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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow amazing update.. luved the emotional maan in geeta'room.. getting more curious to knw abt the past.. do continue soon

Dear Swetha,

Thanks for liking the update.

Yeah, I wanted Maan's first night with Geet to be emotional not physical. It shows that their love has matured with time. They are older now too so they are not going to behave like teenagers who have just fallen in love.

You'll just have to keep on reading to find out what happened in the past.

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: uzmam1
😛Hey Polki!!

great update!! thanks 😛

keep up the good work!! lots of love to you on your birthday NYC girl .... all the way from the UK!!!!

xxx Uzma

Dear Uzma,

Thanks for the compliment.

Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Keep reading and commenting.

Love Polki, aka as your Chandni. (Amazed by how I am getting new names, thanks to the forums. I am not complaining, I actually like it.) 😃

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Tishuu
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

when i first read this.....i kept putting it off cos i didnt want to endure the pain of seeing maaneet separated...but today wen i cudnt get enuf of them i decided to sit down n read the whole thing.............and finally i read it............n im alreadyyyyyy in luv with it

haiiiiiiiii *sighs*

cnt wait for moreeee

plzz plzz plzzz with a special cherry on the top add moi to ur pm list!!!!

Thanksssssssssss

=}

Dear Tishuu,

I am so glad that you decided to give my FF a chance. I feel good that you were pleasantly surprised by it and that you can't get enough of it. See you can never judge a book by its cover. Please also let your friends know about it, maybe they too will enjoy it as much as you did.

Keep on reading and commenting.

You have been added to the PM list because you asked so nicely. 😉

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever
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<div align="center">Polki .. mein kya kahun thujh se? Huh? U tell me? Cuz I don't have any words!</div>
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<div align="center">Aww ... Maan got soo emotional in Geeta's room</div>
<div align="center">And he was finally seeing Geet sleeping after 18 years!</div>
<div align="center">I especially adore this part: <font color="#ff0000">she was glad that he had gotten the hint (she hadn't wanted to say anything just to see if he considered this home or not) that this was his home, his room, his bed and his Geet.<font color="#000000"> This part was soo sweet!</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">Aur yeh kya? No spoiler? Ooooo girl ... U really wanna get beaten up by me don't you? </font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">well since it's your bday tomorrow .. i wont hit you but the day you come back .. </font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">i have a surprise waiting for u...</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">and I don't think I'll be online tomorrow .. so i'm going to wish you happy bday today</font>
</font>and you showed your hubby my post? oo what did jeeju say?
yes! me and soumya will definetly figure out your name... </div>
<div align="center">Anyways, cant wait for the next update jaanii! and this one better be a super MAHAA update!😆</div>
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Meeri Pyari Mahi,

Totally love your comments. Am so happy you are happy with the last update. Wanted it to be emotional and sweet. Reading all the comments I think I achieved what I wanted. Sorry for not leaving a spoiler, I did however put one on yesterday.

Anyways, the new update is ready and will be up in a few. So enjoy and comment.

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0066" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Wish you many many many many happy returns of the day!</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0066" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">May your happily wedded life be filled with happiness, love, and joy!</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0066" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hope you have a beautiful future with jeeju .. but don't forget me! 😆</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#339900" size="3">... And I can go on forever!</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#330099" size="3">Here's my gift to you jaani:</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#000099" size="3">Hope you like it! </font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#660066" size="3">I feel so blessed to have a friend like you jaanii .. hope we stay friends for a long time! </font></div>
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Dear Mahi,

Thank you so much for the wonderful present. I loved it. It was so nice and sweet. I am so emotional thinking that I mean so much to you.

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Kaval05
just read ur ff it is very different and interseting. and wish u a happy birthday

Dear Kaval,

Thanks for liking the FF, it is always nice to see new readers appreciating your work. Please let your friends know about this FF, chances are if you like it they will like it too.

Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Nanthini9
<font color="#6699ff">This is a wonderful FF! However, you have made me cry of sadness and pain in almost all your parts - although the last part was due to happiness.

The storyline is quite realistic in the sense that it would have been really awkward if Geet had to see Dev all the time and if Dadi maa found out abt what Dev did to Geet. This is one part in the serial im really regretting and also looking forward to since im curious how the CV would handle the situation.

I have a quick question though - is there a reason why you opted for the 18 yr separation? One significance I see is the difference in Geet and Geeta's life. But I can't believe you kept them away frm each other for 18 yrs!! Just the thought makes me so sad again!

Can't wait for Geeta to play detective and find out abt Geet's past. Im sure she wud be really proud of her mother. I hope she is accepting of Maan, too. You have portrayed Maan's pain when he saw the father figure erased really well. *Another scene were I had to wipe my tears*

On a lighter not my only request - plz don't make me cry so much lol Eagerly waiting for the nxt update. Add me to your pm list :)

Nanthini </font>

Dear Nanthini,

Sorry for making you cry. 😭 However I am glad that you have discovered my FF and like it. Thank you for noticing that I have tried to keep the story as realistic as possible, I truly believe that although this is a fiction, the readers need to be able to feel everything the characters are going through.

