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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

sorry to hear abt ur grand ma..

May her soul rest in peace...


finally u updated...

i wonder wat rahul did...surely something cooking in his mind..

thnx for the pm...



Thank you... Even each day I deeply inside pray for her soul but just can't in front of my family (its hard)... Yep Rahul is cooking up something and very nasty for sure.

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Posted: 13 years ago
I know that my recent parts are very small so I've decided to post two parts each time I update. I hope that is fine! And now it begins the count down of the end... it was great journey from the start...

Part Twenty-Five

Geet stood numb while she kept on starring at those papers in her hands. Those weren't any ordinary papers, but they were the court notice..

Geet felt someone tap her shoulder..

She came out of her mute mode and compose herself before turning around to find her dearest husband standing behind her.

She looked at him with shock eyes...

Maan look confuse and before he could ask something Geet ran pass him... up the stairs into their room..

Dadi: Maan Beta, what happen to Geet?

Maan: I don't know! I'll go and check

Dadi: Why don't you finish your dinner while I go and check on Geet? Maybe she needs someone parent type than her husband.

Maan nods his head.

-

Dadi enter inside Maaneet's room without knocking. She saw Geet (laying on her stomach) and most-likely shedding tears.

Dadi sat beside Geet and gently rub her back...

Geet made movements and buried her head inside Dadi's lap...

Dadi stroking Geet's hair

Dadi: Aren't you going to tell your Dadi what happen? Why are you shedding tears non-stop?

Geet lift up her head

Dadi cups Geet's face "Beta I am not just Maan's grandmother. I've told you earlier that I am also your grandmother too than why such hesitation in" Geet look away from Dadi's eyes "telling your Dadi. What is bothering you?"

Geet just hug Dadi..

Dadi decide to change the topic "fine! I will wait for the moment you are willing to share your deepest pain with me your family, but remember I am always there for you like I am there for any of my grandchildren"

Geet nods her head afterwards keep her head in Dadi's lap while she strokes her hair.

-

Maan saw his Dadi coming down the stairs with frown on her face.

Maan: What's wrong Dadi?

Dadi sat down on the sofa..

Maan pour glass of water for Dadi

Dadi smiles and take the glass of water and drinks it.

Maan: Why Geet

Dadi interrupts Maan "Beta I am starting to worry about Geet"

Maan: Why?

Dadi: Since the moment I've met Geet. I've started fantasizing about your guys marriage, but now I feel like I've made huge mistake.

Maan: Why are you talking like that? Did Geet say something to you that she isn't happy with the marriage?

Dadi sighs

Maan look impatient

Dadi: Nothing like that sort, but her eyes speak different language.

Maan recalls the moment – when her eyes are trying to say something to his eyes.

Dadi: I don't know what's bothering her deep down inside, but she is slowly falling apart. We need to make her understand that she isn't alone anymore. She has a family that is ready to support her in each way. Please Maan

Maan realize what he has to do now "Dadi, don't worry! I know what I have to do now and I promise you that very soon this house will be filled with happiness again"

Dadi look hopeful in Maan's word, but afraid of his action because his anger is the problem...

Maan turn to leave "Beta, let her sleep away her pain" Dadi told him.

Maan twist his head toward Dadi and nod his head.

-

Prithvi gets annoyed with Tani's phone begin engaged every time when he is trying to get hold of her. He sighs and look at the bus before boarding it.

Five minute late

"Excuse me" I look at the person who's voice echoed in my ears "if you don't mind may I have a seat beside you (by the window)?"

I stood up and let the girl sit beside the window. She looked very upset with her life or something because of the way she sounded. Once she sat down I also sat down.

She looked at me with big eyes.

I smile at her.

She also smile at me.

"Hi"

She begun to talk with me. I just smile and nod my head.

"Hi.. my name is Dhaani Mehra" She introduce herself to me. As if I am interested in talking to her. I just gave a look and hoping she will shut up for awhile, but I wrong.

"So going to Delhi for studying or something else" now she was getting on my nerves. I just ingored her and close my eyes for a change.

