~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
First things first

Sorry for being so late😭😭 , u know being an aunt is not an easy job so got busy😆😆😆

Secondly

OMG OMG OMG ragsie has started an FF.....n what an FF with Monaya in it n with a totally diff shade😍

Beautiful CS ragsie......I knew whenever u write u r going to a superhit right from the start😃......ur FF is like a fresh of breathe air.....its got awesome combi of monaya yet in a totally different refreshing avatar....there itself u have lot of brownie points sweety😊......i am in love with Sanaya's characterization....i always love characters that r misinterpreted by d masses becoz of their element of intrigue....gen for stories, misconstrued char have lot of layers , so without doubt am looking forward to u uncovering them as u proceed by😍😍😍......mohit CS looks interesting😉....on the whole brilliant start sweetheart⭐️.....now wat r u simply giggling at 🤣, get going n start writing the long update u owe me n do it frequently okie😉....well that's d fan in me speaking😆😆....

way to go girl🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
wowwwwwwwwwww
awsomeeeeeeeeee CS
loved it a lottttttttttttttt
mohit nd sanaya CS is just wonderful...
the title is just superb...!!!!!!😳😳😳😳
continueee soonn...
and do add me in ur pm list...!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: meens1981

First things first

Sorry for being so late😭😭 , u know being an aunt is not an easy job so got busy😆😆😆

Secondly

OMG OMG OMG ragsie has started an FF.....n what an FF with Monaya in it n with a totally diff shade😍

Beautiful CS ragsie......I knew whenever u write u r going to a superhit right from the start😃......ur FF is like a fresh of breathe air.....its got awesome combi of monaya yet in a totally different refreshing avatar....there itself u have lot of brownie points sweety😊......i am in love with Sanaya's characterization....i always love characters that r misinterpreted by d masses becoz of their element of intrigue....gen for stories, misconstrued char have lot of layers , so without doubt am looking forward to u uncovering them as u proceed by😍😍😍......mohit CS looks interesting😉....on the whole brilliant start sweetheart⭐️.....now wat r u simply giggling at 🤣, get going n start writing the long update u owe me n do it frequently okie😉....well that's d fan in me speaking😆😆....

