itself....it'll be cool..please update soon

THank u.... and even i hope some

part of my fiction wud be

aired someday... 😉

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

plz update soon...............nice twist....

Thank u...........dear

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Yaar ab ek aur twist....😲.......

Im really shocked that Geet escaped from Pari😲

But Im relieved that Geet got settled somewhere and she is fine.

Thats a Fantastic Update Yaar👏

Will be waiting for the next part

Thank u........dear

Originally posted by: vinithaa

i really loved the both parts..i felt the warmth in both parts...they are just amazing...plz continue soon

Thanks a LOTTTTTT dear....

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

<font color="#9933ff">Awesome part yaar...
Hope Pari tells Maan about Geet's whereabouts...
Continue soon!!!</font>

Yeah.... u have to wait

for the next one to see 😉

Originally posted by: taman07

nice part.

Thank uuuuuu..... 🤗

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

🤗 thnk oyu so much it was so awesum 👏

i cudnt catch up with sum previous parts bt today aftr reading all missed parts i realized story has gone too far but i loved it thnk god pari din call maan

Haahhaha....

thank u sooo much

and im glad ur updated

with my FF now....

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome ff
loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
thanks
con soon

Thanks for going through my FF

and liking it...

And a "WARM WELCOME TO U DEAR....."🤗

and yes i will make sure ur included

in the pm list [:p]

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb part!

how can geet do this to maan!....she went away witout telling anything to maan!....poor maan!...

wat will pari do now???...how will she manage the situation???

continue soon!

Ohhh.... sweety u have to wait.....

Originally posted by: geet.a

Neeru!!

Big hugs!!

i'm so sorry for late reply..

I LOVE the way you write..itne pyaar se...the dialogues are amazing and the characters completely true to themselves!!

awesome stuff my love!!

And u r keeping the suspense up too which is just great!!

keep it up :)

lots of love

MERI JAAN

MY MEETHI FF PRINCY

Thank u sooooooooo much

for late but sweet comments
LOVE u dear ....🤗

Originally posted by: Maaneet-Fan

LOVE LOVE you're fan fic!!

Thanks a lotttttttttttt sweetheart

Originally posted by: sarakhan98

waoo.. Great love ur fan fic

thank a lottt.....

Originally posted by: seema05

l looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve it 😃

Thank u sooooooooo much for liking the update...



THANKS A LOTTT

all u lovely MANEETIANS

FOR LIKING MY FICTION...

I ASSURE MY NEXT UPDATE

VERY SOOOON 🤗




FINGERS CROSS FOR TODAYS EPISODE

PART- 19



The old woman took GEET to the office and GEET was appointed to teach the children
and take care of them,to which Geet felt she would Give her fullest ....


IN KHURANA MANSION :

Maan woke up for a slight sound when Chandu came in and asked
whether to lock the outhouse, or he would like to stay there again....
for which Maan was extremely shocke and asked Chandu about Geet...

MAAN : LOCK???? [ gave an angry look ]

MAAN : Yeh tum kya keh rahey ho????

Geet kaha hai??

CHANDU : Sir ... woh.....

GEET MEMSAAB THO CHALEGAYE... [ said worriedly in his innocent voice ]

MAAN was shocked to hear this and to assure the
Statement he enquired...

MAAN : Chale gaye??? Matlab ????
Tumhe kisne kaha yeh
sab????

CHANDU : Kisi ne nahi sir....
WO tho humne khud
apne aankhon se dekha hai...
GEET MADAM KO JAATEY HUE....
APKE SAMAAN KE SAATH....

MAAN : THO TUMNEY KAL KYU NAHI BATAAYA MUJHEY???

Maan's anger was to the peak and he was clutching his teeth and
shouted to Ask chandu about GEET...
MAAN's tone scared CHANDU and he replied in a shivering voice...

CHANDU : wooh... sir.... humari MAA ki tabyat karaab ho gai tho
hum kal jaldi chale gaye the... Hum ne Dadima se
permission.....

MAan stopped him from saying anymore.... and he said in a stern voice

MAAN : TUM JAO YAHAA SE..... Aur ha .... mere samaan yahaa shift kardo...
mai aaj se yahi rahungaa.....

CHANDU : ji... sir.... mai kartaa hu...chaltaa hoon sir...

Chandu leaves from outhouse.... while Maan who was squeezing something
which he had in his hand... Looked down to notice , it was Geet's Doll which
he found the previous night....

Shattered MAAN eased his grip over the DOLL and on opening his fist,he found
the found the DOLL broken, He fell on the couch with tears which settled in his eyes,
and mended the doll and bought it back to usual state....

MAAN : kyu kiya tumne aisey GEET???? tum mujhe chod kar kahaa chali gayi???

Kahaa doondunga mai tumhey??? ek baar mujhey bataa tho sakti thi....

Ab mai ........

He stops speaking to himself as all the scaring thoughts about GEET randomly keep
coming into his mind..... he instantly Gets up... calls to police and gives GEET's details...
he turns back after the phone call... when he see's CHANDU who came to arrange the
outhouse for him to stay again....

from this day.... MAAN SINGH KHURANA was working all alone in
outhouse having Geet's doll on his table which made him feel GEET's presence...
he stopped visiting the office, as AADI used to bring any of
the required files to sign or have a glance on......DEV who knew
the evil ideas and the cruelty of his wife, was waiting for a choice to
speak to MAAN about GEET and make his confession, as he was determined
to go through any kind of punishment his bro would decide,bcoz he knew he
deserved one......

