Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 14

just read ur ff it is very different and interseting. and wish u a happy birthday

Thank you all you wonderful people for the amazing Birthday wishes.

Today I am a year older (and you would have thought wiser, but no such luck 😃)

I am having a great day so far today, and hopefully the rest of the day is as wonderful as all you wished for me.

Promise to reply to all your individual messages later. Will also post the spoiler then.

See you all tomorrow.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

loved the update polki. chutti for 2morrow bt promise 2 give an extra long update the next day.
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just noticed
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i was the 1st one 2 reply...

Dear Lallulal,

Thanks for liking the update and for giving me chutti for my birthday. I don't know about an extra long update but I have tried my best to appease you with my next update. Hope you like it.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Amazing........................

pls continue soooooooooon😊

Thanks

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hey honey,😊

u've granted my wish.... awwww... maan and geet in one room and one bed.. how cute..!!!!! thanks sweety... 😛

i loved this line, i guess i missed it in the last update: "you don't invite residents of the house in; you only invite guests
in"...

lovely lovely update... omg !!!

<font color="#ff0000">and hey tomo is ur b'day, advance happy birthday sweetheart...!!!! 🤗</font><font color="#ff0000">🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗</font><font color="#ff0000">🤗... have a wonderful b'day and many many many happy returns of the day..!!! </font>

<font color="#6600ff">i've been reading ur FF and commenting it, so i guess my gift to you is secured</font>.... 😉...!!!

i also loved the last part : He had eventually come to bed; she was glad that he had gotten the
hint (she hadn't wanted to say anything just to see if he considered
this home or not) that this was his home, his room, his bed and his
Geet.

this is just so amazing. completely in love with ur FF and i cannot wait to read more. but i guess u are free to take a chutti... 😆,.... on ur b'day..!!!

i felt bad for maan when i read these lines: Maan started to cry silently, he wasn't exactly sure where Geet was
and he didn't want her to see him in this state. That figure of the
father should have never been erased he thought cause he was alive.

hold on i did not cry and well, i rarely get that emotional!!! 😆 anyways coming back to the point, i guess maan relived his daughters 18 years in those couple of minutes. it was nice. i liked how he resisted the temptation to read her note. that's so cute. and yes, the figure should not have been erased but geeta did not know anything abt her father, but i guess when she would know, she would definetely include it there...!!!! 😳...

gosh, every update just keeps getting better and better... too bad u just update once a day...!!!😉

Soumya



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Lovely Soumya,

So glad that you liked the update, yes it was a little emotional but I needed to show how Maan really felt. I did however also include some sweet moments to make up for the sadness.

Yes your birthday present was secured as soon as you commented on the update. Thank you for the kind wishes. I had a great Birthday.

I am back with a new update after my one day chutti.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!

awwww!!!......maan and geet slept together!......soooo cute and even geet was glad that he considered this home his!=)

i hope they will make right decision this time!

happy birthday in advance!.....and u can definitely have chutti for tomorrow!....=)

continue soon!

Dear Sweet Scorpio,

Yes Maan and Geet slept in the same bed together. I finally decided to give into popular demand. 😃

As for the right decision, lets see what happens. You'll just have to continue reading to find out.

Thanks for the birthday wishes and Chutti. 😛

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

<font color="#ff0033">You've robbed me of words to express how perfect this update was.

It's evident that Maan has changed so much in the last 18 years with his little emotional outbursts 😉 😆 😛
It really is heart-warming, especially in these parts:

<font color="#660099">The third door he opened had Maan
once again in an emotional state.

One
picture in particular caught his eye, it was a drawing of a family, her
family in particular, a Mother and a child holding hands. If you didn't
look any closer you wouldn't have noticed the figure of the father that
had been drawn and then erased, however the eraser had not been
completely successful in doing its job. He wondered why she had erased
the father from the picture. Maan started to cry silently, he wasn't
exactly sure where Geet was and he didn't want her to see him in this
state. That figure of the father should have never been erased he
thought cause he was alive.
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I also adore the way Geet, despite the distance and years feels so strongly about Maan (well...how could she not 😉 ) ! It's beyond sweet how they both consider the apartment as their HOME 😳 😃 And the parting line here just put the cherry on top of the icing 👏 👏 👏
<font color="#660099">
She smiled taking the
sight of the man who lay next to her, he looked so calm, she could see a
small smile on his face. He had eventually come to bed; she was glad
that he had gotten the hint (she hadn't wanted to say anything just to
see if he considered this home or not) that this was his home, his room,
his bed and his Geet. </font></font>

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR TOMORROW 😃 Have an amazing day!
And....Thanks for the P.M. and update asap 😃

Dear Ayesha,

Wow, what a wonderful compliment. Robbed you of words, I guess that is a good things, I can use them in my FF 😃

Its amazing how deep their love really is, even after 18 years they still believe that home is where the other is. Earlier when Geeta used to ask her where she was from, Geet always replied Delhi, because that is where Maan was, and now Maan also considers the apartment his home. Geet was really happy by this.

Thanks for the birthday wishes. I had an amazing day and I am back with a new update.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: smiliey

thank u for the update n the pm... HAPPY BIRTHDAY🥳 wish u all the best... may GOD bless u w/ everything...🤗

Dear Smiliey,
You are welcome for the PM.

Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Keep reading and commenting.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!! Aww maan in geeta's room was really touchy...wow they shared the same room and same bed...loved it...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon and Happy Birthday Dear!!

Dear Kooliio,

Thanks for liking the update.

Thanks for the Birthday wishes.

Keep reading and commenting.

Love,
Polki