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Part 2

We see riddhima sitting on her desk and working on his laptop. The phone beside her rings, she picks it up..

R: yes suzi

Su(Suzi Riddhima's secretary): Mam, there is a call for you from Mr. Amit Malik

R(shocked): what(thinking how come..he is my ideal and he is calling me..immediately coming out of shock)sorry i was just...give him the line

S:yes mam

till the time...the call was getting transferred...she composed her self and came out of the sudden shock...but was all smile now..and her eyes twinkling with joy

Am: hi Miss Riddhima Gupta, its Amit Malik here. President of Malik Industries.

R(excitedly): Hi Mr Malik...who does not know you sir. It's my pleasure that you gave me a call. How can i help you sir?

Am(impressed by the girls gesture): well Miss Gupta...i have read an article about you recently in the business magazine and have heard also a lot by my acquaintances, about the kind of work you have done and i must say at this small age you have achieved a lot

R(really happy as today her inspiration is impressed by her work):thank you so much sir, its so nice to hear such good words about myself from you.

Am:no no...no need of thanking Miss Gupta...its what i see...and hear is what am talking about...and have read you admire me as your mentor...its great pleasure to know that some one thinks of my hardwork and take me as a role model.

R: you indeed are my mentor sir...the success and position you have gain in society, its my dream to come to that point in life one day.

Am: you surely will...my all best wishes are with you..actually i have called because i wanted to meet you personally.

R(shocked again...thinking...he could have asked his pa to book an appointment with her pa..but has called himself instead...)

Am(not hearing from her side): Miss Gupta, are you there? If its a problem,no worries, we can talk later someday

R(all of a sudeen): no sir, nothing like that. Am so honoured that you would like to meet me, was just shock that you called yourself for such a small thing instead you could have asked your pa and

Am: actually i could have done that, but i wanted to talk to you myself after reading about you and wanted to see, how you are as a person and to tell you the truth am impressed and thats why wanted to meet you now in person too.

R:it will be my pleasure sir..anytime you are comfortable...i don't have a problem

Am: ok then tomorrow morning at 11, is that ok

R: no worries...will see u at 11 then for sure

Am: ok than was nice talking to a young lady with such a sweet and charming personality

R(blushing with compliment): same here sir...it was indeed nice to have a talk with you

With that the phone got disconnected and riddhima was shocked and now nervous and what not as she would meet the one person...she was dying to meet up with...and too her luck she will get to meet him this soon...she thought once she would reach to atleast a point where he is...she could meet him up...but indeed her stars were lucky...

R:thank u....thank u...bhagwan g...for making my dream come true so soon....

G: Bhooy Frhhnnnd(boy friend)

A(bends down and picks her up in his arms and twirls her around):hello to my little girl friend..how is my princess doing today??

G: am ghud(good)

A: aww really (kisses her on both cheeks and both come inside)

While coming in...

A:ria bacha...where is your mama??

R:in offfichee

A(thinking aree yaar...anji di abhi tak ghar he nahee aye ab kya karoo...meanwhile riya pinches him as he is in his own land): ji bacha...

R: app mujhse milne nayee aye(looking all sad)

A: arey nahee mei tu apni girlfriend k ilawa kisi se milney asakta hoo yaha bhala..hmm

Riya claps happily and kisses him on his cheeks..and arman gives his most adorable smile

A:acha princess...app k papa kaha par hain??(as he knew atul jij should be at home..as both don leave riya alone...inspite anji di's in laws live with her...but in evening one of them should be with riya...it's how they don't let riya feel that her parents are not with her)

R:papa ko bulayoo

Arman nods and let riya go and call atul...while he sits on the near by couch...after some time we see atul holding riya in his arms....coming down

At:armi...so nice to see...kafi din baad chakar lagaya tum ne...???

A: woh jijs kya haina...bas kaam mei...idhar udhar

At: kaam mein?? Yah parties mein

A: ab now app maat shuru ho jao...sab se subah se yahee sun raha ho...ab app bhi

At: acha chor yeh sab...baith...and tell me...kia problem hai

A: see even you can see problem...written on my face but...people in my house...they are taking it so casually...ab app aur anji di ka he sahara hai(being all dramatic)

At: acha...acha ab natak kaam kar...aur line pe aa

And arman tells him the whole car story...

