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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sheebs

nice post...😉

thanx

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

cute update[/QUOTE

thanku

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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

i just started reading this fanfic and its so beautifully written.....i love the simplicity.....i just love mayanks character here!......keep writing!.......naina

thanks for liking n reading

Originally posted by: reema_arti

amazing part...

loved their arguement...
thnxx for the pm

thanks a loot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ..Shreyu..

Hey,

I just read all the parts

And loved the FF dear

I agree, argument me subah ho jayegi Mayur ki...

I am waiting for next update

Thanks for PM, dear

Love,
Shreyu

thankx a ton for reading n liking
kya kero when it cums to mayur...argumnt na ho tu maza nhi ata
thanx alot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
really loved your ff
amazing i love each and everything
pls add me to your pm list😳


love
tasfia
Edited by tasfia123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: tasfia123

really loved your ff
amazing i love each and everything
pls add me to your pm list😳


love
tasfia

thanx alot
i'll pm u next time
BTW very nice name u hav
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Steeve: hey Sharma…howz life….he said while entering to conference hall

Mayank: cool…..pretty cool actually

Steeve: great…so whts the plan for Saturday…you're coming to the party

Mayank: ya ..of course..after all its our project success party ..

Steev: ms Bhushan ur also joining us …right

Nupur: no I can….

Before she could finished

Mayank: no …she cant be saying that….she was shopping for this party from past two weeks

Nupur: Mayank…..y cant u at times just shut up…she was already in a bad mood….a party on SATURDAY make her feels more low

Mayank:.. I cant ..com on ….Nupur its office…how can u ask me for SHIRT UP

He burst into laughing

Steeve: Mayank ur impossible

Mayank: oh noooooooooooooo…..not u too steeve ( acts like if he was really fainting)

By the time steeve left

Nupur: Mayank its not always necessary tht people should follow wht u want them too

Mayank: o really ..i know ur dying to go just want sum1 to ask

Nupur was cross hearing his word…..sumthing was actually bothering her n than Mayank aur us k mazak…
.

Nupur: mayank its not always good time to crack ur stupid jokes…she said tht a left the confer room

Returning to home….Mayank kept thing abt her… I shouldn't have said all that …she must be extremely angry…Oh Lord plz save me…wasay he I know these days I have been quite demanding….actually these days he was feeling there were lots of things shouldn't be doing…he always forcefully make Nupur do certain things…..like socialize, shop, go out, movie watching…..bt than it was just because he wants her to get back to life

Mayank: I need to check whether Nupur is angry on me or not…I need to …if she is she is not gona cum at party …n tht surely I dnt want…..already she was in bad mood today….n than I did tht…

He want to his house …rang the bell nobody answer..he check inside ..no one was there….an unknown fear crept in his heart …is she that mad at me….she left office earlier than me than y she is not at home…oh GOD

He crabbed his car key and went looking for her…by the time they know each other that well …can guess where other can be

AT beach

Nupur was standing near the shores…feeling cold water touching her bare foot…she was remembering her past…..wht she has gone through….the scary night mares…the betrayals…..the faith which was lost ….the hope she found here…than life in NY…a smile appears on her face as she start thinking abt it

Nupur: I never thought my one decision will give me so much…a job …my individuality….independence…may…..mayank….my friend…a person who always make me smile…no matter how low I am ….he gave me strength to believe…he gave me eyes to c life with another vision ….i m truly blessed …..he is such a nice guy…always there for me..

Mayank went to the beach……looking here n there for her..he finally saw an angle standing near the shores….he was relived …..n…..than… lost …oh God…..she is an angle…..so innocent…so pure…. always correct …life has been so difficult for her but than she stood against every odd like a true jhasi ke rani ( he smiled) …he looked at her with a strange look as he was thinking …..y she is looking so different….oh..oh her hairs..thy r so….. beautiful…y she always tie them up….looks so boring

Her hairs were continuously coming on her face…she wasn't removing them but was enjoying nature at its best….he felt so deep for her…that couldn't hold him self ....his feet automatically start moving towards her…without losing his passionate gaze at her……he move s towards her ..with every step he was taking towards her..his heart was beating faster…..his soul was feeling complete….he stood beside her…gazing at her....absorbing her inside his soul ….slowly he moves his hand n remove a strand of her hair from her face….she took a back with the touch …...she was surprised but could'nt utter a word when her eyes meet his passion filled one…..he moved more closer…n closer….n slides his hand 2 cup her face …slowly n gradually moving toward her ….so closed tht his lips brushed with her …..

I thought of stopping this update here😉…but ……..than ….. I hate suspense so scroll down😊

BANG…

OUCH….

Ball hit right on his head…..next he hit his head with his hand…realizing he was dreaming

Mayank:have u lost it…wht the hell u were thinking….she is ur frnd…she trust u so much …Mayank sharma tjhy kya horaha hai….relax..relax dude…. take deep breath…dnt think like tht …..plz ..dnt mess…she is the most precious frnd in ur life….control ker…Mayank tjhy kya horaha hai….dnt worry ..hota hai…kal kuch zayada romantic flim dkh le thi us ka asar hai bs..aur kuch nhi…ab ja us k pass ..jo kam kerny aaya tha who ker

He turns towards her again n again get lost in her….

Bs Mayank tu ghar ja beta is se phely k tu pora pagal hojay

He went away from there…nt even looking at her…he was so confused n scared of his feeling that could'nt even find courage to go near her.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
Hey guys

Surprised to c me today…but kya kero I don't wanna my readers to wait for long😉

It's a small update…forgive me if u finds errors cause I am bit too busy 2morow is eid n I haven't applied hena even on my hands😭…so ths a quick update…without chking 😕….hope u like it

EID MUBARAK 2 ALL

N thanku soooooooooooooo much to all of u for ur kind words.😊😳.plz kuch bora lagy tu ur most welcum to criticize

Plz hit LIKE if u like it

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
hey fizza dear!
first one to comment nice update dear loveeeddd it
eid mubarak to u also !



love
komal ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
great update😛
i was really happy when mayank was just about to kiss her😳
if you had stopped i would have surely died 😆
but it was a dream😭
jo bhi ho loved the update🤗
and thanks a lot for the pm

eid mubarak to you too



Edited by tasfia123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear
it was short but very nice update.
loved it so much

hehehehee accha surprise tha- mayanks dream abt nupur

u r so smart yaar..................

very nice part..........

Keep it up...............


wishing u a very Happy Eid Mubarak to u
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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