That gesture of mine showed her that I am not interested in chatting with her.

-

I came out of the washroom and saw Geet still sleeping peacefully or should I say more like cried herself to bed. I wonder what happen after she open the door (he recall Geet holding some sort of paper in her hand) it must be something to do with that paper she was holding in her hand.

I start to look for the paper without making any noise in the room, but luck was against me. I gave up and slept on the sofa inside our room. I know I could of slept on the bed to irritate her, but I don't feel like it.

Maan slept on the sofa, but kept on looking at Geet who slept silently with dried up tears.

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago
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Part Twenty-Six

Next day, Geet woke up around five in the morning. She looked at her side of the bed (it was empty) she began to think about where her husband is "wait a minute! Why am I looking for him on the bed beside me? Why?" after she saw him sleeping on the sofa.

She smile to herself than gets up (head toward the bathroom) brush her teeth than takes a shower (the hot sprinkling water) smooth her each pain.

-

Maan woke up (by the sound of shower running inside the bathroom) "before create a storm and now again she won't let me sleep for long" he curse her deeply.

He sighs than throws the blanket aside and flops on the bed (taking in Geet's aroma) while she step out (in lime-green transparent sari) looking sexy (according to Maan's thoughts).

Geet drying her hair (few water drips backwards when she flicker her hair) Maan woke up from his dream and stares at Geet drying her hair.

Maan is totally flattered by her...

Geet smile to herself than with her finger she slightly combs it (Maan look totally amaze) that he didn't realize (when he was standing behind Geet).

Maan place his hand on Geet's shoulder (she look at him) than close her eyes..

He felt as if he's on the top of the world (lean downward and kisses her left-side of the neck from behind) Geet let out a small moan.

-

Tani sleeping peacefully (smiling over her sweet dream) felt someone whispering in her ear (she smack the voice away in frustration).

She gets annoyed and gets up "tum" her smile gets bigger "how did you get in" she look confuse.

He just smile at her "why are you smiling like a-idiot" she asked him.

Tani about to say something when he covered her lip with his finger "ssh" she look at him with wide eyes "you speak too much! And what were you doing last night whenever I tried calling you" she felt her heart beat faster and faster "but your phone tune is engaged" she just blink her eyes.

"And now you are blinking your eyes! So cute!" he pinch her cheek "Anyways stop wondering how I came inside, but I can't stay away from my wife anymore" Tani just hugged him.

-

Geet couldn't take the closest anymore and she push Maan away after remembering those papers that came yesterday. Maan look at Geet who ran away with tears streaming down her face.

Maan: She was fine few minute ago than what's wrong now?

Geet lean outside her room "I'm sorry Maan, but I can't accept your feelings anymore and your eyes..." she cried silently.

-

Tani push Prithvi away (because he was about to kiss her) and she starts running around the room (her laughter echoes in the background) Prithvi just smiles and open his arms (widely).

Tani shook her head "I love you" she ran into his arms.

Prithvi hug her tightly "I love you too" and prayed silently (that nothing come between them and their relation) he kiss her forehead.

-

Dadi question Geet about her health "how are you feeling now?"

Geet: Much better now! I'll go and make breakfast inside the kitchen (she avoids looking into Dadi's eyes)

Dadi (find her next victim) "Maan, what wrong with Geet and why she escape looking into my eyes?"

Maan stood numb for a minute "woh.. I have no clue" he saw Geet bringing him his black coffee "maybe she still isn't feeling well" he took the coffee from her.

Geet avoid looking into his eyes...

Dadi watch (her Maaneet) and tries to understand the problems between them.

Maan leave (without saying goodbye to Geet) only his Dadi.
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Thank you...

And I love you too (in friendly way) 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome...
loved it...
update soon plz...will b waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
hmm interesting!!!
luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome dear
loved it very much
can't wait for next part
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwsome ff cont soon n plzzz pm me d nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

its awesome...
loved it...
update soon plz...will b waiting...



Awe.. thanks a-lot

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