MUMBAI :

Pari was shocked to turn back as she dint find GEET where she last saw her...

PARI : NURSE.... GEET kahaa hai????

NURSE : Humey ... hum tho aap ke saath the...
humne unhe dekha nahi hai MAAM....

PARI searches for GEET in whole hospital.... and finally when she learns that
GEET ran away... she settles down in the chair in her cabin sad and disheartened....
RANO who came to have lunch with her angel PARI, patted on her shoulder,
to which PARI dint react....

RANO : PARI.... kahaa khoyi ho tum bachaa???
kya hogaya??? tum kuch bol kyu nahi
rahi ho???

PARI : DI......... [ she started in a low voice ]

RANO : bolo pari kya baat hai??? kisi
patient se problem hai kya???
humey bataao, dekhte hai ki
hum koi madad kar sakte ho tho...

PARI : GEET... DI...

RANO : GEET..........???
uska pataa chala??
kya wo ghar pahunch gayi???

PARI : wo... MUMBAI MAI HAI...

RANO : MUMBAI MAI......????
tumhey kaisey pata???

Pari explained all that happened till that very moment....
and started crying...

PARI : humne...huh..hu... MAAN ko...
promise kiya tha ke hum GEET
aur unko milaaenge... par... huh..
Hum nahi kar paaye... DI

and hugged RANO....who caringly said...

RANO : koi baat nahi pari... ismai tumhaari koi galathi nahi...
bhagwaan pe barosa rakho... sab teekh hoga...
mujhe lagtaa hai ki tumhey MAAN ko inform karna
chahiye... taaki wo yahaa akey use doondhle...

PARI was about to respond, when her phone started ringing,
knowing Pari's situation... RANO picked up the phone....

RANO : hello.... Shruthi....? kya baat hai???
tumney hospital ke timings mai phone
kyu kiya hai??? sab teekh tho hai...?
bachche tho teek hai na... Shruthi...???

SHRUTHI : haa... DI sab teekh hai... koi problem nahi hai...
wo tho bas Eashaa madam ne kahaa tha ki ek nayi.
staff member ko appoint kiya hai, wohi bataane ke
liye phone kiya tha.... aap tho yuhi pareshaan hoti hai....

RANO : teek hai.... Lo PARI ko bataao... usey khushi hogi..

PARI : haa... shruthi... Bolo... Naam kya hai???
kaisi hai???? bachche kush thi hai ussey????

Shruthi : pari MAAM... ek min rukiye mai itney saarey
jawaab kaisey de sakti hu ek saath???

PARI : haan baba... ruk gayi... ab jaldi se batao....

SHRUTHI: wooo...subey...MRS. Chatterji ne unhe appoint karne ki
suggestion di hai... unkaa naam GEET hai... filhaal wo
bahut hi weak hai tho unhe sick room mai rest karne
ke liye kahaa tha easha MAAM ne....

As soon as PARI's ears heard GEET's name...she hugged RANO in delight
and ran out in speed of light... Rano understood the reason and got back to work...

PARI reached the orphanage.... asked shruthi if Geet was awake...
and as shruthi denied ... she went to see her,and was contented
to see her a bit better...then she remembered the way Geet ran
away from hospital,she quickly moved to shruthi ... and gave her
a prescription which she prepared for GEET inorder to treat her...
saying her to take good care of Geet
and she asked shruthi not to reveal the existence of Pari and Rano
to Geet,and also told her not to use their names in any of the conversations
and instruction her to inform this to the rest of the staff...she turned around
and told to herself...

PARI : hmmm.... ab Yeh mujhse nahi... bhaag sakti... aur jab
mujhe teekh lagega tho... mai ussey baat karungi....
aur mujhe uski problem pata chalne pe... mai MAAN ko
inform karungi.... HMMM.... yahi sahi rahega...

Saying this she smiled at shruthi and left to the hospital.....

Geet slowly, opened her eyes... now in a bit better position
and bit healthier.... she started to meet the children,get to
know them... and their personalities...


NAINTARA came to DEV to speak and he stared at her...
with soooo much anger... and she dint care for it now....
she said ...

NAINTARA : DEV... humey shopping jaana hai...
humey shaam ko aaney mai der hogi...

DEV was about to snap out... but something striked to his mind...and he let her go....


THATS FOR TODAY FRIENDS....
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...
PLEASE LEAVE UR COMMENTS....
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__lots of love...🤗

Nice update..at least pari got to know where geet is and i am sad for maan...he should know where geet is...anyways will wait for the next part...plzzz update soon

great update!!

thanks a lot for letting know nice update wait the next chapter

Just saw your FF...
read first four parts....
Amazing😊 😊 😊
please add me to your PM list....

Read all 19 parts 😊
Loved it 😊

can already imagine geet playing with the kiddos and maan comes there to retrieve her....hope that happens..thanks for the update

Thanks 4 da welcome
awesome update
loved it
glad pari know where she is
con soon
thanks 4 da pm