Secrets in Love Mayank Nupur ff Last Part - Page 7

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Secrets in love Part 7




Rainy night...
Nupur and Mayank have cute moments in the rain.The rain expresses their emotional love.
They feel that the rain is singing:
Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula, Man Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Man Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mere Maula..
Kis Taraf Hai Aaasmaan, Kis Taraf Zaameen
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Oo Oo, Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam, Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Oo Oo, Hosh Gul Sapno Ki Mein Bandhu Pull, Aankh Kab Khuli
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Oo Oo, Kis Taraf Hai Aaasmaan, Kis Taraf Zaameen..{Dostana}.

M:Nupur...you look very happy today.Is it because of the rain?
N:Mayank...our love's sign is there in my stomach.
Mayank is surprised:Really?
She blushes.
M:I love you Nupur.
He dances in the rain due to happiness.
Nupur smiles seeing it.

Months pass.
Nupur gives birth to a cute girl.
Mayank takes her in his arm:She is an Angel.She looks exactly like you.She is Pari.
Nupur smiles.

Mayank submits portfolio to directors.
A new director called Ashok calls him.
A:Wht do you do?
M:I'm an engineer.
A:Good.Then why do you want to act in films?
M:Acting is my passion.I love it.
A:Good.I directed one movie.But it just average.It did'nt fair well at the box office.I'm going to try my luck again.Since my first film is not a hit big stars are not willing to give me date.So i'm thinking of casting new comers for my next film.Why don't you do my film?
Mayank is excited:Sure.Why not?Thank you so much.I'm so happy.

Mayank rings up Nupur.Nupur picks up the phone.
Mayank is walking on the road and talking.
M:There is a happy news Nupur.I got a film.I'm the hero.
Nupur is surprised:Really?Great.
M:Pari brought us luck.
N:Yes..
Suddenly a car hits him.
M:Nupur!
Nupur is shocked:Mayank!

Mayank is admitted to the hospital.
Nupur is almost dead.Rukmini who is carrying Pari tries to console her:Nothing will happen to Mayank.
Tulsi and Alok come with tears.
Alok stares at Nupur.
A:This girl and the tiny witch destroyed my son.
Nupur cries.
Tulsi hears Pari's cry.Tulsi takes her in his arm:My Mayank's baby.
A:Tulsi...give her back.
T:This is our grand daughter.
A:No,i don't accept her as my grand daughter.Obey me.Give her back.
Tulsi gives Pari back.Her heart is paining.
The doctor comes:Mayank is conscious now.
They all are relieved.They run to his room.
Mayank is lying down with a smile.
N:Mayank!
M:Sorry...i'm not able to recognise you.May i know who you are?
Nupur and others are shocked.
The doctor:One second...please everyone come out.
The doctor looks at Mayank:Mayank..you take rest.
They all follow the doctor.
Dr:I could not tell you all one thing.Mayank lost his memory.He can't remember a particular phase of his life.
They are shocked.
N:How will he get his memory back?
Dr:There is only a less chance for that.I have no hope.
Nupur is shocked.She felt that she is going to faint.
Her eyes go blind because of the tear drops.
The doctor goes.
Alok has a wicked smile on his face.
A:God is with me.Mayank does'nt even remember you and your baby.Everything is over.Your love story had a tragic end.
N:No..our love story cannot end even if we die.Mayank will get back to me.Wait and watch.
Alok laughs like a devil.Tulsi feels sad for Nupur.Alok and Tulsi enter Mayank's room.
M:Who was that girl?
A:She was your junior in the college.Her relative is admitted in this hospital.When she saw us she enquired about you.When she heard about your accident she just bumped into you.
M:She is my junior?I don't remember seeing her at all.

Present..
Tulsi:But destiny wanted you to fall in love with Nupur again.
Mayank's tears fall down.

The calling bell rings.Nupur opens the door.It is Mayank.
N:Mayank!
M:I came to know who your husband is..how you lost him.I know who Pari's real father is.
N:Still you think that Sudhir is...
M:No.I'm your husband.I'm Pari's father.
Nupur is shocked:Mayank!
Mayank weeps:Why did you hide it from me?You suffered so much because of me.Sorry Nupur.
Nupur breaks down:No Mayank.Not because of you.It's our fate.
M:I promise.I will not leave you and Pari alone.
Mayank takes a small tin from his pocket and takes sindoor from it.He puts it on her forehead.She closes her eyes with emotions.

Alok is roaring like a lion.
A:Mayank went back to Nupur again?
Tulsi:Yes.Let them live happily.
A:No.
T:You have always controlled your son rudely.He never smiled because of that.Nupur is the person who taught him to smile and be independant.Why don't you allow him to be happy?After all he is your son.
A:I want my son to be happy.That's why...
T:If you really wish for your son's happiness you should allow him to live his life with Nupur and Pari.If you desturb them again i will die.
Alok is shocked:Tulsi!
T:Yes,i will do that.
Alok is upset.

After two years...
Grand Party...
Alok is talking on the mike while Tulsi is standing near him with a smile.
A:Today i'm very happy.Because my son Mayank has achieved what he wanted.Now he is an upcoming star of Bollywood.My daughter in law Nupur is climbing heights as a dress designer.I feel prowd of them.
Mayank and Nupur come.Mayank has worn a white costume with a black overcoat.Nupur is in a violet gown.Everyone claps their hands.
Pari is jimping with joy:My parents are the best.
M:I'm happy that finally my dad has accepted my dreams.He is really understanding now.I love you dad.
He hugs Alok.Tulsi's eyes get filled up with happy tears.


The song 'kissa tera teri daastaan, chehra tera khud kare baya
kisise pyaar tujhe ho gaya, tu maan ja, ha maan ja.....

kahi na laage mann, kya hai yeh sunapan aa ha aa ha....
mujhe tum bata do, koi to wajah do aa ha aa ha....
har ghadi abb khayalon mein, keh raha hai koyi
har ghadi mere khwaabon mein, aa raha hai koyi
is this love, maine na jaana aa aa aa aa ha....
is this love, tu hi bataana aa aa aa aa ha....'{Kismat konnection} is played.
Mayank and Nupur dance to the soft music.

The end..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice one - Simple,beautiful and compact.. And you updated it regularly.
Do write more on Mayur and PM me 😊
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#64
awesom ending
i loved it
plzz do write more ffs .....thanks for pm
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#65
Nice ending.. and jhappis to u for updating regularly...
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#66
simple, cute, lovely, beautiful!
Do write more....
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#67
Loved the parts of it
Nups was actually his wife only jus he forgot it
That was bad but their true love brought them one agn
The ending was superb
Hated Alok a lot but at end loved him
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Hay dear
awesome ending
it was so simple, nice and beautiful
Do write more
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Aww so it was memory loss man. Beautiful end to a wonderful story. Write more Jasmine. keep it up!
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sweet ending

but very short
do write more stories but longer

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