'You and Me...Never!' 2 Pg 42 epilogue - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
Pallooooo.....
Just came across this enjoyable FF today....
and read it in one go...
it's phantabulous... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
can't wait for the next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey pallo... i hav been w8ing 4 this update... yaar... just loved it❤️❤️❤️.. plssssssssssssss update soon... pls dont test our patience now.... 😔 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Warning: It was approximately 800 words on Microsoft Word :)

Wow! You're pretty quick in updating. I'm not gonna do a special section for fave dialogues. I'm gonna dive into the comments for the last three parts. I loved the first two parts more than the last part, mostly because I kinda hated how he unconsciously admitted that he might love Geet. I didn't want him to reveal it to her in that manner. I really want this issue to be addressed in your fanfic if possible. I would like Maan to make sure that he truly loves her because of who she is. I don't want him to feel compelled to love her. Like, he needs to have an internal battle before he confesses to himself as well as Geet. If Maan doesn't make sure of it, then I want Geet to do it. I would rather them not jump into a relationship or anything else before making sure that Maan does truly love her.

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I thought it was adorable how Geet is doing all this just for Maan. She's taking all of the crap with a pinch of salt. Though she wants to teach Ronnie and all the others a lesson, she can't. That shows a new side of Geet. It seems as though the only person who she can "show attitude" to is Maan, and that's because they're so close to each other.

As you/ Geet said, "Ronnie turned out to be a big time loser!" That guy deserves NT! Can you hook them up? Pretty please?? That would be the perfect revenge for both of them. MaanEet wouldn't have to worry about NT trying to seduce Maan and they would get their revenge on "Horny Ronnie." They're a match made in he!!

Awww… after learning what an idiot Ronnie is, I feel soo bad for Maan. He really has nothing to worry about when it comes to Ronnie. I kinda get why he's feeling so jealous, but there's no reason for him to feel that way. The whole coffee thing made me wanna give Maan a big hug! Awww… he turned to horlicks because of Geet and now that same Geet is turning to coffee because "Ronnie insisted." Also, Geet leaves Maan behind for Ronnie since he called.

Ronnie can't propose to Geet. And if he really did, then Geet won't say yesh. She still loves our Maan sir, and that's why she's being so sacrificial.

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I LOVED how you begin the part. He goes through all of his memories with Geet. He realizes that he might be losing her soon, and he needs to hold onto her. "It felt like real proposal number 1." Poor Maan. I feel for him, but at the same time, I'm kinda happy that he realizes that he has "competition."

I kinda liked Geet's outburst, but at the same time, I didn't like the fact that they keep on talking about her feelings. It's not that easy to fall out of love with someone. Doesn't he watch Hindi serials or Bollywood films? Geet, teach your soon-to-be-boyfriend-slash-fiance something about love! Go Geet!! Loved how she showed Maan off!

"In simple words...Maan Singh Khurana...you were acting like a possessive husband and a jealous lover" a voice nagged him from within.

That just made my day! Seriously! That totally sums up everything!

I'm glad that the whole marriage thing was out in the open in this part itself. I'm sooo happy you didn't stretch this thing. I'm also happy that Maan realizes that he needs to talk to Geet and goes to the canteen. Now, he finally knows the truth of the canteen, although he did know a bit of it before (subconsciously).

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Those dudes definitely needed to be taught a lesson! Goo MAAN! Whooo! I thought it was cute how Maan sends Geet apologetic looks before thrashing the dude. I'm glad that Geet didn't stop him either. Cuz if she did, then I would personally go into the fanfic and slap her!

Awww… "his Geet!" Cute. So, all it took for you to realize how important Geet is in your life was a "Horny Ronnie?" Interesting!

Once again, I didn't like how Maan made himself so vulnerable. Why did he tell her that he doesn't know if it's love? I really liked their clash though. Maan was finally able to put his anguish and his feelings out to Geet while Geet was finally able to see what she means to Maan.

I'm kinda glad that Maan knows that Geet's not going anywhere and their hug was cute. "Sleep tight and Dream Right Mogambo...." Aww… Geet. You're definitely a smart cookie.

I liked the song choice as well as the implications that you placed in the dance.

A belated congratulations on the second thread. Can't wait for the next update

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Posted: 14 years ago
well...does he realize??? i hope he does...or will it be something outrageously funny???
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggg u have gave heart attack and halff omgggg that was awesummm
im just gettin speechless
everythingg was just amazinggg
loved it
cnt wait for continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was just redonkulously good update!!! ahaha i just loved it all!! waay to go maan .... the guy deserved that punch ahahhaa lolz u know i could jst envsion the whole scene it a very filmy way maan clenched his fist together and brought it up and hit the bad guy twice his size and the guy flyin and flyin and flyin away ahahahah lolz.. well i'm really glad... maan and geet were able to go back to a little bit being back to normal today.. im soo happy geet forgave maan...but then who can stay mad at maan for long 😉 hehehe ... and ohhhh geet is getting smart once again and realizing tht maybe maan is in love wit her but jst doesnt realize it hahahaha ... lolz now maybe geet can do something to get maan to realize his love for hahaha lolz .. i mean she has already started all she had to say was "dream right" and maan did exactly the opposite eh...ahah by they way dance sequence was AWESSOOMMEEE!!!! ahaha so can't wait to read the next update .. update soon!!

p.s. lolz i hope u actually were able to get u project done as well ahah👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part as ususl!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pallo,
really excellent reading!! thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it!! Could you please add me to your PM??
😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Pallo
Liked it
Atlast Maan got his forgiveness
Bechara pyaar se maan raha tha Geet jus didnt give him we he came back to his angry young behaviour he got that
Maan actually strted loving Geet n Geet culd read it in his eyes
Dream rght was so true
Haaey Maan's dream wen it will be true yaar😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hii pallo congrats 4 ur 2nd tread
wow i loved how the story is going on
i loved the most
the song sequence n also kuch khaas hai
is 1 of my fav...was imagine it
n in the last
a staggering realization hit maan
do u mean finally he understandood that
he is in love with his geet?
i hope so
continue soon dear
when u can
love yaaaa

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