~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: mohitkideewani

Damn it Apps. Why did you send this PM this late? Huh? I swear I am about to go to bed and here I read part 2 which is by far sooooooooooo cute! I swear it is adorable. I am already in love with these two. Sanaya is my girl. Haha I swear I am like her 🤣 Not that gussa wali but still 😆 You get the point. Haha I love both of the introductions. I love how everyone stares at them. May when people stare at me I get all weird feeling inside me 😆 Ok so everything from the start to finish actually I can picture in my head. It is like a movie. 😆 Anyways, I love the part where they are eating dinner and she enters yet he cant see her. And then he searches for her 😍 And then he sees her 😍 And then OMG the cutest thing ever! 😍 See my haal Apps? I blame you, your FF and MoNaya. They can do the craziest thing to anybody 😳😆 But really I enjoyed reading it. Love the part. And do UPDATE soon! 😆 Don't leave us hanging like last time 😆 And make the part LONGER 😆 I want to drool more 😉

Love you Apps

-Strawbs/BJ

Awwwww my BJ, im so sorry jaan, i wish i had written it faster 😆😆
OMG thank you so much, i can totally see and feel ur conditon right now, i was the same while writing man, i tried to make it as MoNayaish as possible 😍 ya hon hopefully this time my 3rd part will come up sooner Embarrassed🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
re
i read the part
well just a min editing
*edited*
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update ragini
really very amazing fabulas update i loved every single bit of it
monaya were superb the way u described them
i can actually imagine them how they r looking😍
n really ragz u took alot time to update
the next update i want pretty soon 😆
see so greedy I'm..!!!!😉
as to know what monaya r goen do next as i cant imagine anything
im blank u really stopped at a point where i cant imagine anything
anyways loved mohit sweetness with little attitude
n love sanaya full attitude😆
all in all cutest sweetest n veryyyyyyyy awesome blossom part dear
do continue it soon dear
n thank u soooooooooooooo much for the pm
ur's sanu😃
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
ragzz. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

re

i read the part
well just a min editing
*edited*
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update ragini
really very amazing fabulas update i loved every single bit of it
monaya were superb the way u described them
i can actually imagine them how they r looking😍
n really ragz u took alot time to update
the next update i want pretty soon 😆
see so greedy I'm..!!!!😉
as to know what monaya r goen do next as i cant imagine anything
im blank u really stopped at a point where i cant imagine anything
anyways loved mohit sweetness with little attitude
n love sanaya full sttitude😆
all in all cutest sweetest n veryyyyyyyy awesome blossom part dear
do continue it soon dear
n thank u soooooooooooooo much for the pm
ur's sanu😃

Sanu , thanks for your wonderful comment 🤗 i know i took so long to update this time, next one will be sooner i hope 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Ragz🤗
Wonderful update hun.. lost in monaya land 😍
And gosh the way you described MoNaya's look..😳 hats off to you sweetie 👏 AHHH I was blushing badly while reading about Mohit☺️🤣 White shirt 😍
Loved Monaya's first meet 😍 Really the way i expected it to be😉😆
Overall superb update
loved it
Continue soon pleaseeee😳
Love u🤗 muahhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

Ragz🤗
Wonderful update hun.. lost in monaya land 😍
And gosh the way you described MoNaya's look..😳 hats off to you sweetie 👏 AHHH I was blushing badly while reading about Mohit☺️🤣 White shirt 😍
Loved Monaya's first meet 😍 Really the way i expected it to be😉😆
Overall superb update
loved it
Continue soon pleaseeee😳
Love u🤗 muahhh

awwww Jyo thanks soo much hon, and mohit wears a black one not white 🤣🤣😆
I'm so glad u like it jaan, and i will surely continue soon Embarrassedlove ya too
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Hi rags🤗I was dieing to read your next update and believe me it,s absolutely wonderful.I can simply imagine both of them entering college and wow others are getting jealous of Sanaya,well what can i say she is our angelic beauty so who can deny😉

Oh i loved the dining scene where Mohit was totally mesmerized in her beauty and hence was walking towards her😍and then he was searching all over for her😳
Looks like Mohit, heart had been taken away in just one meeting...so CUTE😍and wow Sanaya in RED so gorgeous...gosh i can,t stop drooling rags🤣and it,s all you fault but seriously it was totally monayalicious.😉
And i just loved their first meeting and after that am getting so excited to read the next part cause if the first meeting is so special then the next uncountable meetings would be like......just don,t ask😍.

Superb update dear👏 and one request that next time i want a little LONGER part.
And yes do cont soon.I,m really in love with your FF😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

Hi rags🤗I was dieing to read your next update and believe me it,s absolutely wonderful.I can simply imagine both of them entering college and wow others are getting jealous of Sanaya,well what can i say she is our angelic beauty so who can deny😉

Oh i loved the dining scene where Mohit was totally mesmerized in her beauty and hence was walking towards her😍and then he was searching all over for her😳
Looks like Mohit, heart had been taken away in just one meeting...so CUTE😍and wow Sanaya in RED so gorgeous...gosh i can,t stop drooling rags🤣and it,s all you fault but seriously it was totally monayalicious.😉
And i just loved their first meeting and after that am getting so excited to read the next part cause if the first meeting is so special then the next uncountable meetings would be like......just don,t ask😍.

Superb update dear👏 and one request that next time i want a little LONGER part.
And yes do cont soon.I,m really in love with your FF😳

Ashhhh 🤗 thanks for ur beautiful comment hon , gosh im overwhelmed, see what MoNaya make me do 🤣🤪 even i love how they meet, *proud face* i thik its pretty much a dream meeting 😆 hon thank you much once again, and i'll surely try to make the 3rd part longer 🤗 ur comments mean a lot ..love yaEmbarrassed
Edited by -Ragini- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
great part!
mohit has a crush on her already!
can't wait to read what happens next
do continue soon.
maria😊
ragzz. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Thanks so much Maria 🤗 Glad u like it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Awesome part loved whole description....monaya first meet....cool....continue the next part soon.

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