~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28

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Hi guys! This is my first ever fan fiction on my favourite couple Mohit and Sanaya. Since its my first, i'm a little nervous to pen it all down 😆 Please guys bear with me, criticisms are more than welcome, please do correct me as theres always room for improvement 😳
This is dedicated to all my fellow MoNayaholics, my soul sisters 🤗 especially for my very dear friends..Pari, Shruti and Gina 🤗 and my insipiration is my sister Yamini and my dear friends Meensie, Pari and Aahana..thanks for the encouragement and support guys. And i know guys I'm very very late coz i had asked all of you a while back whether i shoud start writing, and im sorry for the delay! here i go finally 😆
L. O. V. E. IS MADNESS...........
Mohit and Sanaya Fan fiction- Part 1
Mohit is a carefree guy with dreams and ambitions that are never ending, he does not believe in love, he runs away from it, but he is very sensitive , tends to get emotional more quickly than normal, he wants everything to belong to him just like some sort of madness that has striked in him and does not take the name of ending. He wants to be a rich and successful businessman but not even in his wildest dreams he can think of taking this step. He belongs to this small town near Chandigarh and his family does not have that much money so that they can afford his education. He wants to do his MBA in this beautiful hill station called Shimla which has a very famous MBA college where students come from all over and study. Since his family cannot afford his education, he decides to take this step forward with great hesitation and earn some money so that he can make his dream come true. Finally one day he takes up this job in this small restaurant in Chandigarh and earn some rupees.
Months pass by and he has earned pretty much enough to support himself for his MBA course in Shimla. This day has finally arrived, his long awaited dream, and now that he is leaving his loved ones behind and moving ahead to make a career, he feels very nostalgic , for a moment he thinks, is this the right decision he has made but then his dreams are in front of his eyes which he cannot afford to let go. He arrived at his college and his accomodation was provided by the college faculty. He is going to be residing at the Boys hostel. Mohit could not have been happier than this as his prolonged dream was finally coming true. But there was something even happier coming his way, and may be that could be his actual dream.
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Sanaya belongs to one of the richest families in Shimla , she is the daughter of the Mayor of Shimla. The Shimla locals have a feeling Sanaya must be this haughty, loud, arrogant and a spoilt girl, but nobody knows the actual Sanaya..Sanaya is one of the most down to earth, sweet ,caring and a beautiful young girl waiting for her dream-man and shes a hopeless romantic with a sensitive heart. She wants to start her own business but not with the help of her rich father. She wants to stand on her own feet. She often goes to the Kaalibadi temple up in the higher region of Shimla to pray every single day for her career. No one knows her there because she visits the temple at a very odd time, and since nobody really notices her there, not a single person actually knows that Sanaya is a caring and a soft spoken girl. One day at home when she and her dad are having a meal, her mother is no more and due to some family problems when her father lashes out at her, she decides to move out of the house and study in the MBA college of Shimla, and this is the best opportunity for her because she anyway wants to start her own business and settle down without having to do anything with her harsh father. When one day her father is out for some official work, she has her bags packed and ready to move out , but her father has no idea about her leaving the house and is going to get one of the biggest shocks of his life. She leaves him a letter and moves out feeling very low and nostalgic.
She arrives at the college and the college faculty give her accomodation at the Girls hostel. Sanaya really misses her home but then life moves on and so has she.She feels her business will take place soon but will she do it alone or may be someone somewhere would be waiting for her in his subconscious dreams, and probably she could find her real happiness in that.
To be continued...keep watching this space for more 😉
Guys please tell me honestly how was it, leave ur honest comments here, i would highly appreciate it and let me know where i went wrong and could the introduction have been better? and to be honest its very simple..
Do comment guys😳
All the FF updates :-
First part-Page 1
Second part-Page 10
Third part-Page 18
Fourth part-Page 23
Fifth part- Page 28
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reeeeeeeeeeeeee

edit

OMGGG sacchi🤗🤗🤗🤗
Finally man🥳🥳
GOSHHHH it took me a while to come out of a day dream....a dream which was created by ur intro😍😍😍....I was lost in it!!😳😳😳
OMGGGG Mohit......what a characterization!! ☺️☺️☺️☺️......loving his character👍🏼......and sanaya's char. is also very interesting😳😳😳.......
OMGGG college in Shimla together....😲😲😲😲...that would be something very excited to read...hayeeee I just cant wait for ur next part!!!! I have started assuming...how will be their first meeting and so on🤣 OMGG just cant wait!!
and for suggestions....we discussed some on msn...and u know me....this is not my subject😆😆😆......so this sounds perfect for me!!!! 😎

now do update soon!!😈......and yahhh u dedicated this to me🤗🤗means alot!! love u so much!! muahhhhhhhhhh

Edited by -MohitzPari- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Res..
Edited:

OMG..
Ragz..
What should I say???
I don't think that this is ur first FF..
Its the Best FF i have ever read..Truly januable..
Do continue..
Edited by akritimjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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RES 😆 Sheesh both sisters write so well! 😆
EDIT:-
Sorry, took some time 😆 But read through it Ragz - it's really beautiful - LOVE your character sketches, Mohit and Sanaya are such different individuals...I didn't know you were a writer too!
And if that's the case, don't be nervous at all! 😳 Because your writing is really, very good! 😳
I would like to be honest and say that I'm not very regular with FFs at all 😆 Currently, and uptil now I've only been able to follow about 3-4 properly 😆 But you've made such a beautiful start, and I'm eager to see what this brings =) 😳 So I would like to think that I's be very regular here! 😆 I promise I will be, in fact! 😳
And update soon 😆
<33 Aish
Edited by -Aish129- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res...

i loved the title very much!!

*Edited*
Gosh.. CS is more then beautiful!!
wonderfully described!!👏
Mohit's character is really proud worthy!! and for Sanaya... truely realistic!!
delightfull start!!
continue soon!!
and do add me in ur PM list!!😳😳
Edited by ---ishita--- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great cs
you've written it so well
i've read ffs on sajan but none on monaya
really looking forward to this one
plz add me in ur pm list.
maria😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ragzzz!!! AMAZINGGG cs!! MoNaya!!😍😍😍
update soonnn!!! :D:D can't wait for MoNaya to meet!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Have edited 😆 And better run now! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr88888888 raggggggggggg🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey ragini dear first of all superb concept loved it to the core hon and superb description please update soon can't wait for first update and thanks for pm 🤗 🤗

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