~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ragini!
Well i dont have much to say!
It was an amazing read, and am waiting for the next update!:D
Loved the CS n the first part👍🏼
Add me to ur pm list:D
Luv
ZJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Ragz 🤗

wow !! girl you are a terrific writer ⭐️👏👏👏 i m so sorry i totally forgot to comment on the first part 😳 saw i never unreserved it i forgot *sorry* but i m so glad u still pmed me for this part 😆


hmm shimla soft cool breezy place with loads of scenic views and yes definitely a place for romance ☺️ 😍 😆 - i know i have been there it is gorgeous... do make use of the location gal 🤣🤣🤣 - FYI .. if u dont know that is 😆 - it is one of India's prime honeymoon spots 😉🤣🤣 - and before you have any ideas as to how i know this - my dad owns a traveling business - so dont make those horses gallop 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

hmm a beauty in red 😍 and a guy with a smile to die for 😍😍😍 Ragz what in the name of heaven do u think you wanna do ? drive us nuts as if we already arent 🤣🤣🤣🤣

gosh gal i loved their first meet and how he felt that instant pull 😉 😆 ... do continue this moonlit romance ☺️ and PM me when u do will await the next part :D

P,S - i dunno what went wrong with the like button 😕 it dint work
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ragzieeee 🤗

WOW, like finally the time i was waiting for is here .. Girl your an incredible writer to begin with, i loved how you described their entry from top till bottom those two paragraphs were full of descriptions really beautiful !
Sanaya in red 😍, and Mohit in black 😍😍 wow kya colour combination hai 😉 and on top of all, that killing smile of his ☺️ ... Shimla one of the most romatic places and a place im dying to go, but thanks to your descriptions i can imagine jus how it is 🤣 ! I really loved the dinning hall scene were Mohit was totally mesmerized in her beauty and he was soo concerned about her looking for her here there .. 😳
Hayye yar LOVED their first meeting, simple yet beautiful 😳 .. Must say Sanaya's got attitude but any girl would've behaved the way she did, and Mohit wanting to know her name 😳 aweeeehhh !! Pehle hi mulakat mein Sanaya stole Mohit's heart ❤️... From all the FF's ive read this was the best meet ever !
Ahh lost in MoNaya Dreamland 😍, Ragzz please update part 3 soon, i cant wait anymore MoNaya driving me crazy man 🤣 !
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
RAGINI U ARE A AWESOME WRITER YAAR!! TOO GOOD =D XX
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ragzz..!! 🤗
Awesum Writer Haann.. OMG That Was Soo MoNayalicious.. 😳
Girl You Are Rocking..!!!
Hope You Upd.. Ur Next Part Soon..😃

xxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey ragini really superb update loved it to the core specially their first meeting gosh can't wait for next part do continue soon

Awwh thanks Aashi 🤗🤗 will do it very soon love ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy ragini.......... m soo sorry i couldn't reply earlier.!! had been keeping really busy..!!!! 😒

coming to the monaya ff...!!! OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...!!!! Sanaya and Mohit.... 😍
sanaya in red and mohit in black..! 🤪
God and the way you have presented it.. its simply outstanding.... amazingly done ragzzz..... 🤗

do continue asap..!!!! its soo addictive...! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...Omg...OMG...Ragz...
U Have Killed Me....🤪
The way u have described Mohit and Sanaya's look and Dress...Haila...
DEAD**🤪🤪🤪

Totally Rocking..Fantastic..Awesome Update...
Mohit is already falling for Sanaya...awwwwww...
Cant wait for the Next...
Jaldi Update kar...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Awww...Ragzz!!🤗
Such A CUTE Chap :D
I Waited For This FF So MUCH!!
I LOVED Their Entries...
Just WAIT For Pari She Will Drool At Mohits Entry!!🤣🤣
Pehle Kaha Thi?!!Chuppi Rustam....
Mera Pura Vacation Khaarab Karr Diya Naa.....
Aur Jab Mera School START Hone Wala Hain Phir Update Karri Hoo!!😆
And Next Time Pllzz Cont Soon.....

*-Sana-* 😳

awwh thanks so much Sana 🤗 and i ve already told pari to read it fast and be ready to Drool 🤣🤣 she was going crazy even before reading it😆 so u can imagine when she reads it😆
i will continue soon thanks Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aa123.80

Loved this part Rags!! Amaaazing writing...

Loved the description of Mohit and Sanaya, and could totally imagine them.... I was actually thinking how Sanaya would look in that red dress.... Hopeless me!!🤣

Loved loved their first meeting. The moonlight, hills, tranquility, perfect setting!!

Love you for this!! 🤗

hehehe thanks Ishu, my writing isnt great as others here, but atleast i can make it dreamy after all its out fan fiction thing 🤣 we can do what we like 🤣 when i was describing their clothes and stuff, i was myself so lost in it 😍we r hopeless now, nikammas 🤣
so glad u like it hon, love ya too 🤗

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