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wow ...great update...!!!👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: charmed ones

wow ...great update...!!!👏

pyaar eder bhi hai...aur uder bhi hai.....!!!😳

so ab kiya kera ga Dev....poor soul he is stuck....!!!!😕😆

oye how cum u say he's a poor soul???

he's a culprit jaanu....

he ruined our princesss life....

i cant forgive him... 😡

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh

oye how cum u say he's a poor soul???

he's a culprit jaanu....

he ruined our princesss life....

i cant forgive him... 😡

hi neeru

PART-17


DEV got another shock.... and by now he was sweating and was frightened...
he sneakily managed to move away and get hold of naintara....
where he was again shocked to notice.... Naintara speaking to
a detective about following DEV and reporting her about every moment of DEV
he felt dejected, he dint know what to do.....he hit his fist against a tree
and hurted himself.....


GEET still stood alone in tears..... her heart dint return to the usual state....she fell down on
her knees and cried bitterly.... on the other hand, RANO who was searching for PARI came
across Geet but, by then Geet came to usual position, and ran away....
So she left to speak to Pari who was still standing along with MAAN....

RANO : Acha hua tum mil gayi Pari.... Mai kabse dundh rahi thi tujhe....

PARI : DI.... mai yahi hu.... aap kya ab bhi mujhe bachi samajh rahe hai???

RANO : nahi .... PARI... mai dekh rahi hu... tu Kaafi Badi ho gayi hai...
apne liye DULHA bhi chun liya hai.... 😉

Maan and PARI feel uneasy by this statement.....

RANO : Mai kush hu.... ki tum dono ne aakhir saath... rehn...

PARI : DI........... RUK JAYIYE.... BAS .... AB aur Mat bolna plzzz...

RANO : kyu??? kyu??? abhi se sharma rahi ho??? 😉

PARI and MAAN say at a time....

MAAN : AAP JAISEY SOCH RAHEY HAI WAISAA KUCH NAHI, HUM DONO SAATH NAHI HAI....

PARI : AAP JAISEY SOCH RAHEY HAI WAISAA KUCH NAHI, HUM DONO SAATH NAHI HAI....

RANO rolls her eyes and thinks PARI had finally left her influence on Maan
not to marry her.... and feels this girl will never change....

RANO : kya??? PARI .... Tumney unhe kya kehke daraya hai????
aap batayiye MAAN ... isne ZAROOR kuch ultaa seedha kaha hoga...

MAAN : ji .... nahi ... wo... hum dononko hi shaadi se problem hai...

and starts off with his sweet love story which was waiting for acceptance
from his sweetheart GEET.... 😳

As soon as RANO's ears heard GEET.... she within seconds said

RANO : GEET...? wahi hai jo mujhe subhey mili thi....?

MAAN : ha.... wahi hai GEET ....

Rano is worried now... she worriedly said....

RANO : par wo tho .... mera matlab ... wo.... wahaan... [ pointing hands she said,she mumbled ]

Maan too felt worried now and enquired...

MAAN : wo waha... kya???? BOLIYE RANO ji.... AAP KYA KEHNA CHAHTI HAI....???

RANO : wo.... maine us ladki ko abhi dekha hai... wahaan....

PARI interrupted to say...

PARI : DI... office bus kabki nikal chukaa hai ... tho wo wahaa kaisey hogi???

MAAN at once felt startled.... to what rano said..

RANO : Nahi pari... maine dekha hai uss ladki ko.... yahi pe....
wo akeli thi.... GHUTNO pe baitke shayad ro rahi thi...
Mujhe dekh kar wahaa se chali gayi...

Each word told by RANO effected MAAN...

MAAN : GEET ro rahi thi............???? par kyu???
MUJHE USEY DHUNDNA HOGA.....

Saying this PARI, MAAN and RANO searched for her....all over the resort
but could not find her.... MAAN and PARI exchanged their phone numbers
and MAAN left the resort.... got into the car and started searching for GEET.....

DEV's moments effected NAINTARA and she turned around.... and was shocked to
see Dev's hand bleeding... she came close to hold and see his hand but DEV dint
give her a chance.... He saw her with soooooooo much anger That she just stood still,
wondering what went soo wrong with DEV.... and tried to ask dev...

