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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update......
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loved ur update dear!!!
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the first part was so real that I was engrossed in it.. but, you spilled everything... such a beautiful update and lovely dream
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update Fiza

Pls do update as soon as possible
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Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

awesome update......
short hai bt luved it
i luved his dream
cont soon n tnx fr pm

thanx a loot
thanku so much

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loved ur update dear!!!

it was short but sweet..!!

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the first part was so real that I was engrossed in it.. but, you spilled everything... such a beautiful update and lovely dream

lolz...sorry i broke ur dream😉
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Nice update Fiza

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys

I am here with another update…this one is pretty long so I hope u'll enjoy it n wont find it boring…plz do comment…n thanx a ton for like the previous chapt😃…thanks aloot

Enjoy luv

Fiza

n ya dont forget to hit the like button ..if u like it 😊
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CHAPTER:7

It was Saturday …yes its party time….Mayank was all set to go n rock the party..he loves socializing actually he hates to be alone ….n Nupur….she didn't wanna go..she was feeling low for some reason but than …does she was left with any other choice rather than not attending the party ….even if she does dare to say NO…she was warn …..

Mayank: mein tum ko utha k bhi lay ja sakta hoo…n u know this very well..wht I say I really mean that…..i am not going without u after all you're my DATE

Nupur: DATE…ur date..is se phely mein khud khushi na kerlo

Mayank: nhi don't do that…warna ur desire to dance with the most handsome guy in the city will never come true…just for my sake don't do that sweetu..itna bara kadam mat uthao…I'll mange

Nupur:…shock ..hain…tmharay liyan?????

Mayank: aur nhi tu kya…I know that u don't want me to go to the party with an ziddi, arrogant…good for nthing….boring .n wht ..hmm….ya bhanji type girl…but than…kya kero ..dosti ke hai tu nibhana paray gi

Nupur: her mouth was open..n …she was hell angry...mein …ma..ya.ank…mein bhanji

Mayank: aur nhi tu kya…the way ur choosing ur dres for tonight sum1 whos hot …n ravishing would'nt be coming in these….ok…why to waste time..i m going ..mjhy buhat sara kam hai party k lyan..tm taiyar hojao..agar hosakti ho tu …I'll catch at 8…bye ..shuts the door

Nupur: tm ko tu mein batao gi akir Nupur Bhushan cheez kiya…mein boring ..ur gonna regards ur words Mr.sharma

Mayank: opens the door again: plz I am dying to …

Door shuts but ths time by Nupur..n she locked it

Nupur: samhjta kya hai khud ko…..he is such an irritating… stupid… stubborn… idiot…. loving. .....adorable……n sweetheart

She shuts her mouth with both of her hands realizing what she just said….she smile and than confess….

Nupur: hmm..he is a sweetheart…a person I trust the most…who knows me so well….he knew that my anger always have some hidden feelings…but..mr.sharma…today I am gonna tell u jab Nupur taiyar hoti hai tu kasa hosh urtay hain…

She was extremely anger…n as always this time feeling of disappointment …feeling of rejection… was bothering her….He thinks I am not good…nt beautiful…good for nothing…his words was aching her heart ….why his words matters so much ..that she didn't care…the only thing that matters right now was to prove him wrong…

She went to her wardrobe….n know exactly what she wants to wear

Flashback: At Mall

Mayank was looking at a girl who was wearing a mini skirt…low neck top..…asay hi….

Nupur: hmm ..hot hai … hai na….teasingly

MayanK: asy dresses wear kernay se koi hot nhi lag jata

Nupur: acha…tu kya na pehany se hota hai….she bit her lips..oops kya kah diya…mar gay

Mayank: mischievously: that I haven't experienced

Nupur: shut up

Mayank: laughd…nupss… I mean for looking hot..less is more..nt my logic

Nupur: meaning

Mayank: hmm.. I dont know…but dnt found that attractive…see..forexample…sari…for me it's the most gorgeous …clasy…n …attractive attire

Flashback end

She wore a black sari…with low back…she clipd her hairs on top…simple diamond ear rings n a pendant around her neck…she looked her self in th mirror n was her self lost….sumthing was new in her eyes..the spark

Suddenly the door opend…it was him…but I locked the door…how can I forget he has keys…n he knocked on her room's door n opend it

Mayank: may I …..c-u-m-in

His last words were not audible…he droped his jaw….

