MINI AR: Welcome To Hell-Upd Pt4(Pg8)Chk Imp Note - Page 4

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today's update was very nice and the old hindi film idea is so funny. Arman is very sharp and clever is ko tu sub pehle se pata hai. Can't wait 2 know what the condition is .plz update soon.

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bechara armaan
riddhima is so happy .
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Part 3

Arman reaches his home and was about to go to niki's room when he hears his father's voice passing by their parents room and he stops and listen to his parents conversation,

S: tu phir riddhimma ne kia kaha appse?

Am: mainey call kiya tha...as such tu kuch kaha nahee main ne is yopic per us sey.....ab call pe acha thori na lagta hai yeh sab kehna...kal milney ka kaha hai...subah..at 11...tabhi sab batein honge..

S: hmm...thts gud...ab bas subah he usey is proposal ka bata dijyega...and i hope us se phele aj arman dinner per haan bol de...

Am: haan tu shreya woh bolega he..uski pyari gari ka jo sawal hai...bas ik baar woh haan bol de...bas phir...mein is proposal ko lekey agay bharoon ga...

S: mujhe bhi yahee sahee lagta hai...ab wohi larki humari akhri umeed hai...

Am: don't worry shreya...mainey uskey barey mei sab pata lagaya hai...she is very determinate girl...kuch than le tu kar k chorti hai...

S: bas mei ab woh din jald dekhna chahte hoon...jab mera Arman...is kabil ban jaye...k apni zimdaryoon ko samjh sakhe...akhir humarey baad sab usi ne dekhna hai..

Am: sahee kaha tum ne...mainey tu umeed he chor de thi...par is larki ney ajj ik nayee umeed jagaye hai...shayad...jo mein ya tum nahee kar payee ...yeh kar dikhayee..

Then they talk about general things...on the other hand armaan who was listening to this quietly...smiles...and thinks...so my guess was right...larki ka he chakar hai...hmm...whoever you are Miss Riddhima...You have not met Arman Malik...mujhe sudharney wala,hokum chalaney wala ajj tak paida nahee hua...i do things my way...and live my life on my terms...not on anyone elses...tumhein bhi dekh leinge...and without going to niki's room...he goes in his...to get ready and meet his dad on dinner to say yes.

Dinner Table:

Arman is already seated...everyone in shocked on seeing him on the table...as he never is in house...for dinner or lunch...n his breakfast also is usually when others leave for work or school, college....Muskan who is sitting meet to him...is shock to see him on time at home today...asks him

M:kya baat hai armi....ajj chand kaha se nikla hai...???

A: muski...first of all...its suraj kaha se nikla hai...not chand...and secondly...is there some order that i can't come home early and have dinner with my family...haan

M: i know...i know its suraj not chand...par tu subah uthatha kab hai time pe...jo suraj nikalte dekhe...tu chand he kahoonge na...

Meanwhile Minnie comes and join in too...

Mi: exactly muski di...your such good at analyzing...rahul jiju k tu nikal pari

A:nikal pari...pachtayega..jab yeh pyar ka bukhar utrey ga after marriage...phir pata chalega us se...kon sib ala us ke galey pari hai...

M:mei aur bala...tum khud kya hoo...haan haan...(thinking of getting some word for him...but not getting any...looks at Minnie for help)

Mi:Dracula...di...dracula hai...bhai..

A:Minnie tu...main tujhe Dracula dekhta hoon....mein itna handsom...smart...dashing...cute...jis pe larkiyan marti hai...ko tu Dracula se compare kar rahee hai.....agar mein Dracula...tu tum...dracula k bhain...witch....

Mi:kya...bhai...app ne mujhe...witch bola...(shouting)mama...papa...niki bhabhs...abhi bhai...aoo...sab...dekho...armi bhai ne mujhe...(n she does all the fake crying...all come at once...arman...hits on his head...and think...ab drama shuru...gaya tu arman beta...ajj ka din he manhoos...hai...kis ne kaha tha...subah...subah...uth...dekh...roz...dair se uthta hai tu...how lovely your day goes..aur ajj...subah se he terey sitarey gardish mei hain...)

Am: (looking at Minnie crying comes and sits by her side)kya hua Minnie beta...why are you crying??

Mi(doing fullto acting): dad woh armi bhai ne... (starts crying again...amit tries to pacify her)

Am:kya kiya arman ne...(moving to arman)arman...kya kaha tum ne Minnie se...(does not reply)mainey kuch poocha hai arman(shouts)

A:kuch bhi nahee dad...hum sab sirf mazak kar rahee the...

Am:mazak kar rahee the...then why is Minnie crying...tumne apni car ka tu nahee poocha...(moving to minnie)minnie kya arman ne car wapis mangi tumse beta...

