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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

thanxs guys...

thanxs u so much for ur lovely posts..
I was wondering if my scenes are becoming repatative or seeming
boring??? or am I concentrating too much on 😉..but trust me..it is very much part of the plot.. I was just confused ..& concerned a bit...the story is going to take a big turn
hope u guys accept that twist!!!
love u all..



hey Muskan, Are you kidding? "
I was wondering if my scenes are becoming repatative or seeming
boring??? or am I concentrating too much on 😉..but trust me..it is very much part of the plot.."
Are you going to say krish will get a companion? won't that be too fast?
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow geet totally confused about her feelings
oh ho maan u should talk to her with words rather than your intense action and hot looks
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armaan_Maan

Muskaaan really I love this FF sometimes I get confused between ur FF and the show ...LOL
I love ur FF wish it was the current track ...love the way its going ....I m soo excited to read the next part..
please continue writing and add me to ur PM list
thanks a bunch

btw I read all of ur FF in one day all the partss no lie lol
Maheen :)

thanxs maheen..glad u liked it...
I have updatd the pm list..
u actually read the whole thing in one day???😲
i am so happy😃..that u could sit through it
love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow geet totally confused about her feelings
oh ho maan u should talk to her with words rather than your intense action and hot looks
do continue
bye sumi

thats exactly is the point..he really needs to talk is heart out..
but MAAN hain...😡
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

keep guessing.😉.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Muskan if the scenes or story becomes repetitive, mind it i'll be the first one to complain! but as for now, it's awesome 😉
big twist 😲😲 uhm as long as you promise to reunite them later on 😉 which i know you will 😆
so yeah, waiting for the update..please put it up soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs u lovely people..todays jewelry scene was HOT...sensational..I am dead🤢
she starts crying with over flow of her own emotions...& confusion
maan - acha chodo..we will go out for lunch..

part 64

geet - nahi main..lunch bana doonghi..give some time..
maan - its ok we can dine out..
geet - nahi..na ..it is almost done..just need to cook them..(she looked really firm about that)
maan - main kuch help karoon
geet - nahi..(she shouts..she could'nt have worked with him being around)
maan - teehk hain..chila kyu rahi hoo..
geet - nahi..main khe rahi thi..aap ko kaam hoga..
maan sits on the kitchen slab with his hand resting on either sides
maan - nahi..abhi main free hoon..my next meeting is only at 3pm..
geet starts working ..avoiding looking at maan..
she puts the rice on the gas..cuts the vegi..
maan comes around & start eating the carrot as she was cutting it..
geet - bhook laaghi hain..(looks at his face)
maan - hmm!!(nodes his head)
geet - sorry sorry..main jaldi karthi hoon..
mean while u eat this..she makes a plate of salad for him..
maan takes the plate & sits on the slab again..
geet quickly prepares the chicken curry..& puts pot on the gas..
maan - krishna kanha hain?
geet - woh di ke saath shopping keliya gaya hain..
maan - to hum..ghar main..(looks at geet naughtly..
like a lion who is about to attack its prey)
understanding his intentions..says..nahin..maan ..
her heart is beating like an adolescent on her first date and
her knees are weakening...he lifts her takes her to their room...
kicks the room door with his legs & puts her on the bed
geet - maan rice gas main rehka hain..
maan - bane do...(moves closer..removing his shirt)
geet - woh! chicken...
maan - kacha thodi khana hain...let it get cooked..
geet - ji sab...as he leans to her, the look in his eyes washes the last trail
of hope away and she realize there is no return...
he pushes her to the pillow and finally kiss her..
his hands are everywhere, first touching and squeezing her back as he lift
her slightly and then one hand is cupping her breast whilst the other one
opens the plat out of her hair releasing it in waves the smell of her shampoo
and perfume suddenly surrounding them...their mouths were glued to each other,
their tongues rekindling his fire, exploring her and getting reacquainted...
his hands and mouth seem to know their way around her...
Oh God geet you're tight..maan whisper as he fill every void within her..
he slowly and teasingly pull out of her and pound hard back in again...
he does that several times making her squirm for more, and driving her
insane with lust... her mouth is dry now as she gasp..his thrust becomes aggressive
& he pulls her hair..he bends over her enveloping her with his body, holding her tight
by her waist, as he slowly pull himself back...Maan lay her carefully down and
slide beside her...his hand is pushing a lock of hair out of her face, geet looked
like a mess but his eyes say the contrary... he kisses the tip of her nose.. and
pull her close....& says mujhe bhuat bhook laghi hain...
geet - aap change kar loo main kana le aathi hoon..
maan - umm!!
geet pulls up her salwar & quickly slides into her dress..
while she was adjusting her dupatta..maan pulls her duppata
maan - geet
geet - ji..
maan - I love u..
geet pulls her duppata away & goes to kitchen..
babaji..kana jal na gaya hoo..
she was putting it on the plate maan comes from behind &
his hand slowly..slides into her waist & pull her closer
geet - kana kha loo..
maan kisses her on her neck & sits on the chair..
he was about to eat & his phone rings...
geet - uff ..phone ko bhi abhi bajnatha..
maan opens his laptop..while on the call & starts working..
he completes the call & still was working on the laptop..
geet closes his laptop & says..khana ka loo..
maan(shouts) - geet wat are u doing..I am working on an
impt part..aapni bachkani harkathe band karo...
geet gets scared..& moves back..
maan opens the laptop which took a while..spoiling his flow of work..& starts working again..
geet - babaji..yeh kab gussa karthe hain kab nahi mujhe to kuch samjh
hi nahi aata...
she waits for a while...& feeds him..scared & wondering wat he may say..
he takes a bite..without hesitation..
maan - phele nahi khila sakthi thi...laptop band karne ki kya zarrort thi..?
& continues to work..while geet fed him..& ..geet wonders..
(yeh gussa hain ki..nahi??..mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aata)

maan leaves for the meeting & geet decides to sleep for a while..

in the evening..priya tells geet that she is leaving tomorrow
geet - lekin di..
priya - meri kuch conference hain..I have to rush
geet did'nt know how to ask..about her future plans with maan
or wat is going on..neither can she ask maan..maan's acts are all hinting otherwise..

geet called daadi
geet - di kal ja rahin hain
daadi - thats very good
geet - daadi..!! how can u say that..
daadi(daadi mummers ..woh ja rahi hain ise khush hona chaiya..aur yeh hain ki..
uska flight cancel karne main laaghi hai..kya karoonge main is pagal ladkhi ka)
aacha geet I will speak to her...

daadi calls maan
daadi - is priya leaving tomorrow?
maan - umm!
daadi - so wat have u guys decided..
maan - wat are u talking about..
daadi - geet told me ..ki tum ne priya ko ring phenaya hain
maan - geet ne kaha hain na.. use se poocho..
he gets angry & cuts the call..


precap
maan angry with geet...

hi guys..thanxs for all ur responses...I am so happy..& motivated..to continue turning my plot yet again...love u all

muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
zubi123 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi! thnx for an ice cream it is really nice.
update the next FF soon waitinf for it
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc update muskan di!!! wat an icecream 😉 😉 😉 maan is becoming naughtier these days!!

http://tinypic.com/r/2qwpvtc/4
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing story.. i have been catching up on it.. and i must say HOT!! i will def never see or taste ice-cream same way.. love maan all loving, and tender towards geet. pls add me to ur PM list.. much appreciated.

vika

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