As for your question as to why I kept them apart for 18 years. The answer is because there are so many wonderful amazing FFs that have them married and happy. The other FFs also seem to be set in the present and I thought it would be nice to see the future Geet and Maan and how they have changed. However, the biggest reason for the 18 years gap was Geeta, I wanted her to be grown up when the FF started. At 18 you are considered an adult and it is perfectly normal for you to leave home and be independent. I wanted her to start looking into her mother's past and I wanted her to do this as an adult. I didn't want to put Geet in an awkward situation by having to answer Geeta's questions when she was a child. Hope this explanation helps.

Geeta is already really proud of her mother, she has seen her struggle and become successful. She also had experienced Geet provide for her both emotionally and financially as a single mother.

I can't promise you that I wont make you cry, but I will try to mix in some happy moment with the sad ones.

Please tell your friends about this FF, chances are if you liked it, they too will enjoy it.

Keep on reading and commenting. You have been added to the PM list.

Love,
Polki

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Poli.Geek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

IMPORTANT: This update is Adult material.

This update is not suitable for readers under the age of 17. Please be warned that this update has adult behavior included.

If you are younger and would still like to read, please PM me and I will send you an edited PG version.

Part 12

With his eyes still closed, Maan spread his arms and felt around the bed, "where was she?". For the first time in a long time he knew exactly where he was, last night he had gotten into bed and she was asleep right next to him, where was she now? He opened his eyes and noticed that it was bright outside, grabbing his watch from the nightstand he squinted to see what time it was; 11am, it was midday! How had he slept through the entire morning? He answered his own question, he had slept his best sleep in 18 years, for the first time he felt stress free. He had been exhausted from the trauma he went through for almost two decades of not having her next to him, today all the exhaustion was gone.

He pulled the covers off and got out of the bed, he heard some noise coming from the downstairs. He proceeded down the stairs and found Geet in the study working on her computer. What seemed like a mountain of blueprints surrounded her. She also had a few files lying on the floor. He stood in the door way and observed her working.

She picked up the phone and dialed, he heard her say ,"Good day, Denise, its me. I am taking a look at the blueprints you sent over, I am not sure about the load bearing bracket in the Foyer for the Henderson house. Considering the height of the ceilings I believe that the materials initially recommended need to be re-considered." Closing one file and focusing on the contents of another Geet continued "I need you to talk to Miguel regarding the soil samples he collected for the office building in Greenwich. Take a look at the results; once we know the makeup of the earth where the building is to stand, it will be easier to figure out exactly what changes we will need to make to the design. Yes, you are right, we need to get that proposal out tonight. As soon as you are done, make sure you email me the blueprints so that I can take a look at them and finalize them. Could you also talk to Ken, I need him to arrange for a messenger to come and pick up some files from my house since I won't be coming in for the next few days. Actually why don't you just transfer me to him, I need to talk to him myself since I need him to do a few other things too. Okay, so I'll probably talk to you again before the day is done" She was done with one person and while she waited for the other she went through some more files.

Maan was stunned at seeing Geet work so efficiently. She sounded like him, it was all business, she was really good at what she did. He never doubted her abilities even back when she worked at Khurana Constructions, he had always given her extra responsibilities to utilize her keen eye when it came to knowing what people wanted. She seemed to always have her hand on the pulse of society.

"I need you to arrange for a messenger to pick up some files from my place. No, no I am not taking anytime off, I am not sick, Ken. I am perfectly fine. I will just be working from home for a few days that's all. Make sure you send Mrs. Watanabe the invoice. I will call you later with the list of files I'll be needing. No Ken, I don't know where the office supply catalog is, I am not your assistant, you are mine, it's your job to order supplies. Well I have a lot of work to do, bye"

Wow, she had become so authoritative. He guessed she was talking to her assistant. He smiled remembering all the times he had yelled at her while she was his secretary. Maan contemplated on the fact that now no used the term secretaries, they were now referred to as assistants.

He noticed her looking at a cup, she looked disappointed finding it empty. He thought he would help and spoke softly so as to not startle her."Can I get you something to drink, what would you like?"

She turned to look at him, he looked wonderful. She smiled,"I would love a coffee, I have so much work to do and I was hoping I would get it done before you woke up, but no such luck." she flashed him a guilty smile.

He nodded and gave her smile relaying he understood her dilemma. He turned around and started walking towards the kitchen but he took a U-turn and questioned her,"Coffee?"

"One of the many bad habits of yours I picked up" she replied teasingly.

He went to the kitchen and brewed a fresh pot of coffee, he needed some too. He dropped off the coffee for Geet and before he left, he said"Since you are working I don't want to be in your way, I'll go out, I'll see you later."

