Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Poli.Geek

My dear Mahi,

My name is not Mira, I am loving playing this game with you. 😃


ha ha mere pass mera apna Maan hain, muje sapne dekhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. 😆

Am glad you liked all the parts. I wanted to add a little comedy after the really emotional parts earlier in the FF. 😭


Pinky can bring comedy where ever she goes and in what ever she does. I needed to show also how much Maan had changed and how he had developed strong friendships with Adi and Pinky. They are his family.


I hope I was able to bring that across.

Haha ur enjoying this game aren't you? achaa mein bhi kuch kaam mahi hoon... 😆... i'll surely figure out ur name ... n dats a promise 😉 😆 .. really? u have found a "maan" in NYC? yaar ... the "maan species" are becoming slowly extinct now 🤣

WOW!! 3 long parts in 1 day..that's really cool lol...aww maan is so excited about the trip...even I m excited lol...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon

Thanks a lot but i have one complaint
why do you make us cry so much..the moment i read the first sentence,i feel tears rolling down my cheeks...
Please update soon

wow..polki..you stumped me...amazing..stuff here..

i am on the first chapter.but wanted to tell you the minute i finished it..
its fantastic...this will one..of those FFs that i shall wait to see an update..
okay will catch up on the rest...of the parts..do keep sending me pms..i am enjoying this one...

wow you are so talented..

Wow lovely updates.. liked Maan's idea of seeing Geet n Geeta at the university... really excited abt the next part..plzz continue soon...

hey hun, thanks for the pm ... just finished reading the last couple of updates .. loving maans scheming side .. can't wait till you update more .. x

Originally posted by: kooliio

WOW!! 3 long parts in 1 day..that's really cool lol...aww maan is so excited about the trip...even I m excited lol...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon

Yeah, I ended up writing a lot last weekend. I think I need to save some of the work so that I can post in regular intervals instead of posting it all in a short period of time.

However since I was I just started this FF I thought it was important to post a few posts so that the readers would get an idea where this FF was going and what I am trying to achieve.

Thank you for your kind comments. I am so happy that you are liking the FF so far.

Originally posted by: desigurl953

Thanks a lot but i have one complaint
why do you make us cry so much..the moment i read the first sentence,i feel tears rolling down my cheeks...
Please update soon

I once again (while holding me ears) say I am sorry for making you cry. What can I do, this is the track of the FF in the beginning. I have to show the hurt and pain they feel so that later on we can experience the joy too.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: rushtrip

wow..polki..you stumped me...amazing..stuff here..

i am on the first chapter.but wanted to tell you the minute i finished it..
its fantastic...this will one..of those FFs that i shall wait to see an update..
okay will catch up on the rest...of the parts..do keep sending me pms..i am enjoying this one...

wow you are so talented..

Arrrey Vrush,

How can I stump you? You are the queen of imagination. Thank you for the compliment though. I am so happy you liked it. I was a little concerned if my fellow writers would like it or not. I am relieved. I feel honored that you are going to wait for updates with this FF. I have been working hard so it feels nice.

When are you updating your FF. I am a dewani of your work.

Take care.
Polki

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow lovely updates.. liked Maan's idea of seeing Geet n Geeta at the university... really excited abt the next part..plzz continue soon...

Thanks 😊