||AR-OS|| With Venom In Our Hearts

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@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Nadz !! 🤗

Gal, i don't know wat to tell you gal... First of all, really a big thanks to you for sending me the pm ...

The title of the story itself was damn intriguing... For an instance, i thought its gonna be a FF ... but then was disappointed to see such a beautiful story ending so soon.. 😭

Anyways, the story track left me spellbound ... The way you have written it, is like simply amazing ... If this is ur first attempt , i wud surely want you to keep writing and come up with more such stuffs.. Your writing style is seriously amazing to overlook it ...

The way everything in the story turned out was superb.. the flower drowning and the venom thing symbolized by snake was awesome... Quite a different and unique track... glad to have read it finally...

As for the end, i m actually curious to know why Armaan killed her ?.. I know its an OS .but wud love to read it as an FF........😉... And lastly, u seriously deserve a standing ovation for it !

Thanks loads for the pm..

Love
Vini

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Whoah! m left speechless, truly have no words to describe how awesome this piece of work (OS) is!

You are an amazing writer, n this is one of the best OS i have ever read! not only on IF but any other site, this one truly is the best!👍🏼

i wud luv to read more work from ur side...do add me to ur pm list:)

thnks to arushi for the suggestion, else i wud have missed on such an amazing OS.

Luv

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hey nahida!

so i remember a pm from you some months ago, which had mentioned something you wrote and linked... dunno, if this was the one, but i happened to stumble onto this one in my watch listed topics today - and i'm glad i did... its different, to say something in obvious reaction, and its extremely vivid... but what i give you absolute thumbs up for is the persistent allusion in your writing, to drive the reader to several speculations and a final answer very nearly close to the point that you'd reveal it yourself!

i went round in a kind of circle, beginning with doubt for armaan poisoning her, deterring mid way cause the writing was absolutely indirect and i wondered if the title could mean itself so literally... and then well, the snake had me back to where i had begun - assuming armaan was poisoning her ...

the brilliance of the piece was its being exclusive action, with so many leads to imagining intent! frankly, a powerful writing, with, i repeat, a very vivid cut to its own self!

great job! i hope you write more!
cheers,
nj

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Hey Nahida!!

I am so glad to receive a PM about this from you. Thanks!

That was just a pure play of emotions with your words. Its so different to see this angle from the leads. And I must say, I Loved it so very much!!!

Wishing to read more from you. Keep it going.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

I am sure you'll kill me for commenting so late :P

A very different story but so well written !! Amazing !

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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

OMGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! why am i reading this sooooooo late!! LOOOOOOOOL

but anyways nahuuuuuuu.......you have done an outstanding job!

this OS is amazing! very well writen! loved how you described everything. so mysterios :D and so different !

i personally love reading anything that has mystery/horror involved in it. lol, hence i thoroughly enjoyed it! :D

keep rocking! mwah. <3

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Arushi.

@Arushi.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Hi.. ! Just dropping by to make sure of three reasons: 1. This thread doesnt close because of being inactive for a while. 2. So that this can come on the first page, and people who have missed it, can have a chance to read it. 3. To say, that I want another OS or FF from you :) Haha, demanding, thats Me :P Loads of Love, Aruu 🤗

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unknown.

@unknown.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

this os was really confusing
but i got concept after reading peoples comment
lol

luv
harneet

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@ammy-ridz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

hey Nahida,

WOW!...This was like a really exceptional OS!...Not the cult-romantic lovy-dovy stuff that I always expect when it comes to AR...But on the contrary, kindda shady and all (I almost thought, I was into the world of inception or some movie on paganism!!) Great work dude!...I loved it! And I must not forget to say, the witch-craft and the whole description of the ambiance, and Riddhima's flashes and dreams was done very aptly!...And Armaan- the real culprit here!!...Well, certainly unexpected!..

Lastly, so sorry for being such a wuss!..and being exceptionally late!!...It just skipped my mind somehow. Just remembered that I was supposed to read this OS long time back.😳

Love

Sai.

p.s- You HAVE to write more now!!!....I want a ff from you.

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@khahani

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Hey Everyone😊

Firstly Happy New Year (I know I'm 5/6 day late), anyways I hope you all had a good start to the New Year and it continues to be prosperous for you all!

Secondly, I feel terrible for not replying to all those wonderful and encouraging comments, I cannot articulate in words how happy all your comments made me. All I want to say is a heartfelt thank you!! Unfortunately I am unable to provide detail replies to individual comments BUT I have read every single one and was grinning ear to ear though I do think that some of you are being awfully nice!Nonetheless I am elated, who doesn't like compliments eh?😎

So thank you...🤗

@ Arushi (We've already talked about this many times through PM's so I think I can be forgiven *touchwood*)😳

@ Nandini (I absolutely LOVED your comment, especially the part related to the title, your explanations about the venom was exactly what motivated me to write this particular OS)

@ Seert (I've already replied to you in another forum so I'm saved from your wroth 😆)

@ Nikhi, Richa, NJ, kashishk, Ridss, riddhzie, Angel-Pebby, Eyes-Wide-Shut, Vini,TheWandmaker,Prasanthi, Ankita.M, Minaz, Harneetluvesksg...Thank You!

@ ammy-ridz (Sai it really is a pleasant surprise to see you here! And woman before I attempt at writing an FF you need to continue with yours!)

Also thank you to all the silent readers who've pressed the 'LIKE' button.😊

Nahida :)

Edited by khahani - 14 years ago