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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

love it ...great parts!!!



Glad you liked it!

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Hopefully, you have enjoyed reading it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update...

hmm interesting!!!
luved it..
continue soon



Yep, its getting interesting... Let see what the future is store? Darkness or brightness?

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

its awesome dear
loved it very much
can't wait for next part
please update soon



Surely, I knew you'll love it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara

Awwsome ff cont soon n plzzz pm me d nxt part



Sorry if I forgot to message you, but I promise to not skip you onwards toward the end.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

WAITING 4 NEXT PART DEAR



Sorry for the delay... business with work and admiring Ashish Kapoor (one and only Udayveer)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know that my recent parts are very small so I've decided to post two parts each time I update. I hope that is fine! And now it begins the count down of the end... it was great journey from the start...

Part Twenty-Seven

Dadi saw Geet inside the kitchen making lunch for everyone, but her mind is somewhere else (she kept on thinking about those paper) Dadi turn off the stove (water was about to overflow)

Dadi: What are you thinking that you didn't notice the water overflow?

Geet: Sorry Dadi

Dadi: Its okay, but it look like you are making special lunch for Maan beta

Geet just smile

Dadi left Geet alone in the kitchen with Nakul (who came back inside the kitchen after cleaning up the house)

-

Maan working on his file (when knocking sound came) "come in"

Adi walk inside his cabin

Maan look at Adi (expecting him to give him a file), but he stood their hesitating.

Maan: What's wrong? Adi

Adi: Maan... Sssirrr woh

Maan: Woh kya

Adi: Actually, woh we need Geet Ma'am back or else this file in my hand won't get its quotation.

Maan eyes wide up (totally forgot Geet is handling the program) "give Geet madam a call and ask her to report Asap to me" Adi left Maan's cabin.

Maan rub his forehead.

-

(Telephone ringing in Khurana mansion, but nobody is picking up)

Dadi come down the stairs (again the phone ring) she look here and there before she pick up the phone "hello"

Adi: Dadi, is Geet madam home.. actually isn't picking up her cell

Dadi: Geet left five minutes ago (Dadi start to worry)

Adi: But Geet hasn't arrive yet (he sense Dadi's worried) don't worry maybe stuck in the traffic

Dadi: Maybe your right! Just inform me once Geet arrive office with Maan's lunch

Adi: Yes Dadi

-

Maan working on his laptop when his cell starts to ring (he gets annoyed) and pick up his phone "haan Dadi"

Dadi: Maan, why haven't you called me and inform me that Geet arrive office yet. Its been six hours and nobody called me?

Maan look at his watch (become surprise that he didn't notice the time) and rub his forehead in frustration

Dadi: Maan, why haven't you answer my question?

Maan: Adi informed me that Geet left the house five minute ago, but she hasn't arrive yet.

Dadi: Kya? Why haven't you informed me before?

Maan: Actually I didn't want to worry you and don't worry when she arrive I'll inform you.

Dadi: Alright!

Maan hang up his phone (tries calling Geet, but her phone is switched off) he curse his luck (he get up and grab his coat) leaves the office in search of Geet.

Dadi: Where are you Geet?

-

Geet is walking (lost in her thoughts) more like (a person lost its soul) she kept on walking without looking where she is going.

Sound of on-coming traffic wasn't affecting her or anything (she kept on going in her mute mode) suddenly flashing light came in-front of her eyes (that didn't affect her) as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know that my recent parts are very small so I've decided to post two parts each time I update. I hope that is fine! And now it begins the count down of the end... it was great journey from the start...

Part Twenty-Eight

Screening of sound a car halting (pair of black-point shoes are shown) the figure walks out in anger toward the person (who isn't paying attention to the road or on-coming traffic), but he was shock to find his own wife walking like dead body.

He grab Geet by her shoulder and shook her roughly (to get some kind of response), but nothing was affecting her. He tries dragging her along with him, but she won't move.

-

Her mind kept on thinking about her confrontation with the love of her life "Rahul" but he only knows how to break her apart (by separating her from her loved ones) first her sister and her brother-in-law and now the only happiness left in her life is her husband (but he also wants to take that away) in order for her to keep her only soul with her.

She close her eyes (for a second) and found herself in the arms of her husband inside a cottage. She looked at him for awhile than close her eyes in pain... because she couldn't tolerate his eyes asking her questions (that itself don't have any answer to them) only knows one thing Tere Liye.

-

He sat beside her on the bed looking outside the rainy weather and close his eyes (recalling how he brought her to the cottage).

She didn't leave him any choice other than carrying her into his arms, but his destiny always was against him (because his car breaks down) and it starts raining.

He looked at her sleeping peacefully (on the passenger seat) he tries getting hold of Adi or anyone else (but his battery dies) on him.

He looked angry by the situation (than look at Geet) afterwards get out of the car (goes toward Geet's side of the car) and carries her in his arms (start walking in search of a place to stay for the night). After forty-five minute walk he found a cottage.

He ask the guard if he could stay there for a night since his wife isn't feeling. Entire world know Maan Singh Khurana.. he couldn't say no to him and lets them inside.

Maan thanked the guard after putting his wife down on the bed.

I look at her for few minute (she was extremely wet and shivering with chills) I just hate the moment, but I have to save her. I strip off my clothes than came toward her on the bed (on top of her). She look innocent as a glass doll. He started taking her clothes out and threw them away.

( kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de..

kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de)..

He left behind very place his mark on her body, but yet she wasn't reacting to him. He started moving downwards toward her belly-button. He starts licking it.

(Kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de..

Kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de)..

Suddenly he felt her responding to him (because of the way she held his neck and hair) by pulling him upwards toward her face. He looked into her eyes for few second before capturing her lips into my lips. The kiss itself lasted longer before I spread her legs apart.

(Tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hain
Haan ye jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hain
Jo bhi ghum hain ye tere unhe tu mera pata de
Kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de)...

I gently entered her, but her nails stabbed into my back (letting me know it was painful) I tried kissing her pain away and it worked.

(Mujhko ko to tere chehare pe ye ghum nahi jhachta
Jaayiz nahi lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta
Sun meri guzarish ise chehare se hata de
Sun meri guzarish ise chehare se hata de)...

Night fades away in the moment of their love for one another or their pain of being separated from each other...

( kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de
kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de)...

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Next morning, Geet open her eyes than she close her eyes (for a second) and found herself in the arms of her husband inside a cottage. She looked at him for awhile than close her eyes in pain... because she couldn't tolerate his eyes asking her questions (that itself don't have any answer to them) only knows one thing Tere Liye.

She felt complete... remembering last night.

She couldn't help herself from kissing her husband's forehead.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
luved maan's care n luv for geet...
curious to knw abt geet's pain...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZINGG UPDATE
WHY GEET IS IN SO MUCH PAIN
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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