MINI AR: Welcome To Hell-Upd Pt4(Pg8)Chk Imp Note - Page 2

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Part 1

We see a small 6 storey glass building with the board "Gupta Clothing" hung on it. A black car emerges from the opposite side and stops at the front parking. A beautiful girl dressed in a business suit, enters the building. On her way she says her usual greetings to the staff and reaches lift. The lift takes her to the sixth floor where her office is situated. She moves out and walks toward her cabin; her secretary on seeing her approaches her and takes her to her cabin. They both walk in and the door closes and we see a name board on it saying "Riddhima Gupta".

Boys(together): Armi chachuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.....

The guy wakes up with a shock expression on his face and looks here and there as if a earthquake has come. Seeing no signs like that he moves to the side and is about to sleep again when his eyes pop out making him full awake. He sees the boys standing infront of his bed and he understand what was happened a minute ago. The boys see the expression on their chachu's face and knew its time to run and before the guy could take any action they run out of the room. The guy when notice this runs out of the room too and the three are now playing the chasing game with the guy at the back and the boys running for life at front. Suddenly before he could descend down the stairs to catch them he bumps hard into someone.

A: ahhh...(looks up and see its niki...his bhabhi)kya niki bhabhi app ko abhi rastey mei ana tha...ajj tu mei apkey in shaitoon ko chorney wala nahee tha....pata nahee kis pe gaye hain..app aur abhi bhai k bache tu lagte he nahee

As niki was about to answer her favourite devar...we hear another voice from the back

Ab(Abhimanyu): Kaise lagein gein...humari suhbat mei rahengein tu hum pe jayenge na...tum shaitano ne mil kar inhe bhi shaitaan bana diya hai...

A: nah...nt me abhi bhai...mei tu khud in devils se pareshan hoon...yeh sab is minie k bachi k karastani hai...pata nahee mujh se kia problem hai usey...inke saath mil k meri waat laganey pe tuli rehti hai

Niki who was listening to both the brothers conversation quietly spoke now,

N: sorry armi sab meri ghalti hai mainey he in dono ko bola tha tumhe utha dein....mujhe yaad he nahee raha kaam mei k...yeh dono phir kuch shaitani karienge...tum ruko ajj in dono ko achi saza dongi mei...buhat shaitan hogaye hain

A:arey bhabs its ok...don wrry...par why u wanted to wake me up so early in the morning???...abhi tu soya tha...(with that he yawns...as he's too sleepy)

Ab:too early...its almost ten arman....

N: haan armi aur dad ko tum se kuch zaroori baat karni hai...islye...uthana para...mainey tu kaha tha...shaam mei karlein...aur dad maan bhi gaye thee...but mama ne kaha nahee abhi uthao...woh buhat gusse mei thein toh...

A: its ok bhabhi...i will just take a shower and join you guys in some time...(turns to go to his room but then again turns back)aur haan bhabhi woh

N(before letting him complete):haan haan main aloo k parathe tayar rakhoonge...ok

A(comes and hugs her):aww...my bestest bhabhi in the world..

N:acha ab jao...and come down quickly..

As arman goes in his room...

Ab:aur bigaro isey...dad buhat naraz hai...is se...last weekend pe...new car jab de thi...tu isney unhe promise kiya tha k next week se office ayega...but dekh lo kal dad poora din wait karte rahe...par janab ka koi pata nahe..

N:kya abhi app bhi na...abhi woh chota hai...ahista ahista sab samjh jayega

Ab:chota(laughing)madam...he is 26 now...iski age mei larke...apni family start kar chukey hotey hai...aur yeh

N: acha ab chorye yeh sab...appko office k liya late nahee ho raha...

Ab: hmmm...chaloo

After some time we see Arman coming downstairs in his casual denim jeans and white t-shirt, looking handsome as ever with freshly combed shower n geled hair. He comes to the dining area and see his mom, dad and bhabs sitting and having breakfast. He joins them too with the usual greetings, Niki passes him his food and there is silence for some time. He thinks whether he should speak or not and as he was busy thinking how to start, he hears his father voice,

Am:Arman..so how is your new car doing?