At(at the end could not control his laugh): tu na armi...aisa face banaya hai...jaise pata nahee kiya hogaya...hai...ik car k liye...tu...chor waise mein kehte hoo...yes keh de uncle g ko...zyada se zyada kya condition rakhein ge..

A: hans lo...hans lo app...yahee tu masla hai...koi mujhe seriously leta he nahee..car k baat hai...koi choti moti nahee...its my car...arman's...n how can dad give it to anyone...woh meri cheez hai...and

At: i know...i know...arman k cheez k taraf koi ungli bhi nahee utha sakta..blah blah..phir kya arman...tu kya chahta hai

A: i wont to know k condition kya hai...and i am damn sure dad ney anji di ko zaroor bataye hogi...as he shares everything with her.

At:hmm...i don't think so...kehney ko tu...he tells you too...most of the stuff...chahe...tu kitna nalayak beta hai...(looks angrily at his statement)acha...sorry...sorry...anji ko i don't think kuch pata hoga...but anyway...i called her before...she is just on her way to home...ati hai tu pooch lena..

Just then we hear a voice..

An:bhayee kis ko kya poochna hai mujh se..

Its anji and seeing arman...she comes and hugs him...then goes and hugs atul...takes riya in her lap...and sits beside atul..

An: tu kiski kya poochna hai mujh se...

Armaan narrates the whole thing to anji and waits for her response..

An:hmmm...dad aur aise react karein...woh bhi with you...its quite shocking though...but seriously armi..i have no clue what he is upto...and today i was so busy...have not met him the whole day...

A:don't say that di...main abb kya karoon...niki bhabs ko bhi koi clue nahee...she said...she will try and ask abhi bhai...mom knows but you know...she is a hitler...saying...its right for me...sometime i doubt is she my real mom...(at this anji glares at him angrily)ok...m not saying that...don't give me that killing look....jijs can only handle that...i cant...but seriously...with u,jijs,muski,abhi bhai,niki bhabs,Minnie,sam,adi and even riya...she is all sweety..tweety mother like...and me...huh

An: arman...don't say that...you know she loves you the most out of all of us...

A:yah yah..

An:arman...she just does not show it often as she knows...how much already spoiled you are..

A:anji di..

An:what ...am talking the truth...acha leave it anyway and tell me...what you want to do now..???

A:i don't want to say yes...before hearing the condition...i think he will call me to office and you know..

An:arman...if he does also...you have to come one day...its all yours...he has to retire one day...you have to handle this...as being his only son

A:i know di...but not now...atleast let me enjoy my life

An:till when arman...when you will be 40-50...grow up...bro...in next few years you will have to settle down...get married...who will give his daughter to a person like you...who has no responsibility..

A:plz di...i don't want to think about marriage stuff now...it will come after many years in my life...(stops suddenly and then shouts)oh no....

An(confused expression): what??

A: is he planning to get me married...and that's his condition...

An: armi...come on...why will he think of that...

A:arey anji di...movies..hindi movies...un sab mei aisa he tu hota hai...beta bigara howa...baap ko kuch samjh nahee ata kaise sudharey...n he den sees a girl who can change his son...da very sanskari n all...blah blah...n he ask his son to get married n he changes all of a sudden...into a obedient boy...after marriage..

An:god armi...no ways...i don't think dad aisa kuch..

A: can be di...u don't know...he is such a fan of old hindi movies...aur raat ko he koi aisi dekhi hogi...aur subah tabhi ...he was acting this strict and all...

An:pata nahee...so what you will do now..if this is the condition..

A:am sure but not 100%...will consult others too...but if this is condition...i will say yes...

An:what??but now only u were saying marriage is not in ur agenda for many years from now...

A:ofcourse who is saying...i will marry after saying yes...u just see...what now Arman Malik does...dad does not know...how many tricks i have to backfire his plan of ruining my life..ok then i will leave as i have to talk to others too before saying yes.

An: ruk armi...khana kha k chala ja...waisey he itney din baad aya hai...riya bhi khush hogi...

A:no di...phir kabhi...don have time..as dad ko dinner pe haan bolni hai..bye...

With that he runs out...and drive his car as fast as he could...inside

At:tumhe kya lagta hai...uncle g aisi koi shart rakh sakte hai..

An: no idea...with dad...you can expect anything atul...he and arman are just the same...what weird ideas can come to their mind...they only know...forget it...will just go and change..and then will serve dinner...

At:okay sweet heart...give riya to me...

Anjali goes upstairs while atul starts playing with riya...

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