NAINTARA : DEV aap aisey kyu dekh rahe hai??? kya baaat hai??

DEV : kya baat hai??? NAINTARA...?? Tumhey kal pata chalega...
ab ghar chalo....

HE went away like a storm....Hence NAINTARA dint have any
other choice but to follow him, so she followed him and they drove
back home.....


GEET quickly reached home hiring a cab... and packed her bags....

she came down to the door... She said to herself :

GEET : yahaa... is ghar mai rehkar... mujhe kitni
himmat mili ... hai.... Maan sir ke saath
bitayaa hua har lamhaa... kitni kushi di
hai... unse ladna, ultaa jawaab dena....
unki baate sunna... ab kuch nahi hoga...
meri yahaa koi zarurat nahi hai.... Maan
sir ko apni mangetar mil gayi, aur... ab tho
DADIMA bhi teekh hai... aur khush bhi hongey...

" MAIN JAA RAHI HU MAAN SIR... AB KABHI
AAPKE SAAMNE NAHI AUNGI.... SHAYAD AAPKE
LIYE YAHI TEEKH HOGA... MERA SAAYA BHI
AAPKE LIYE TEEKH NAHI HAI "

Saying this she leaves Outhouse and Even KHURANA MANSION
forever.... her heart denies her actions but she is determined
not to be a trouble in MAAN's life... she left, she left alone....

Meanwhile, after searching for long time MAAN returns back
to home.. directly he enters the outhouse.... he calls for GEET,
and gets no response... he searches every corner... but he's left
with no clue....he asks CHANDU,NAKUL,DADIMA... everyone...
but he gets no answer... DEV watches this and he too gets worried,
as he thought he's the reason for all this disaster,he felt very bad
felt like killing himself, for the reason ... he broke his bro's trust
for another time.... he could not take it anymore .... he rushed out
and drove away somewhere....

DADIMA was enquiring about the situation but MAAN gave a deaf ear...
went to the outhouse with little hope... he was walking in GEET's
room, he came across a cute Doll, which reminded him of the day
when they were locked in the room and GEET stated that she
always carried it along with her like her shadow... it was broken...
he quickly gave a glance to all the corners and was surprised to
see the wardrobe empty... he fell hold his head and felt very worried
his heart cried and cried bitterly... he waited in the outhouse the
whole night.... and he dint know when he felt asleep...

Geet Reached MUMBAI..... the next day,But had no idea what to do... Where to go
She roamed here and there looking for some place to stay, and she was drained
out by afternoon... she was soooo stressed... that she could not carry herself...
She fell on the ground.... in the middle of the road... in the scorching sun ....
she fainted and ... the passers by... took her to a near by hospital... she was treated
and the reports were sent to the docter....

NURSE : docter ... Wo ladki ke reports aagaye...

DR : ... hmm... ek kaam kijiye sister, WOH reports

DR.PARI ko dikhayiye... mujhe OT mai jaana hai...

[ as i already stated... in my earlier updates... PARI worked
as a gynecologist in the same hospital where RANO works
.... RANO was a Cardiologist ... Hope u all remember... ]

nurse enters Pari's cabin and submits the reports..

NURSE : MAM...DR. REEMA ne aapko yeh reports dene ke liye kaha hai...

PARI : HA... sister idhar laao ... mai dekhti hu...

PARI : yeh kaunse patient ke reports hai???
yeh meri patient tho nahi hai....??? [ asks in confusion ]

NURSE : nahi MAAM... yeh tho abhi road pe behosh hogai ... tho
kisi bhaley insaaan ne inhe yahaa admit kar diya tha...

PARI : kya wo abhi yahi hai ...?

NURSE : nahi maam woh insaan paise dekar chale gaye...
par wo ladki abhi bhi behosh padi hai....

PARI : Kya??? LEJAO mujhe uss ladki ke paas...
aap log itney irresponsible kaisey hosaktey
ho? aap logonko humey pehle hi inform
karna chahiye tha...

rushes towards the ward, where Geet is laying on the bed
fainted....


PARI comes close to see the patient.... and steps back as she
sees GEET.... she was traumatized ....her voice choked...

