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shonadesire

@shonadesire

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#351

hey dear
awesome part
totally loved it
pls dn't end this ff
thanks for pm
cont. soon

QUESTIONS

1)What is your favourite scene from the whole ff?
when ridz told armaan abot her pregrncy that is awesome, amazing so on...................😊

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Armaan: Okay, I promise you!

Ridhima: Pinky promise?😊😛

Armaan: Pinky promise!! (Armaan laughed at her childishness and hugged her even more tightly.

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"RIDHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Isse mein hi kyun milta hoon susu karne keliye!" He spoke in mock anger as he handed Rhea to Ridhima.😆😆😃

3)How did you come across dis ff?

one day i saw this ff n i read prolouge, i really loved that so i read dis ff😛

4)Is there anything i should improve?

there is no need to improve but i have request lps in nxt part write some armaan n rhea scene where they annoyed ridz from their naughtiness😊 n some romencve btw ridz n armaan😛😊😉

WISH U HAPPY NEW DEAR 😛😊🥳

Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#352

HI MEL.....FIRST OF ALL WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR😃.....NOW COMING TO THE PART....JUST LOVED IT....SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN👏....AWWW I AM GOING TO MISS THIS FF VERY BADLY.....

NOW ANSWERS TO UR QUESTIONS:

1)What is your favourite scene from the whole ff?

I really love the scean where Ridzy crave for ice-cream at 2AM and poor Armman have to take her to the ice-cream parlor...that sceans is soo cute..😃

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Well....all My Armaan's dioalogues...(so soory can't choose...)😳

3)How did you come across dis ff?

while searching for good FF on AR...😃.

4)Is there anything i should improve?

sorry dear...i don'nt know nything abt writing😕....so I ca'nt say nything....for me u r Perfect......😊

LOTS OF LOVE

GEET

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KaSh_KaJen

@KaSh_KaJen

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#353

that was amazing!! loved how you explained all the scenes...and i liked the scenes after rhea was born too...so cute! and the ending was really really nice!!

thanks a lot for updating!!!

1. my fave scene is the ridhima's sudden ice crave late in the night..and then they both go out for it

2. fav dialogues...hmm..all armaan's witty dialogues..one i remember clearly is "mein pehnadoo" or something along those lines..lol

3.yur ff was recommended in the ff section so saw it there n read it!

4. i don't think you need to impove...just keep it up!!

will really really miss this ff! but looking forward to ur other ffs..

Edited by KaSh_KaJen - 14 years ago

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

awesummm ending Melena ...

loved dis FF....AR r truely Inseparable....

u r an Outstanding Author :))

hope u write more of such fab FF's sooonnn :))

oh n btw....eagerly waiting 4 da next update of HPO....

do PM me next tym u update ur FF's tc...

lotsa love

JIA<3

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

RES RES RES

cantt wait to read this last update...but i gutta go out so when i get back, imma read with peace and give you a HUGE COMMENT..:)

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WOW, that was just beautiful!

Youve descrbied their journey so nicely, that i feel like re-reading this ff all over again and i shall do that :P loll

But loved the entire 9th month, it surely was speciall..going from the waxing to the birth of Rhea.

And i loved how to described AR's emotions and feelings in the entire FF. youre just awesome Mel. and I hope to always read your ff and dont forget to pm me :)

and oh yeah, i also loved how riddhima went through a normal pregnancy just with armaan being with her and his touch.....their love just leaves us speechless doesnt it?

Ill surely miss this ff alot!

And please do continue your other ffs soonn :)

and also, HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Thank you so much everyone! I'll reply back to you all asap for sure.🤗

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Noreen

@noru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

I just wanna say.. BEAUTIFUL update! It was the perfect ending! I love this FF and thank you for writing it! In every part you described AR perfectly! ❤️ One of my fave FFs ❤️ Do continue writing more FFs/Oneshots too!

-Noru ❤️