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maan slapped naintara🥳🥳im so happy
continue soon
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amazing part!!!
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⭐️HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY FOR MAANEET 😊.............. 😉PARTY TIME ............... 👏TRUTH ALWAYS WINS.👏.... GREAT JOB DONE ... 👏
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WOW.................... SUPERB
1. Maan Slapped Naintare
2. Both are behind bars atlast
3. Maaneet can live happily now
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😊finally justice acheived
🥳congrats maan and geet🥳
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Sanaa!!
Happy times!!
Ab bajee in teeno ki band!!
NT and Donkey in jail ..
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Happy days ahead for Geet and Maan!!
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HAAAAA Kassshh ye sab real mein hojaye.. geet serial hee khattam hojaye gaa lolss

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hi just read part 75 - 79. fab still i guess court ne dev n NT ko kam saja di. any ways happy days r back. Thanks 4 pm.
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Part 80

3 months later

Maan is sleeping and Geet is sitting up against the pillow since she is heavily pregnant, uncomfortable and cannot decide on a position to sleep in. She is running her fingers through Maan's hair and smiling at him lovingly. She then frowns seeing him sleeping so comfortably while she is awake and has a mischievious look in her eyes. She thinks, 'Ello. Main yaha so nahi pa rahi houn aur yeh hai ki mujhe peet dikhakar aaram se so rahe hai. Babaji, yeh toh sahi nahi hai, hai na?' She comes close to him and blows on his neck. Maan does not stir at all. She is surprised and says, 'Inki toh neend kumbhkaran ki hai. Hmmm.' She bends over and nibbles on his ear. He wakes up with a start and Geet immediately lays back on her pillow and pretends to be asleep. Maan looks at her and touches his ear. He realizes that Geet was troubling him. He comes really close to her face and she suddenly opens her eyes. Geet smiles and says, 'Aap uth kyun gaye, Maan. Kya hua?'

He knits his eyebrows and says, 'Woh meri patni hai na, usne jaga diya.' She pulls him closer and says, 'Ab jaag hi gaye hai toh.' He bends down and they both start kissing each other. He pulls back to look at her and says, 'Geet, kabhi kabhi main tumhe aur uss purani Geet ko jod hi nahi paata. Itni shararat bhari parhi hai tum mein.' She caresses his face and says, 'Aap jod bhi nahi payege, Maan. Main Maan ki Geet houn. Uske pyaar mein nikhri hui Geet. Meri zindagi ke do hisse hain. Ek aapke aane se pehle aur ek aapke aane ke baad. In guzrein hue mahino mein maine purani Geet ko kho diya.' She makes him lie back and comes close to his side. She naughtily says, 'Yeh wali Geet nahi pasand aapko Maan?' He runs his fingers through her hair and takes her closer as their lips are inches away from each other. He smiles and says, 'Itni pasand hai ke main bata nahi sakta Geet. Tumhare saath har din naya hai. Tumhe jitni baar dekta houn toh ek pal ke liye ruk jaata houn apne aapko yakeen dilane ke liye ke'' He kisses her and says, 'Yeh khubsoorat'' He kisses her again as she smiles happily, 'Pagal si'' She kisses him and then he says, 'Pyaari si ladki sirf meri hai aur hamesha meri rahegi.' They both laugh and Maan's eyes widen when he realizes that Geet is unbuttoning his shirt. She smiles unabashedly and he shakes his head smiling as they start kissing each other and go under the covers.

