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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Fabulous Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Thanq so much for the Lovely twist again
Im so Happy that Geet is under Pari's Protection........
Thats Great.................
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan condition made me 😭 pari meet her feel 😛 milwa do na dono ko please asap cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Neeru.....😲...U R from which world ???????? So passion,so obsession,so tenderness,so love,so pain,soooooooooooo kya kya kahun...😉..m short of words.....😆.......But,amazingly updated.......⭐️👍🏼👏..m sorry,i was on tour,so can't read ur updates,but abhi maine cyber par check kiya toh i was smiling & others were yah ladki kaun hai????? seriously,u r a darling....🤗..ab jaldi se maan ko bhi mumbai bula lo aur dono ko sea-shore par sunset ke samay mila dena....☺️........Love u darling.........😳..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part...
Feeling bad for Maan
Cant wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome....it is so sad.....
i am so heartbroken......geet gone
and maan in search....
loved it it is really nice
keep writing👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago


Comments will be answered after i update...
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Posted: 14 years ago


PART-20




NAINTARA : DEV... humey shopping jaana hai...
humey shaam ko aaney mai der hogi...

DEV was about to snap out... but something striked to his mind...and he let her go....


MAAN was trying hard to concentrate on work, while his concern towards Geet
made the task difficult for him....

He seriously looked at the papers on his table.... as he heard the wind due to which curtains
flipped. ........... this reminded him of the day when Geet opened the windows to let the air
inside.... and closed them immediately when she saw his angry face....
with this thought a smooth smile made a way on his face which was soon turned gloomy....
he slowly stood and walked to the window.... and for the first time he faced the
fresh natural air which made him calm and refreshing....


DEV walked into DADI's room and said

DEV : DADIMA.... BRO kahaa hai???

DADIMA : Woh tho waapis apne ghar chale gaye BETE... [ she sadly said ]

DEV : Apne ghar????

DADIMA : haa... unka ghar.... outhouse... [ said making faces ]

to which DEV could not help laughing....
But again his mind was back to the point...
he could not waste a moment now, as he knew
NAINTARA would turn up at any moment, he
dint trust her anymore.....Doing this he headed towards DADIMA,
took her hand in his,and said...

[ He already instructed the watchman
not to allow Naintara inside the outhouse,
unless he asked him to do... ]


DEV : DADIMA... Chaliye mere saath...

DADIMA : haan... par aap humey kaha lejaana chahte hai dev???

DEV : Bro ke paas.... aap kuch mat kahiye DADIMA...
aapko sab pata chal jayega... aap bas mere saath chaliye...

DADIMA : DEV bete ... hum budhey ho chukey hai...
hum aap ke jaisey tez nahi chal saktey hai...
rukiye tho sahi.... itni jaldi bhi kya hai???

They reached the outhouse...where MAAN still stood near the window...
staring in void.... with all the impressions left by Geet running in his mind...

DADIMA : DEV hum pahunch gaye hai... ab tho zara ruk saktey hai na...

MAAN turned back to see DADIMA and interpreted she would
act again to get him back to Khurana mansion,to which he made his
mind not to give a thought....

MAAN : DADIMA..??? DEV...........??
Aap dono yahaa??? is waqt???
kya... baat hain???
sab teekh tho hai????

DADIMA : humey kya poochte hai MAAN ???
aap apne pyaarey bhai se poochiye...
woh bahut utaawle hai aapse baat
karney ke liye....

MAAN : huh....? kya baat hai Dev???
tumhey kya kehna hai???

DEV : bro... mujhe aapse bahut hi zaroori baat kehni hai...

MAAN : haan DEV... bolo... Par jaldi... mujhe kaam karnaa hai...

DADIMAA : Arey waah... yeh lo... dono Bhai ek
dusrey se baat karna chahtey hai...
tho hum yahaa kya kar rahey hai???

DEV : nahi DADIMA... aap ka yahaa rehnaa zaruri hai...