PARI : inhey.... yahaa.... kaun laaye the???

NURSE : pata nahi maam ...

PARI : yeh inhi ke repots hai na sister...????
aapne kisi aur ke repots tho nahi diye
hai mujhe,...? yaad kijiye...

NURSE : nahi MAAM... humey pakka pata hai
yeh in ke hi reports hai...

PARI enquired many times and got the same answer...
she said in shock.... barely able to speak,
even to herself...

PARI : GEET .... Pregnant hai.............??????


I WILL EXTEND THIS UPDATE IN A WHILE
please have patience...

too good 👏👏👏👏

PART-18




PARI enquired many times and got the same answer...
she said in shock.... barely able to speak,
even to herself...

PARI : GEET .... Pregnant hai.............??????


Pari felt... like she should inform MAAN immediately, she again felt
she should first speak to GEET and enquire if she even knew
that she was pregnant,she dint know what to do... she was utterly confused.....
she turned to speak to the nurse... she walked out to give some instructions
to nurse about GEET... Meanwhile, GEET opened her eyes... when she heard the voice...
she was pale... she was very weak to sit errect,but tried her best and was able to do so,
she looked around her,she was shocked to see pari, who was partly visible from the door....
she jumped out from the bed...


GEET : PARI......??? BABAJI...yeh yaha?? inhone mujhe dekh liya tho???
MAAN SIR ko pata chal jaega mai yahaa hoon...NAHI YEH nahi hosakta...

saying this she managed to escape and ran away immeditely...
she came out of the hospital.... she stood on the road waiting to
cross the road... an old woman approached her,and asked her a favour...

OLD WOMAN : BETE.... mujhe zara road cross karado...
mai teekh se dekh anhi sakti [ she said in shivering voice ]

GEET : Ji... ayiye mai karaadungi... dyaan se... maa ji..

Geet forgot her weakness and holding her hand helped the woman to
cross the road...

GEET : Maa ji...aapko kaha jaana hai???
bataayiye... mai aapki koi madad
kar sakti hu tho...mujhe achaa lagega...

Old woman was still shivering,Geet gave support by holding her shoulders,
she said...

OLD WOMAN : BETE... mujhe ... hmm.. [ tried to recollect ]
wo ... "Salaam Baalak" ke paas
jaana hai....

GEET : " SALAAM BALAK " ?????

OLD WOMAN : Haan... bachaa... wo... anaath alay hai
mai wahaa... har mahiney jaati hoon...
un bachchon ke saath rehke mujhe
Sukoon milegaa...mere tho bache meri
fikar hi nahi kartey....

[ starts caughing... Geet helps her by patting on her back ]

GEET : Ji... MAA ji... Mujhey wo jagey ka pataa dijiye... mai
aapko le jaaungi....

and they start off to the orphanage...on the way GEET looks on the sides of the road...
and seeing the greenary.... it reminds... her of the drive to resort with MAAN
and her eyes start tearing... but she controls herself by taking a deep breath...
the old woman asked Geet about her life, and Geet told her about being shifted
to MUMBAI to be independent and she also told that,she was searching for job
and also a place to shelter herself... she stated that she was ready to do any job...
Finally they reach the orphanage.... and GEET feels sooo glad to see all the children
.... even they all were different from others,few were conjoined,few
were physically handicaped, few were abondoned...but their spirits were high...
she felt as if God had helped her to reach such a place ,to get immense inspiration
and gain her self confidence...

The old women looked at Geet and said slowly in a caring voice...

OLD WOMAN : BETE... aap yahaa in bachonko padhaana pasand karengi????

GEET was glad to listen to those words, she felt gifted...she felt the warmth in the
atmosphere.... it seemed to her as if she knew all of them.... each one had a
blood relation with her... she felt at home... HOME IN HER VIEW....

The old woman took GEET to the office and GEET was appointed to teach the children
and take care of them,to which Geet felt she would Give her fullest ....


I WILL UPDATE SOONER....
HOPE U ALL LIKE THE WAY
STORY IS MOVING,
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__ lots of love to all MANEETIANS 😳

really nice...to good....

wow..such an coincidence...how i wish nice thing like this occur in the show itself....it'll be cool..please update soon