Minnie remains quiet and is enjoying the screaming arman is getting...and remains quiet on purpose..sniffing in between to add more fire...

Am:Arman haad hoti hai har cheez k...kuch tu respect sekho...parents k...baat merey aur tumharey beech thi na...phir Minnie ko kuch bolne k kya zarorat thi....tum ne jawab mujhe dena tha...not to Minnie...kab smajhoge...kab sudhroge...am just fed up from you...

A:par dad main ne..aisa...kuch..

Am: mujhe kuch nahee suna...thts it...ab its dinner time now...i hope tum ne faisla kar liya hoga...so what's your answer...

A:i have decided...but before that...you should clarify this matter...you cant just blame me everytime for everything...like you always do..

S:armaan...you are talking to your dad...and he has every right to blame you...tell me...what have you not done...all the time it's you who is at fault...purposely always...you start picking fights with sisters at home also...you are always...teasing them...we had enough of your childish behaviour...even sam and adi are more sensible than you...now say sorry to all...and next time behave with your sisters...you should be good with them as one day they will leave this house and you...(now muski and Minnie looked at each other...through eyes telling each other...the prank has gone far and they should end it...)

M:woh mom...leave it na...we all will have dinner now...it was just a small thing...so forget it...

S: no muskaan he has to say sorry...he should learn to know what should be done after commiting a mistake....

Mi(now got worried as it was getting too far): plz mom...choro na sab...forget it...

N(didn't knew the matter but....came in...):haan mom...dad...app sab betho...i will serve...start dinner...ajj waisey bhi after long we all as a family will sit and eat dinner...

All sit quietly...niki start serving...arman is still standing...

N:armi chal beth...mein khana parosti hoon...

A:nahee bhabhs...mujhe bhook nahee...m going to my room...and yes(moving to amit)before leaving Mr. Amit Malik...i will just answer the question you asked in the morning my answer is yes...(amit looks happy on his answer and was about to say something...when arman speaks again)and i don't need your car anymore...you can give to who ever you want...(with that he leaves for his room...leaving niki and abhi calling him...shreya and amit are shocked...muski and Minnie are upset...as because of there stupid joke...the atmosphere got tensed)

S:chalo sab khanna khatam karo...he might have eaten something from outside..

Everyones...just to show each other take few bites...but they have lost the appetite as armaan was upset...soon after they all retire from the table..in muski's room...

M: Minnie tub hi na haad kar deti hai kabhi...ab dekh armi ne khana bhi nahee khaya...naraaz hokey...chala gaya...

Mi:mein tu bas mazak kar rahee thi...as always...mujhe kya pata tha..dad ne kabhi pehle itna serious liya he nahee...he always joins in our joke...mei unhe ankh mar k humesha k tarah bataney he walee thi...to join in...but he shouted on bhai...and i got scared then...ab kya kareinge...muski di..

M:kuch tu karna hoga...

Mi:kuch socho na di...i cant see bhai...like this...he was so upset...and when he was talking about the car...dad ne tu subah kaha tha...bas bhai ko tang karna hai...is liya ajj leja car...par ab...sab kitna confusing hogaya hai...and woh kis baat k barey mei yes bol rahee the...to dad???

M:pata nahee Minnie...i have no idea...but armi was real angry...you saw...how he talked with dad...

Mi:hmm..hum bhai k room mein chalein...will see...if he is awake..i will say sorry...phir...unhe...bhook bhi lagi hogi na...

M:haan yeh sahee hai...and we all know..armi kitna bhook ka kacha hai...niki bhabhi was also worried ...woh keh rahein thein...unhe pata hai...usney kuch nahee khaya..

Mi: bhabs ko saath leke jayein...

M:nahee woh bechari...kitni dair..armi k room pe knock karti rahein par usney nahee khola...she must be tired...let her sleep..hum chalet hai...chal uth..

Mi:agar bhai ne humari voice sun k bhi na khola...niki bhabhs k liye nahee..tu...humarey liye kaise...

M:i have a trick...you just come..

And then muskan and Minnie go downstairs first...towards the key holder...take some keys...now they move towards armaan's room...and try one key after the other quietly...inside armaan is very angry and punching a punching bag...so he cannot hear the voice of keys...outside...both girls are trying and atlast they succeed...they quietly move the handle...minnie is scared..so muski first peeks in...and seeing arman angry...quietly looks out at Minnie...she asks by eyes..what happen...she shows by sign he is very angry...both are loosing courage...but after sometime...come in...and because of the wind...the door closes...making a sound...arman...turns..he see both Minnie and muski...and his anger rises...

A: tum dono yahan...how did you enter(muskan shows him keys...)aur kuch baki hai karney ko...just get out of my room now...(and comes to drag them out when Minnie starts crying...)

A:jao yahan se tum dono...aur yeh jhote ansoo dad ko dekhao..jus leave i say..