He saw the look he never wanted to see, she looked scared. He reassured her "I am coming back, don't worry."

Maan went and walked the streets of Manhattan for what seemed like hours. He was looking for something, he just wasn't sure what he was looking for. He was walking along 5th Avenue when he saw Tiffany's.

He remembered watching the movie Breakfast at Tiffany's with his Dadima. The memory brought a smile to his face, he went into the store. He described Geet and asked the sales lady what she would recommend for the lady he and just spoken about. She immediately showed him a pair of earrings. They were diamond earrings, each earring was made up of two diamonds, a round one on the top and a pear shaped diamond right below it. The light danced off of them mesmerizing any person who laid their eyes on them. They had some movement but not too much. They were perfect Maan surmised, they were simple yet brilliant just like his Geet. He paid for them and slipping the tiny blue box into his jacket left.

By the time he returned it was 6pm. He rang the buzzer for Geet's apartment. "Who is it?" he heard her ask.

"The father of your child" he answered. He heard the lock click and he let himself into the building. When he got to Geet's apartment she greeted him at the door. She was radiant in a sari. On finishing her work, she had cooked a special meal and changed into a sari. She had wanted their first proper dinner in 18 years to be a special one.

Maan's eyes were fixed on her, Geet looked like she was not of this world, she looked gorgeous, graceful, elegant, stylish, sensuous, sexy all at the same time. The sari accentuated all the wonderful curves of her body while teasing him by giving him a tiny peak at her bare midriff. Maan wanted to just grab Geet and pull her close to himself. He just wasn't sure how she'd react to him.

He decided that it was now or never, he had waited for 18 years to be with her and he wasn't going to loose the only chance he may have. He walked towards her still in a daze, he stopped only a couple inches away from her. He bent down and whispered in her ear, "why Geet, why do you make me loose my senses when I am in front of you? What am I to do now?"

Geet replied back,"less talk, more work" with a shy mischievous smile on her face.

That was all Maan had to hear to make him abandon control, he pulled her into an embrace and slowly cupping her face tilted it upwards, he traced her lips with his fingers, he felt her tremble, his touch was sending bolts of electricity through her veins. Geet too got bold with her actions. Till now she had stayed passive, she had waited for a long time for this plus she was a grown woman, there was nothing wrong with letting the love of her life know what effect he had on her. She traced his jawline and proceeded to run her fingers through his hair all the while pulling him down and herself up until their lips finally met. Maan was a little taken back by her boldness but he realized that like him she too had waited for this moment.

He started first with a gentle kiss and she responded to his kiss. A wave of fire engulfed them, the kiss got forceful, the world faded away as they blended together and they began to explore each other in earnest, unhindered and unashamed. Maan's lips moved from Geet's lips to her neck while her breath muttered soft sighs in his ear. Caught up in the moment she pulled him closer so that she could feel the warmth his body was radiating.

Maan stopped her and in one go, scooped her into his arms and proceeded to the bedroom. Once there he laid her on the bed gently and admired her beauty as he took of his jacket and shoes. He approached her, pulled her closer to him, removing her sari slowly exposing her warm bare skin, Geet too started unbuttoned his shirt, kissing his chest as she continued helping him undress. Maan laid down on her, their hearts racing together, he explored her body with his mouth, his hands felt every curve along her delicate frame. His hard body pressed against her, his mouth ravaged hers, her hands feeling his muscular body.

He was ready, he tore his lips from hers "I need you, Geet. I can't wait another minute."

"I need you too, Maan"she whispered back consenting his next move.

He moved in between her legs and they two of them started moving in succession. They could feel the waves of ecstasy break over them and finally for the first time, they were complete. They lay naked in each others arms.

Maan and Geet together "I love you" They smiled at the fact that their thoughts were so in sync with each other. He held her in his arms and she rested on his chest; they drifted off to sleep feeling content with life and for the first time in total peace with the universe.

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never lied to her, so why today?
Now keep on thinking about who is lying and about what. 😈 Ha! Ha! Ha! (a devilish laugh) Let the torture begin.

My lovely readers in Maneetland,

How are all of you today? I am excellent. Feeling great about being a year older (not really, but you are expected to say that) 😉

So thank you all very much for your birthday wishes and for giving me chutti from writing the FF. But as we all know you are a greedy bunch, so I am dedicating this update to all of you. I wrote it just to make up for my 1 day absence. I really don't want to think about what I would have to write if I were gone for a few days. 😆

Hope you all enjoy it.

Remember to tell your friends about this FF. It seems that a lot of people are not reading it because as soon as they read the first post and see that Maan and Geet are not together, they decide that they wont enjoy this FF. So if you all know anyone who would enjoy it, recommend it to them. Tell them it is not all horrible.

Hope you all enjoy this update.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Love,
Polki

Edited by Poli.Geek - 14 years ago