Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100

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hey i am fiza......this my first FF...i know i am nt tht gud writer like akansha, sonam ,sneha...n many of u all......bt reading all of u have given me sum strength to share sumthng i have written sum time back...its mayur version i am presenting here hope u all enjoy it

Nupur n mayank are nt same in ths as thy r in MJHT

Mayank is like a boy next door..n nupur is a bit serious in ths.....as story goes on u'll understand there characters ...so no particular character sketch i am giving ..... iam directly posting first chapter

Ch1

She was siting in her balcony, viewing the beautiful waves of sea. Life can change to such extend, never she thought about. There was a time when she was living her life all alone, scared, broken but then it's truly said

Right in the middle of ordinary life, love gives us fairytale

Love an emotion she was scared to feel the most but than it happened and made her nightmares into dreams, dreams into reality

Mayank: Shona'where are you '.nupz'..gosh hear u are'.i was looking for u all over the house n ur

He stopped there'.looked at her'she was not responding to his words'nt because they doesn't mean anything to her'.but she was all lost in her dreams, his dreams

He lay down on her lap'kissing his unborn child'

Nupur'u 'when u did come

Mayank: look my little princes your mom is not interested in listening to my words na''hope u come soon and than v will have fun together ONLY

Nupur: she smile on his husband childish behavior.. Husband yes he is my husband' a relationship I hated the most but he made me worship him

Nupur: looking at Mayank with a sad face'hmmmm than mama will feel alone na ..if u and dad are not gonna talk to me

Mayank'hey shona not fair ..you know very well I cant see u like that'..your such a bad girl'.sure know how to make a fool out of me

Bth start Laughing

Mayank: I never thought that after 3 yrs I'll b lying like this and talking to our daughter''I still remember when we first meet' you use to be soo arrogant, quite,

Things where not the same 3 yrs ago they were different way different

In the buziest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous as it was her first time tht she is out of Mumbai'all alone 'her heart bleeding with bruises

index....last on this pg
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey that was really a cute part.
i loved it
continue soon dear
and pm me when u update............
Love,
Neetu.
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1st part was awesome dear....pls continue soon dear..and pls do pm me.............
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interesting start

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grt start!

do pm me abt it!

its very beautiful.....
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Nice start......
continue soon.......
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thanx for ur sweet comments i'll surely update it this weekend.
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INDEX

CH 1 pg 1

CH 2 pg 2

CH 3 pg 4

CH 4 pg 7

CH 5 pg 10

CH 6 Pg 14

CH 7 pg 17

CH 8 pg 21

CH 9 pg 26

CH 10 pg 31

CH 11 pg 34

Ch 12 pg 37

CH 13 pg 44

CH 14 PG 48

CH 15 Pg 52

CH 16 PG 56

CH 17 PG 59

CH 18 PG 65

CH 19 PG 69

CH 20 PG 74

Ch 21 PG 77

Ch 22 Pg 81

Ch23 pg 85
CH 24 pg 91
CH 25 pg 95
Last Part pg 100
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Ch 2

3 yrs ago

In the buziest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous as it was her first time tht she is out of Mumbai'all alone 'her heart bleeding with bruises

She gets in taxi and askd the caby to take her to an office she mentioned

She entered the office an asked the receptionist for Mr.steeve, her boss. She was hired as an project co-ordinator of a multinational company. Back at Mumbai she begged her officials to shift her to some place outside India. As it was a US based company and she was an extremely competent girl, they shift her to there head office at NEWYORk

She went to Steeves cabin

Steeev..Good morning..Ms Bhushan'..how was ur flight

Nupur: it was long n good

Steeve: you must b tired'.you can take 2 days off and can join us on Wednesday'Mr.Sharma our project head will explain you ur responsibility here''.he'll b ur neighbor too. He is an Indian ..so I hope u'll be comfortable with him

Nupur: thanku'.I am here too work'so it doesn't matter who is what Indian or other'.and about taking rest'.I'll take today and will join from tomorrow

Steeve: ok that's good come I'll introduces u to your staff and show your cabin

That is Ms Nupur Bhushan'..a girl having fundas like simple living high thinking'straight forward, honest competent, ambitious'..life for her is serious business

Steeve made her introduce to everyone ... way back in a corner'sipping his coffee I guy was standing and looking''..na na na'gazing at her ..He was wearing a formal grey n white suite. He knows who she is '''.stop pursing anything'..steeve told him about her yesterday 'this guy is none other than Mr.Sharma

Mr.Sharma'i.e. Mayank Sharma project head'.simple na very stylish'..cool'na he was a hot dude'honest yes to core '. Workaholic..u bet 'but doesn't believes in relationship'.for him they are the most non reliable things in this world'but love he loves'he is single'lives here alone

Day before today: Yesterdaaaay 😊

Steeve: hey Mayank tomorrow a girl from India is joining us as ur project coordinator

Mayank: ok cool'whose she'do u think she'lll handle such a huge project from mid'..and than u know how Indian girls are no professionalism family priorities right Steeve

No no he is not like that'actually steeve thinks tht south asian girls are not career oriented are more family girls'no professionalism'

this is Mayank sharma never ever leaves an opportunity to pull some ones leg

Steeve : stop it Mayank'.. I have been told that she isn't like that and than mr. malhotara personally recommended her'..n ya warning dnt ever ask her about her personal life ok

Mayank: ok even I dnt care but why'

Current day

Remembering all that steeve told him he was busy gazing her

Mayank to himself'.wao man she is beautiful. Dressed neatly in formals'.her hair wrapped high in pony tail..she was meeting everyone with a faint smile'her eyes were dried'face was very pale'.dull'.her smile was visible appearing faint'Man she must be what like 23 24 years'.she is beautiful'.competent'than why her husband left her'.n y she rushed to NY..man these relationship are so n reliable

Divorced yes that's the truth 'n the reason why she bugged her officials to send her out of country

Mayank went near her to introduce himself to her

Steeve: oh Mr. Sharma. meet ms Bhushan

Mayank: hey im Mayank ' nice to see an Indian in office

Nupur: glad to hear it

Steeve: Mayank you both are neighbors to and ur going home so plz drop her '.n help her as her car n other necessities will be arranged in two dys

Nupur : no need to help '.i can mange all by myself

HELP'..a word which Nupur Bhushan hates to hear for herself

Mayank was looking at her'.wht an arrogant woman 'but thn he likes that about her she was not like other who just can to anything to get chance to get along with him

Mayank: im not really helping u '..ur new here once you got ur car and get to know the ways here '..i might be needing your help'.u can do the pick n drop to office for both of us, I'll be saving lots of dollars an my gasoline

Both smile'they left for there apartment'..during the journey there were all formal talks 'actually only mayank was trying to talk'.but she maintains her distance

Mayank; in my 4 years career it's the first time steeve has hired an Indian girl'.he is not found of them

Nupur: oh really than I need to prove a lot to him

Here u go this our apartment'.

Nupur enters her apartment'.sit down leaning to a pillar'.tears roll down her cheeks''.im in my new house '..all alone'.haaaaaaaa'..no Nupur not now u cant just go weak now'.you need to be strong and look forward to ur life

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awesome ff do pm me next time

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