DADIMA : MAAN dekhaa aapne??? ab log aapse akele milne se bhi Dartey hai... 😉

DEV : DADIMAA... plzzz... baat bahut serious hai... zaruri bhi...

Finally, three of them settle down and Dev starts to say

DEV: Bro... shayad Maine ne yeh baat aapko naa pehle naa bataa kar
galathi ki hai.... par mera yakeen maaniye... yeh meri zindagi ki
aakhri galathi hogi....

He started with how they he was trying every possible but,sincere and
truthful way in making a trial to repay the loans he piled up till date,
and how depressed he was... not to have any choice left to make
his efforts work and help him....

One day, he returned home, disheartened.... very dipressing...
he sat on the chair... when Naintara came in front of him, smiled
wickedly and told him..

NAINTARA : DEV... humey pehle se hi pata tha....
aap nikammey hain....koi kaam teekh
se nahi kar saktey hain aap...

DEV : FOR GOD SAKE NAINTARA... leave me alone
tumhey meri pareshaani nazar nahi aathi hai kya???
mai apni taraf se poori koshish kar rahaa hoon...
yeh tumhey dikhtaa kyu nahi hai???

NAINTARA : haa... DEV kar lijiye koshish....
jab tak aapki koshish rang laayegi...
loan repay karne ka time guzar chukaa hoga...
aur aapke galathiyonke wajey se...
YAAD RAKHIYE... SIRF AAPKI WAJEY SE...
Hum sab jail main sadenge....

DEV : koshish tho hum kar rahey hai naa NAINTARA...
issey zyaada hum kya kar saktey hai???
tumhey kaisi umeedey hai???
ki paisey ek din main settle kar paayengey hum???

NAINTARA : agar ho saktaa... tho acha hain...

DEV : NAINTARAAAAA

he yells at her angrily to the peak of his voice and
throws the flower vase....with a rage...

NAINTARA : CHILLAYIYE MATH DEV...

she points her hand towards him and widen her eyes
showing even more agony...and evilness

DEV : achaaa tho tum bataao... tumhaara plan kyaa hai???

NAINTARA : shaadi....

DEV : Tum paagal tho nahi hui ho...
ab hum itney mushkil mai phasey hue hai...
aur tum phirse hum dononki shaadi
chaahti ho??? HOSH MAI THO HO TUM????

NAINTARA : DEV... hum apni shaadi ki baat nahi kar rahey hai...
aapki shaadi ki baat kar rahey hai...

DEV : MATLAB :????

NAINTARA explains about how narrow minded indians typically act like...
and the research she had done on a family in a remote place
and stuff....

DEV : PAGAL HO TUM NAINTAARA... HOSH MAI AAO...
BRO KO PATAA CHALAA THO HUMAARI JAAN LELENGEY...

NAINTARA : AAP ko zarurat hain DEV hosh mai aane ki...
hum se zyaada tho aap hi jaantey hongey
apney VEERJI ke baarey mai...
is maheene ke end tak paisey nahi mile tho...???

She scares DEV to an extent where he agrees to opt for marriage ,
as the situation demands....it was very horrying for him... but he did that
for NAINTARA....because he loved her genuinely...

SAYING this he slowly raised his head head to look at MAAN
who was fuming in anger... He continued...

DEV : BRO.... woh... ladki ... GEET THI......

now he dint have the courage to even look at himself in the mirror...

DEV : yakeen maaniye... hum yeh sab karna hargiz nahi chaahtey they...
aaur ab jo galathi hui hai tho... aap jo sazaa dete hai... mujhe manzoor hai...


Thats all for today...
GOOD NIGHT...
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Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow neeru
nice and lovely update dear😊
loved it alot dear😃
so finaly dev told truth to maan and daadima👏
wow neeru👏👏👏
lovely and nice update yaar👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
looking forward yaar😉
with love
sravs



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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi 😊

Thanks for adding me 😊
loved the update 😊

Finally Dev confessed!
And even told that the girl is none other than Geet!
Lets see how Maan reacts now 😊

Update soon 😛

BTW wats your name? 😊

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