FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 2 - Page 89

wow muskaan, Lovely chaps.. So good of a writer you are... I am in love with your FF.. Id the twist being geet getting pregnant :) and no you are not repeating :) Loving everything about your FF

hey muski..

hi muskan fab as usual. i cant explain in words. y do u think ur writing is being repetitive? its as interesting as it was in start. it captivates the minds of reader till the last word. i started 2 read ur ff quite a late i guess i read from part 45 or 46 but then i glued 2 pc till i finish it from the start. never doubt abt ur writing skill.

Nice part

Originally posted by: asmi123

hi muskan fab as usual. i cant explain in words. y do u think ur writing is being repetitive? its as interesting as it was in start. it captivates the minds of reader till the last word. i started 2 read ur ff quite a late i guess i read from part 45 or 46 but then i glued 2 pc till i finish it from the start. never doubt abt ur writing skill.

thanxs dear...I was just hoping that u guys like it..glad u did..

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice part

Maan never leaves a chnace to Make out😆😆

Geet is totally confused she is still doubting Maan's love for her

Maan is hell angry

Lets c wat haapens

she is such a dumb..girl..OMG..doubting maan's love..bad idea..

hi sunshine of my life...love u all for the replies & suggestions..keep it rolling..need it most
maan - geet ne kaha hain na.. use se poocho..
he gets angry & cuts the call..

part 65

maan comes back really late from office..
geet - aap ne dinner kiya?
maan ignores her & walks into the washroom to change
geet waits for him to come out...as he comes out..
geet - aap laptop ko lekhar abhi bhi gussa hoo?
maan gets pissed off ..& hits the beds rim..
geet - aap itna naraz kyu ho rahe ho..sorry (she holds her ear)
maan - tum ne daadi se kya kaha?(stirn tone)
geet - ji wo..priya di..jaa rahi..aap ka kya ..
maan stares at her
geet gets scared..maan holds her from the arms firmly..mera kya geet?
geet was trembling ..maan looked into her eyes..spitting fire
maan - can't u just leave me & priya alone..
geet looks in his eyes..confused..wondereing
maan realizses wat he just said..& tries correct himself
but geet does'nt let him say a word..
geet - ab yeh kaha hain to..mujhe kya karna hain yeh bhi ke do..
snapping back..
maan - geet tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho..
maan tries to calm her..he losens his grip
geet - teehk hain..aap hi mujhe samjha do...
mujhe waise bhi aaj kaal aapki harkathe kuch samjh nahi aathi..
maan getting even more frustrated & angry..
maan - tumhe meri harkathe samjh nahi aathi?
geet - nahi..mujhe kuch nahi samjh aatha..aap kya karthe hoo
kyun karthe hoo..kab gussa hota ho..kyun gussa hota hoo
mujhe kuch samjh nahin atta..aap ke dil main kya hain..
maan - tumhe nahi mallom meri dil main kya hain..
he looks deep into her eyes..geet looks away..
geet - nahi..
maan leaves her arms..& walks out...
geet waits & waits ..& falls a sleep in the couch..
maan comes in latter..looks around for geet..admires her sleep
uncomfartably on the couch..he slowly walks towards her..moves her curls..
& wispers..tumhe aab bhi nahi...mallom mera dil main kya hain...lifts her & lays her
on the bed..tucks the spread around her..geet cries in her sleep..
maan please mujhe chotkar mat javoo..& hold his hand..
he kisses her hand & says..tumhe chotkar jaa bhi nahi paavoonga..
he sleeps next to her...cuddled up

geet gets up with a heavy head..& looks for maan..
maan was already in the breakfast table..priya was looking into some messages
geet rushes to the kitchen...

daadi joins priya, maan & geet for breakfast...
daadi - priya & maan wat have u decided
maan - daadi kis ke bare main
daadi - about ur future?
geet stood rooted in the kitchen..
maan - daadi aap yeh sab kya keh rahin hain..
daadi - I see u wearing the ring priya..so I guess u guys are planning
to be togather..umm!!!
maan - daadi aise kuch nahin hain
daadi - maan aap kuch nahin boliya..please..
waise bhi jab bolna hota hain aap kuch nahi bolthe
so priya when are u coming back from london after ur conference
priya - nahin mera aise kuch plan nahi hain..
daadi - ok well plan all that & let me know..
maan gets angry & walks out..
krish - hi daadi..
daadi - how are ur holidays going?
krish - my home work is completed ...main aur maa dargling jaa rahen hain
daadi - thats great..when are u guys leaving..
krish - tonight..we have so many things lined up..
sunrise, ice skating, trecking..its a 20day trip
daadi - maan nahi aarahe..
krish - dad se pucha tha..ticket lethe waqt ...but he said he is busy..
daadi - have u done with ur packing
krish - ji daadi..
daadi - I will come to drop u guys to the airport..

geet tried calling maan before leaving but he was too disturbed to answere
her call..daadi drops them to the airport..
daadi - geet are u sure of wat u are doing?
geet - pata nahi daadi..I just want maan to be happy
daadi - bless u beta..

precap
geet missing maan...

oh yeh kya again alone alone
kya ha yar


me first....

😆 😆 😆

Still hate pria lol... Can't she explain clearly... And why she still wearing the ring... Grr... She need to use her commensense. Lol no wonder maan left her

:D xxx

update soon...

Nice update