Mi: i am sorry bhai...hum sirf mazak kar rahee the...aur humein laga...dad mazak mei jaisey humesha humara saath dete hai...deinge...milkey appki thori...taang kheechenge...par pata nahe...ajj dad ko kya huwa...hum sachi mei...appko hurt ya...dad se dant kabhi nahee petwana chahte the...sachii..

A:ab sorry ka kya fayda...minnie...jo hona thaw oh hogaya...jao and be happy...roz tu thora mazak banake...mom k dant sunatey the...ajj mom dad dono ne achi class le li arman k...you both should be happy...jao...celebrate karoo..

Mi:bhai...app aisa sochtey ho humarey barey mein...app ko dard de k humein khushi hogi..

A:aisa nahee tu kya socho haan...bolo...

Mi:we are very sorry plz bhai...forgive us...(and she sits down and cries on his feet...arman...immediately picks her up...she hugs him...and crying bitterly)

A: acha ok...stop crying...m not angry with you anymore...theek hai na..bas ab stop crying...(looks at muski for help...who comes...and hugs Minnie...)

M:chal Minnie ab bas rona band...dekh armi has forgiven you..chalo...be a good girl...go wash your face..(Minnie nods...and goes to wash her face...meanwhile)

M: am sorry too armi...i was just pulling your leg...as usual...had no idea...suh a big fuss would be created out of all this...

A: its ok muski di..my bad luck...mom kaam thi...ab dad k lectures bhi start hogaye hain...

M: but i don't get it...why dad was angry on you...i think you did something that why he must be angry...and took his frustration like this...because he never does something like this..and especially with you...

A: i don't know..nothing new...as such...if its related to office...previously it was same too...he never did that though...

M:hmmm...strange...dad aur aise...and what was that he asked you in the morning...and you said yes about...

A: i don't know its just i got to know in the morning ...he gave my car to Minnie as she wanted same like that...and said...if i want it back...i have to say yes to his condition...

Meanwhile Minnie came out too...

Mi:your car...but bhai...he himself give me that in morning...i never asked...and said...to take it...with me...and he will give you by tonight...some work he has with you related to car and all...

A: ahan...so dad is trying to be smart...playing games with me...now he will know...i am his son onlie...and i can play much better games..

M:games...what games..??and what's the condition thing you are talking about???

A:even he didn't told me the condition...just said to say yes..but me being arman malik...i got to know his plan...and thats why said yes..

M:ok...i think it would be to join office as usual..

A:no...no this one...this time...dad is trying to be smart now...he wants to me to get married...

Both sisters with shock...what

A: yes...first i was not sure...if that was the condition and he was not telling...till i say yes...but i overheared him and mom talking about some proposal and than i knew...what is his game..

M:so you mean...he wants you to settle down...

A:yah...so i can get to know...my responsibility and all that bullshit...

M: interesting...so that means you are ready for it...as you said yes to him...

A: no ways...am not marrying...at any cost so soon...i have another plan...for it(smiling evily)

M:armi plz...be careful...you saw how dad was angry today...i don't want any of this happening again..

A: chill di...nothing will happen ...trust me..

M:yah trust you...no ways..

Mi: oh..ok...now i come to know...what riya was saying????

A: riya ka is baat se kya link...minnie...???

Mi:arey anji di called today...in da evening to know how was my first day...sam bhi waheen tha...then he became adamant that he wants to talk to riya...so i gave him ...and after the call was ended...he was telling to adi k riya bol rahee thi...about some shadi...and then both were making plans to dance and all...

A: oh ho sakta hai...when i was at di's house riya ne suna hoga...we were talking abt this only na....yeh bachey bhi na...aur in sab ko bigarney wale tum..

Mi:main...mainey kya kiya..

A: kya kiya...ik riya bach gaye thi...jo meri support mei thi...usko bhi tumharey do chamcho ne...information broadcast bana diya...huh...

Mi:jee nahe aisa kuch nahee hai...and i don't ask them to tell me anything ...they do themselves...

A:acha....jhooti na ho tu..

Mi:mein jhooti aur app kya hoo...haan...raja harish Chandra...

A:haan bilkul...i don't manipulate...or take help of kids...to irritate or tease you...

Mi:i manipulate kids...take there help...jhoot sara sar jhoot...

A:sach ...bilkul sach...

Mi:jhooot...

A:sach...

Mi:jhoot

M(frustrated...scream):bas....(both bow down there head in shame)hadh hogaye..bacho pe lar rahee hai...aur khud...bacho se bhar kar hain....chalo Minnie...armi tub hi chal...will have some snack...janti hoon tujhe bhook lage hogi..

A:bhook tu lagi hai...chaloo...than...

And the three come down and eat dinner...with their little nok jhok again....

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