A(thinking...i was scared for nothing...dad just talking casual...and here i thought he will shout on me as i promised him to join office..sighs and replies cheerfully)wonderful dad...its the best gift i ever got...you know...people were dying to get this car...but not yet available in India...and when my friends saw it with me..they were hell shocked and everyone wanted to have a ride on it...but nah how can it be possible...its Arman Malik's car and no one...dare...no one touches or messes with Arman's thing...

His dad was listening quietly to his blabbers..atlast spoke

Am: Ahan really son...is that so...than m so sorry...minnie...u know ur sister this morning was complaining that it's her first day at college and she has to take her old car...see how come she being Armaan Malik's sister stoop low on prestige

A: ofcourse dad...even she deserves a good car and first day of college means...marking impression on all...she has to show she is indeed Arman Malik's sister

Am: hmm...then you will be glad to know that i have given your new car to your sis

A(who was having his orange juice...spits out the content....and looks toward his dad in shock ):what........???????????????????????????????????

Am: haan...is mein itna hairan kyun ho..ab early in the morning i could not arrange any car..so i said her to take yours.

A:oh...then its fine...when she will come from college i will take it from her..as it is i don't have any plans for morning...

Am:no u wont...take it back from her...

A(again shocked): why dad...its my car..and

Am(before Arman could complete): it was you car...i have given it to Minnie now and now its her.

A: how can you do that dad...its plain injustice...you had given that car to me...buy her another new one...but that one is mine...and no one dare touches Arman's stuff

Am: sorry armi...i wont...and its final

A(frustated):but why....(stops and thinks)i know just because i didn't join the office you are doing this to me...i knew it...you would be upto sumthing this time

Am:if u think thats the reason...keep imagining, am not doing it because of that.

A: than for what and why ??? (in frustration almost yelling at him)

S:Arman behave you are talking with your dad.

A: mom...how can i...can you see...how he is being with me...its unfair...first he agrees to give me the car and now..

S: you deserve what he is doing with you...its just because of his fulfilling all your wishes...you have reach to this point

A:yah whatever mom...i don't care...i need my car back...and that final...

Am(who was listening quietly to his wife and son's conversation spoke): you can get the car back

A(when hears amit speak...all excited): yes i knew it dad...you love me a lot...and you wont take my car from me you cant....(showing his cute dimples...all smiley)

Am: i can take you car...(arman about to speak)now don't interrupt and first listen to what am saying(arman nods an ok)but i will give you your car back...on one condition

A(confused): what condition???

Am: i wont tell now...first say yes...and you will get your car back

A:this is not fair...without listening to the condition how can i say yes

Am: your choice...say yes...and then only the condition will be revealed

A:but....dad

Am: yes first

A(looking pleading...making cute face): mom

S:no armi...i will not speak in this matter...first time your dad is doing a right thing...

A(looking at niki...pleadingly to come and help): niki bhabs

S(before niki could speak up): niki u wont say a word...or try to help him...come now will go to the kitchen and see what should be cooked for lunch...let the father son talk

Niki and shreya leave a sad arman on the table...Arman thinking what to do...mom took niki bhabhi too...now who would help me...than an idea comes

A:please dad...how can you be this cruel to your lovely son...am i not the apple of your eye...your favourite as you always say...

Am: no emotional black mailing arman...i made my decision and this time am not falling in your trap(Arman think oh crap...mom give him a big lecture last night i think that's why he is such a sadoo in the morning)say yes if you want and i will tell you the condition and if you want to think...think...you have the whole day...i will meet you at dinner tonight and till the time you will not say yes...the car will be with Minnie

A(about to object but his dad leaves and goes out):shit...shit...is baar to teri sahee waat lagi hai arman...soch...soch...kya karey aisa k shart bhi na mani parey aur car bhi mil jayee...par kya...

And then a idea comes to his mind and he all smiling to himself moves toward his room.

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so this is the 1st part for you all... i hope you all will like it... do comment on how it was...even you can criticize.. till next time... take carez.. 😊