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wonderful part thanks 4 d pm
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Secrets in love Part 6





Mayank can't believe it.
M:Mom...are you in your senses?
Tulsi:I know that it's hard for you to believe it.But it is the truth.
M:But how is it possible mom?I just met her now.
T:No Mayank.That's what you think.But it's not true.You craved to be an actor.So you joined dance class.There you met Nupur.

Past...
Mayank and Nupur are dancing looking at each others' eyes.
Beautiful music is played in the background.
"Thode bheege bheege se
thode nam hain hum
kal se soye wo
to kam hain hum

dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai
pehli baar mohabbat ki hai
aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai
pehli baar mohabbat ki hai
aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai..."{Kaminey}.
M:I love you Nupur.
N:I love you too Mayank.
They continue dancing.Dance expresses their love.

Mayank and Nupur are sitting under a tree.
M:One day i will become an actor.
N:When you become a star you will give me a chance to design costumes.Right?
M:No doubt.
N:I want to be a famous fashion designer.All the top actresses should wear my clothes.
Mayank holds her hand:After my film's release we will get married.
She blushes.
M:But will i ever become an actor?
Nupur's face becomes dull.
N:Sure.My Mayank will become a super star.
A car passes by.Alok comes out of the car.
He raises his voice:Mayank!
Mayank gets up.Nupur also.
M:Dad!
A:How dare you?
He slaps him.

Mayank,Alok and Tulsi at home.
A:I will never allow you to marry Nupur.She is not our type.She has no status in the society.
M:No dad.One day she will be known as a top costume designer of Bollywood.I have faith in her talent.
A:Rubbish!I won't allow you to see her again.
M:No dad.It's not possible.
A:Sure?
M:Yes.
A:Then get out of the house.
M:Yes,i'm going.
Tulsi weeps:What are you saying?
A:It's final.
Mayank comforts Tulsi:Don't worry mom.Be happy that your son is with his love.I know that your blessings are always with me.
Mayank leaves the house.

Mayank tells everything to Nupur.
N:What?You left your house for me?
M:Yes.Let us marry Nupur.
Nupur is stunned.
N:What?Now?So your career..?
M:Now it's necessary to marry you.I left my house to be with you.To live together we should marry.Right?
Nupur is confused.

Mayank and Nupur get married in a temple.Nupur looks pretty in her bridal dress.
Mayank takes Nupur to a house.
M:It's a small house.But this is our home Nupur.
N:The size of the house does'nt matter for me Mayank.I'm a middle class girl who lived in a small house till now.I'm happy whereever you are.
Mayank and Nupur smile at each other.Then they hold their hands together and enter the house.
M:We are starting a new life.

They both sit on the bed.
M:When you wore the bridal dress only i realized how pretty you are.Till now i had seen only your internal beauty.But now i see your external beauty also.
She blushes.
He caresses her face.
The romantic song 'o laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan
gali gali ghume dil tujhe dhundhe,
tere bin tarase nayan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan
aa ja o meri jaan, mere dil ka jahaan
maange teri khabar, dhundhe tera nishaan
laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan..'{Paap}
makes their moments even more sensous and lovely.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowowo jasmine lovely part loved it
thx alot for the pm
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how come mayank doesnt remember all this?
what was his age? 5
how can a man forget his wife?
im a bit confused
did he lose his memory?
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Lovely part!
so mayank got memory loss?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Ok a completely confusin upd8

do upd8 soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow..lovely part

plzzz add me in ur pm list
waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey jasmine, so the mystery is slowly being wrapped up, but still how is M not able to recognise her now. How can he forget he married her or anyone for that matter, I am all eager to know about this. Great update and well done.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely part jasmine thanks 4 d pm

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