Geet gets up in the morning and is not her chirpy self. She is quite short with Maan as well. He says, 'Geet, kya hua?' She looks up and says, 'Babaji, yeh kaisa sawaal pouch rahe hai? Yeh dekh nahi sakte kitna bhaar lekar chal rahi houn.' She looks at Maan and says, 'Aapko chashme ki toh zaroorat nahi hai na, Maan?' He is taken aback and says, 'Nahi toh. I know tum uncomfortable ho iss liye maine socha hai ke tumhe swim karna chahiye. Pregnancy mein acha hota hai.' She looks at him intently and then touches his forehead and neck for his temperature. She says, 'Maan, aap theek hai na? Aapko yaad nahi hai ke aapne mujhe pehli baar pani mein se hi bachaya tha. Mujhe terna nahi aata.' He takes her close and says, 'Mere saat bhi nahi.' She closes her eyes and says, 'Chi chi, Maan. Dadima hai ghar mein aur saare naukar. Kuch toh sharam keejiye.' She goes away and Maan smiles and tells himself, 'Swim toh tumhe karna hai, Geet aur woh bhi mere saath. Kaise? Yeh tum mujhpar chod do.' His face is lit up with mischief.

Geet goes to sleep in the afternoon and wakes up to find that Maan is not there. She realizes that she did not speak to him properly and maybe he is upset. She leaves the room and walks towards the living room. She finds that nobody is in the house. She says, 'Yeh kya? Koi bhi ghar par nahi hai?' Maan speaks from behind her and says, 'Main kaafi nahi houn?' She turns around to see him standing against the pillar just in his jeans looking at her seductively. She says, 'Mujhe toh laga tha ke aap bhi nahi hai.' He walks towards her and says, 'Geet, maine tumhe kabhi akela choda hai jo aaj chala jaata?' She shakes her head and says no. He comes close to her and slowly puts her against the wall. She says, 'Maan, koi aa jayega.' He smiles and says, 'Jab koi hai nahi toh aayega kaise? Aaj sirf main aur tum hai, Geet.' She says, 'Sab kaha gaye?' He replies, 'Yeh zaroori nahi hai. Zaroori yeh hai ke tum yeh pehen lo aur mere saath chalo.' She looks at it and says, 'Kyun?' Maan frowns and says, 'Tum sawaal bohot pouchti ho, Geet. Main pehna deta houn.' She struggles but he does not listen. She finally relents and he puts a pure white sheet around her and ties it near her shoulder.

Geet keeps looking at him as he walks with her not knowing where he is taking her. He stops near it and points his face towards the pool. She smiles, looks at him and then looks at the pool. She is shocked, 'Ummm' Maan, yeh kya?' Maan says, 'Isse English mein swimming pool kehte hai aur hindi mein'' Geet cuts him off saying, 'Janti houn, janti houn. Lekin hum dono yaha kya kar rahe hai?' Maan tilts his face to one side and says, 'Geet, tum hamesha se hi itni slow ho ya maine notice nahi kiya?' She goes, 'Hmph' and is about to leave when Maan holds her hand and says, 'Poore ghar ko bhej diya, Geet tumhare ek bahane ko hatane ke liye. Phir bhi mere liye itna nahi karogi?' She relaxes her shoulders, turns towards him and nods her head taking his hand in hers.

They both descend into the water together and Maan keeps Geet close to himself. He makes her swim slowly teaching her a basic stroke and they take a few laps till he finds that she is tired. They both rest against the side of the pool. She closes her eyes and rests against the wall breathing unevenly when Maan sees her from the side and finds her looking beautiful with drops of water on her face and her wet hair. He comes in front of her and she opens his eyes to see him looking at her. They both come closer to each other and then kiss each other passionately totally lost in the moment. He takes her out of the pool and then takes her towards their room.. She says, 'Aap kuch bhi kar sakte hai, hai na?' He nods, kisses her again and they walk together holding each other hand with Geet's head on Maan's shoulder.

Chaahon mein tumko yeh aashiqui hai
Is aashiqui mein ek bekhudi hai
Yeh bekhudi bhi deewanapan hai
Deewanepan mein aawaargi hai
Yeh bekhudi, deewaangi
Tumhi se hai meri jaane jaana
Aashiqui, aawaargi
Tumhi se hai meri jaane jaana
Jaane jaan yeh dil mera
Tumko bhoola na paayega

Edited by premmukti4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a sweet update................loving this side of maaneet romance

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