Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Ah darling..Abs..shatir to aap bhi..hain..

mujhe ideas to tum hi deti ho..hena?

wow...ye story to sachchi mein saga bann gayee...

i am handling 8 characters..and trying to keep each of their personality individual still they seem to be a collective group...

without you guys this would not have been possible..

aaj..to mera tum logo ko hats off kehna..hai..for being here on this ride...that has become my anchor...

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: rushtrip
Ah darling..Abs..shatir to aap bhi..hain.. Sachhi mein...mera dimaag sirf sadistic ideas mein...kaise kisi to annoy torture kiya jaaye mein tez chalta hai..😆

mujhe ideas to tum hi deti ho..hena? Haan, meri imagination kabhi kabhi bahut hi fertile ho jaati hai!

wow...ye story to sachchi mein saga bann gayee... YUp, it's the GodFather Saga!😆

i am handling 8 characters..and trying to keep each of their personality individual still they seem to be a collective group... Yeah, I don't know how you're able to do that...but you're doing an amazing job at it!

without you guys this would not have been possible..But likhti toh ho tum...humare ideas ka kya mol agar ussay koi convey karna wala hi na ho!

aaj..to mera tum logo ko hats off kehna..hai..for being here on this ride...that has become my anchor... Abs bowing to Vrushali for her awesome writing without which this wouldn't have been possible and hugs 🤗

Edited by Hot_Indo_Chilly - 14 years ago

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--Revv--

@--Revv--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#223

I am very upset today.. I sooo wanted to write a long post on the last 2 updates..

Today I wrote a long post and clicked on post reply,.. But power went and I got page cannot displayed.. So lost all that I had typed. Then I redid it and retyped it and also put it on word... I forgot to save it cos I got a call from the transport saying cab waiting ..Unfortunately this was saved on hubby system and he closed it without saving 😡😡😡.. Now I am just toooooooooo tired to retype everything...😭😭😭...

ddnt realise it got posted 😳😳..

Edited by MaaneetDD - 14 years ago

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD
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Shukr hai isne bas xx likha, warna agar ek aur jod deti toh mujh jaise bacchon ke liye censor ho jaata!🤣

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Excellent update Vrush...loved the Red and Pink theme.....Abs ko thoda bhaut tayyar bhi karliya hain...for the forthcoming games? Wiase which of the naughty games have you decided on...i sent a few recommendations....PM me!!!

Love Faz and Vicky ki shaitaani...it really does bring back College ki memories.....we used to have a blast back then.....kya time tha!!!

So...Maan veerji bhi entrance marne wala hain......woh aa ke kya kenenge???😉😉

Abs....don't be nervous....just enjoy the ride......these will be the memories that will bring a smile to your face retrospectively....so kick back and RELAX!!!! We have a nice ride made ready for you!!!

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: AKANargis
Excellent update Vrush...loved the Red and Pink theme.....Abs ko thoda bhaut tayyar bhi karliya hain...for the forthcoming games? Wiase which of the naughty games have you decided on...i sent a few recommendations....PM me!!!

Love Faz and Vicky ki shaitaani...it really does bring back College ki memories.....we used to have a blast back then.....kya time tha!!!

So...Maan veerji bhi entrance marne wala hain......woh aa ke kya kenenge???😉😉

Abs....don't be nervous....just enjoy the ride......these will be the memories that will bring a smile to your face retrospectively....so kick back and RELAX!!!! We have a nice ride made ready for you!!!

Oh let's have Vicky wear a babydoll nightgown you know like Salman Khan did in the song "Didi tera devar deewana"!!!!😆

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--Revv--

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Shukr hai isne bas xx likha, warna agar ek aur jod deti toh mujh jaise bacchon ke liye censor ho jaata!🤣

😳😳😳😳😡😡..that was the stupid spam message issue! I wanted to copy what I typed, instead XX came in .. Kya karoo... This is the 5th time I am trying to write for Vroom.. I am just tired...And atleast mere boopers se koi toh lot pot ko khe hasa 😉😉😉