way to go girl🤗

Ur such a sweetheart Meens 🤗 Thanks so much for ur warm compliment hon 🤗 so so glad u like the concept and u know coz of these overwhelming responses from you all, u guys just inspire me to write more and more, i wish i can update soon, im still waiting on aahana, gins and Shru's comments, then i will update part 2 😳
love ya tons 🤗🤗 and u know na that ur one of my biggest inspirations 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Guys ill be coming up with the 2nd part hopefully today..love ya all 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Heyy my MoNayaholicsss 🤗
How are you all doing?, firstly i want to aplogize for being so late in updating the 2nd part of my FF, been so caught up at work , i know u guys have been waiting for the 2nd part so without have to wait any longer , so here's Love is madness -Part 2 featuring Mohit Sehgal and Sanaya Irani
L.O.V.E IS MADNESS............Part 2
Mohit and Sanaya fan fiction
It was a bright sunny morning when Mohit entered the college, he could not have been this happier, as he entered the boy's hostel he thought may be he's missing something, but what could be better than getting admission in one of the most well renowned colleges..As he walked one couldn't help but notice how good he looked, Mohit is a well built young man all of 21,brown eyes, very fair and has an amazing jaw line with medium biceps and atleast 5'10 in height, he wore a black shirt that was half sleeved with one button open right at the top close to his chest and his sunglasses hanging out, blue jeans and creamish colour shoes, he carried a hand bag with lots of books and clothes and one could easily notice that there was something long protruding out of his bag, it was none other than his guitar, that he played very often. He had one suitcase as well which he dragged along with him. He rushed towards his room which was on the third floor. As he entered his room, he saw his roommate studying and the two met and shook hands and became friends instantly. Mohit is a very friendly guy , he gets along easily with everyone. Mohit was exhausted and wanted to rest but before that he had to unpack all his stuff, keep everything in place. After doing all that, he crashed on his bed and slept like he hadn't slept in forever.
On the other side, Sanaya entered the girls hostel, she gazed at the sky to see how beautiful the colour of the sky was, so serene, yet so amazing ; she was still lonely and sad leaving her home, but then she again thought about the business she has to start as soon as she could. All of 21..She wore a beautiful red one piece made out of pure cotton that was very summerish and it was a knee length one, it had a halter top look with strings tied at the back of her neck, big black eyes, her silky black hair fell on her shoulders as she walked, Sanaya is a very fair girl, 5'7 in height and a figure which all girls would crave for. All the girls in the hostel literally gave her stares as she walked past some of them..They had never seen a more beautiful girl, so if girls could look at her like this, one could imagine how the boys would look at her. She looked at them and thought why would they all stare at her, but nevertheless, she walked by not paying any heed and just entered her room, she met her roommate who was getting ready to go to a class, her roommate was a nerdish looking girl, when Sanaya looked totally the opposite of her.But the moment the girls met , they could get along easily and one could easily say that they can be the best of friends in future. She settled down pretty quickly but not totally, she still had a lot to unpack and then went off to sleep.
In the evening after few hours, when Mohit woke up, he felt so refreshed like he hadn't felt in a long time, he stretched and went on to take a shower, Sanaya was woken up by her roommate who had come back from her classes that were done for the day, she woke up Sanaya because it was almost supper time and all the hostelites had to collect in the dining hall for their supper meal.. Sanaya went on to take a shower and felt good. Both Mohit and Sanaya were wearing the same clothes they wore when they entered this morning in college. All the boys walked towards the dining hall which was in the third building, and most of them were creating a ruckus , and there was so much noise that it was unbearable sometimes, the boys were too noisy.Mohit seemed to be one of the quieter ones as they all walked towards to dining room, who knew that he is going to meet the most special person , he had least expected that. All the girls almost reached the dining room which was in the third buliding. They all collected and sat in their own seats and started eating. Mohit enjoyed his meal thoroughly and just while chatting he sat on one side of the dining hall and his eyes fell upon this beautiful girl whose face he could not notice, but he could see how beautifully dressed she was and he was so mesmerized that he stopped eating his food and started to walk towards her, She wore a red dress with her silky black hair loosely tied , As soon as he reached her, his roommate yelled out his name and before he could even see her face he had to turn back and he started walking towards his table, but then he thought, may be he comes across this girl again, but was unsure.
As soon as the hostelites started finishing their supper, the dining hall was getting emptier and after a few mins everyone had finished, suddenly it all looked empty. As the time passed by that evening, the boys started playing cricket, some got hooked onto basketball, while the girls were taking walks or sitting in corners and gossipping. Mohit walked by and tried to look for the red dress girl everywhere, but she was nowhere to be seen. He had this weird feeling of hallucination as if he has hallucinated about this red dress girl, but then again he gave it a thought and decided that its definitely not his hallucination, it has to be real, that girl has to be real.He certainly did not give up on his search, he did not know all the parts of the college and its hostel premises but he still made his way and walked and walked till he reached that part of the hostel area where hardly anyone visited that much , it was very calm out there, one could view the mountains from that particular spot , it was like seeing the whole of shimla from that point till he saw someone standing and leaning towards a railing there. The moonlight was strong and it fell on this persons face , but from such a distance he couldn't even see who this person was. As he came closer, he still thought he was hallucinating, that how could he see such a beautiful sight . He came more close and yes it was the same girl in the red dress. He felt nervous to talk but he still did and he said ," Excuse me, may i know what your name is?" and finally turning her face , she was none other than Sanaya in her beautiful cotton red one piece and her hair open this time, she looked very startled and said ," Excuse me, Do i know you, huh!" she looked angry and started walking away , just when Mohit held her hand and pulled her and said," why do you have to be so rude, maine sirf aapka naam poocha hai" to this she said," Excuse me, tum hote kaun ho mujhe mera naam poochne waale, i don't even know you, never seen you" and then he said laughing," how would you know me, this is my first day in college, tum ladkiyon ki yahi problem hai" and then repenting for what she said," oh im very sorry, mujhe nahi pata tha, i am new as well, but i dont find it important to tell you my name, and who are you anyways to ask me my name" and now looking irritated Mohit said," dekho zyada bhaav khaane ki zaroorat nahi hai, if u don't want to tell your name its ok, main aapko force nahi karoonga" and he started walking away..just then she said it aloud.."Sanaya"...He turned back and looked at her and gave a smile, it felt like he was attracted to her, but he did not know yet what it was, may be a start of something new 😳 just then she smiled back at him still looking a bit irritated but calmer than before, she walked past him with a grin on her lips and her hair flew on his face, he was completely out and out mesmerized. He just stood there thinking was this all a dream or a start of something new or just one meeting and thats the end of it, There was much more to this awaiting him and could make his life more wonderful than ever.
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Thats all for now guys, i hope i can update my 3rd part sooner than i did for this one, Hope u guys like it as much as my previous one 🤗 love you all and ENJOY drooling 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
OMG so amazing sis!! Simple, beautiful and captivating....gosh i can totally imagine Mohit And Sanaya in the picture 🤣 So cuteee! loved every bit of it....lets see whats in store for the 3rd part 😳 mwaaaaaahh! love yaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Yamini.Arjun