OMG …..sari….how can she do this man…this isn't fair …dude tu tu paka gaya….how an this earth can some1 look so amazing, stunning beautiful…..but….wwwhattttttttttttt….i hate this..wohi boring hair style…

With a smile on his face he start moving towards her..slowly n steadily…with his gaze fixed on her…his eyes filled with all that he has somewhere in his heart…she was feeling his eyes on her …n when she met them…she skipped few heart beats or rather her heart was beating at full pace…her breath was increasing….he stood in front of her…move a bit closer….her eyes were closed…he moved his hand forward n remove the clip to make her hairs fall on her shoulders…Mayank moved back ..n his voice make her open her eyes

Mayank: perfect…u look absolutely ravishing

She blushed n whisper thanks

Her blush doesn't went unnotice…

Mayank: Nupur..yeah ..he touchd her cheeks…why u have applied so much of red on that….she looked at him surprisingly…he..smiled n rised his eyebrows..ohh..

Mayank sharma…..she gave a tight slap on his shoulder n smiled

Mayank: chalein….was abt to leave

Nupur: sunao….ur looking good

Mayank: he stood there…checkd himself from up to down..she was right he was looking handsome in his black formal suit..n ..now slightly blushing

Throughout the journey both of them were quite n lost…mayank couldn't stop thinking about her n Nupur cant stop blushing on what had happen at the apartment

At party:

Both of them enter the venue….every1 was stun to c nupur like that…they met there friends..every1 congratulate them on there work …..

Ok I know official parties don't have dance n music….atleast mine never had..but that so unromantic…so here v go

Soon the lights were dimmed…music started…n people get there partners on dance floor

Mayank and Nupur were standing opposite to each other but on far ends….

Mayank: should I ask her for dance…why not…no I should'nt..us din beach per than aj ghar per…I was imagining…oh God….y I was thinking like that…tu itna confuse kab se honay laga…com on be a man…no I am not a man.. what.. I mean …I am not finding guts…Guts..us ko date per lay jana hai kya…its just a dance…ya it is chill dude…

He took a deep breath n move forward towards her

Nupur: yeah mjhy asay kyun dekh raha hai….n why I am getting nervous…who sirf dance k liyan tu poch raha hai….poch kaha raha hai..idiot…wasy tu buhat boolta…why ur waiting nhi pochta tu nah puchy who cares,,,

Mayank:nups..dance

Nupur: mein ….han…per

Mayank: par kya Nupur…khabhi tu meri baat bina argument k man liya kero

She smile…n nodded her head in yes

He put his hand on her waist….she hesitantly put one hand on his shoulder n other she gave in his tight grip….her eyes were lower but she can feel his on her…soon she rise them up to meet his…n than cant get out of them ….slowly they get lost in the moment…in each other….he twirl her round…..and pull her back in his arm…her back was touching his chest…his chin on her shoulder…..he slides his hands on her waist n griped her tightly. But softly…her hands were holding his…he turn her around..n make her face him….her one hand was holding his shoulder from them back…..soon she shifted her head to his shoulder…he holded her firmly….his eyes were closed…..they were feeling each other…he was feel content…peaceful….she was feeling secure….they were listening to there emotions kept somewhere deep in there heart…they were enjoying the peace ….completeness.. ..the felt every time they r with each other….

But than ….music stoped….lights were back….both of them immediately got out of the hug…..almost a hug….they were looking everywhere except each other

Maynk POV: what is going on….why it feels so content when she is with me…y I never felt any regard in my heart for wht I have done…I just loved it ..oh Lord plz help

Nupur: POV: what the hell I was doing….whats getting on me….

Soon steave join them n they were relived as topic was changed…

Steave: hey Maynak ..cum lets have some drink

Maynk: u know I don't drink….n don't force me….nupus wana eat sumthing …I am hungry

Nupur: ya…sure..lets go

The food was Mexican so was extremely spice….nups love spicy food….mayank warned to b careful but she put deaf ear to him…she accidentally ate sum chilies n now was coughing badly

Mayank: nups I told u to be careful but nhi tum ny kis ke suni kaha hoti hai….he was caressing her back n was shouting too

Nupur gave him a dead look…she was coughing badly n he was giving lectures…a waiter was bypassing them with some drinks …..she stoped him n drunk a class n another n another …n she was relived

Mayank: nups… no….stop….Oh…..My….GOD….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it's osom.waiting for next part

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