Secrets in Love Mayank Nupur ff Last Part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Secrets in Love Part 1


"I'm Mayank Sharma who is fed up of life.Why should i suppress my emotions,feelings and likings?Why should i live by eating pain?Why should i sacrifice always?"
Mayank is standing on the beach.He observes the waves.
"Eat me waves".
He goes near the sea waves.The waves are swallowing him.He is alomost unconscious.A beaytiful girl who was swimming there saves him.She gives him breath.
She is nervous.
She:Open your eyes.Are you ok?
Mayank opens his eyes slowly.His eyes are sruck by her fairy like face.
She:Why did you jump into the sea if you don't know swimming?
M:Because i don't want to live.
She is shocked.
She:Why?
M:I'm controlled by my strict father who is always against my wish.He treats me like a kid always.I'm fed up of sacrificing my likings for my father.
She:What did you sacrifice?
M:I did Engineering for him while i wanted to be an actor.He does'nt allow me to do what i like.
She smiles:Only this much?Just because you can't be an actor you decided to end your life?You are so foolish to end this beautiful life gifted by God.There are many people who are struggling hard to be actors.But they don't reach anywhere.Your father want to make your life safe.That's why he asked you to be an engineer.Why can't you understand that?
Mayank's face is dull.
M:You may be right.I did'nt think much about that.I was so foolish that i thought about suicide.
She:Promise me that you will not think of suicide anymore.
Mayank is surprised about a stranger caring for him like this.
M:Does it make any difference to you?I mean..i'm just a stranger for you.
She keeps silent.
She:Promise me..
He smiles:Promise.
She is relieved:Thank God..your brain is working now.
M:You are an angel who saved my life.You made my brain work.
She giggles sweetly.Mayank's eyeballs are rolling on her cute smile.
Mayank extends his arm:Hi...I'm Mayank Sharma.
She holds his arm:Hi..
They shake hands.She takes her hand back.
M:You did'nt tell your name.
She smiles:I'm Nupur.

After one week...
Mayank is sitting on the beach.
M:I wish Nupur was here.
"Hi".
He can't believe his eyes.It was Nupur.
M:What a pleasant surprise!I was thinking about you.
N:Really?What did you think about me?
He simply smiles.
Nupur sits near him.
N:You always come to beach?
M:Ya..wheever i get time.
N:Me too.
M:Are you studying?
N:No.I'm running a flower shop.
M:O!You are sweet like a flower.
Nupur blushes.
They keep talking to each other without even knowing how much close they are with each other.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo on a new mayur ff dear

first part was nice but
so mayur already like each others company
thats gr8
update soon n do pm me

luv
shruti
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Quite a nice concept

do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Conrats for ur new ff
do pm me plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice FF
Liked Mayur's relation
Add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start....thnx for d pm...plzz continue soon
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Hey jasmine, I really liked the first chapter, continue soon!
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ni concept dear
do cont n plzz add me ur pm list thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Secrets in love Part 2


Nupur is arranging the flower pots in her shop.She is surprised to see Mayank standing there with a sweet dimpled smile.
N:Mayank!
M:Yes.I came to see you.
N:How did you find out my flower shop?
M:Why?I can't find out my Angel's shop?
She smiles.
M:Won't you give me flowers?
N:Sure.Which flower do you want?
M:I want roses.Because roses are beautiful like you.
She blushes.She picks up roses and gives them to him.
They both get lost in each others' eyes.
M:Nupur..i came to invite you to the couple dance club.
N:What?
M:Hey...it's a decent place.Don't worry.
N:Ok..i will come.

Mayank is waiting at the club for Nupur.
M:Where is she?Is she not planning to come?Maybe because she does'nt like the concept of a couple dance club.
Suddenly his eyes meet Nupur.She has worn a beautiful red gown.His eyes glow seeing Nupur's beauty.
M:She is an angel.
Nupur goes near Mayank with a smile:Hi Mayank..sorry for becoming late.How is this costume?
M:Nice.
N:I designed it.Fashion designing is my passion.I always wanted to be a famous fashion designer.I struggled hard for that.But i did'nt reach anywhere.But i'm not sad.I'm happy with what i have.
M:I like your positive attitude.
N:Positive attitude is a must to live our life.
M:Correct.I get positive energy from you.
She smiles.
Mayank extends his arm:Shall we dance?
She holds his arm and dances to the song 'Dekha Jo Tumko..'{Kasoor}.

Mayank is very intimate with Nupur.Nupur becomes uncomfortable and she moves away.
M:Nupur..I'm sorry...
Nupur is silent.
M:Why are you not saying anything?I'm sorry...
Tears are formed in her eyes.
N:What did you do Mayank?It's wrong.
Mayank sees Nupur's sweat flowing down.He wipes it with his fingers.
N:What is this Mayank?
M:Nupur...today when i danced with you i realized my emotions...what i feel for you...
Nupur looks at Mayank:what do you mean?
M:I love you Nupur.Can i marry you?
Nupur is shocked.Tears fall down.
M:Nupur!
N:No...
M:Why not?You don't love me?
Nupur can't open her mouth.
M:Your eyes say that you love me.Then what's the problem?
N:Because i'm married.I have a three year old daughter also.
Mayank is shocked.He feels that his head is spinning.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oops

Nups is married n hav daughter also

Bechara Mayu but she loves Mayu i thk

Liked their sweet convo

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