OMG so amazing sis!! Simple, beautiful and captivating....gosh i can totally imagine Mohit And Sanaya in the picture 🤣 So cuteee! loved every bit of it....lets see whats in store for the 3rd part 😳 mwaaaaaahh! love yaa

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 thank u soooooooooooo much mwaah , so glad u like itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

firstly congrats for new monaya ff wow i have not read any monaya since ages m glad u opened one m so happy thnx a lot fot dat n den omg omg omg wat a CS of monaya man mohit's CS was da best man his characterization is jst perfect man n sanaya's CS is also beautiful n intresting so both leave der house to do something on der own awesome n wow both in same college of shimla awesome so intresting n awesome ff n cant believe dis is ur 1st ff da way u wrote its like someone who is proffesional in dis anyways omg omg da 2nd part was jst superb man loveeeeeeeee da way u describe abt both mohit n sanaya loveee it n den monaya meet was intresting sanaya was showing attitude n was irritated of mohit bt den she became calm hehe awesome superb 1st meeting now cant wait for 3rd update do continue soon n thnx for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Damn it Apps. Why did you send this PM this late? Huh? I swear I am about to go to bed and here I read part 2 which is by far sooooooooooo cute! I swear it is adorable. I am already in love with these two. Sanaya is my girl. Haha I swear I am like her 🤣 Not that gussa wali but still 😆 You get the point. Haha I love both of the introductions. I love how everyone stares at them. May when people stare at me I get all weird feeling inside me 😆 Ok so everything from the start to finish actually I can picture in my head. It is like a movie. 😆 Anyways, I love the part where they are eating dinner and she enters yet he cant see her. And then he searches for her 😍 And then he sees her 😍 And then OMG the cutest thing ever! 😍 See my haal Apps? I blame you, your FF and MoNaya. They can do the craziest thing to anybody 😳😆 But really I enjoyed reading it. Love the part. And do UPDATE soon! 😆 Don't leave us hanging like last time 😆 And make the part LONGER 😆 I want to drool more 😉

Love you Apps

-Strawbs/BJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

firstly congrats for new monaya ff wow i have not read any monaya since ages m glad u opened one m so happy thnx a lot fot dat n den omg omg omg wat a CS of monaya man mohit's CS was da best man his characterization is jst perfect man n sanaya's CS is also beautiful n intresting so both leave der house to do something on der own awesome n wow both in same college of shimla awesome so intresting n awesome ff n cant believe dis is ur 1st ff da way u wrote its like someone who is proffesional in dis anyways omg omg da 2nd part was jst superb man loveeeeeeeee da way u describe abt both mohit n sanaya loveee it n den monaya meet was intresting sanaya was showing attitude n was irritated of mohit bt den she became calm hehe awesome superb 1st meeting now cant wait for 3rd update do continue soon n thnx for pm

Anu you are so so sweet 🤗 thank you so much my dear and im so glad u like my idea of a MoNaya FF, you know when it comes to MoNaya, i can just go on and on 😆😉

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