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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
hey deblina,
i loved it yarr
I was grinning throughout..

Yeh writer kaha chupi thi? 😆

Now keep writing....
It was too cute and lovely and nice and mayurish..

P.S.- Sorry for late comments, i had gone on a trip...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -sam-

<font size="3">hey deblina,
i loved it yarr
I was grinning throughout..

Yeh writer kaha chupi thi? 😆

Now keep writing....
It was too cute and lovely and nice and mayurish..

P.S.- Sorry for late comments, i had gone on a trip...
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thanks samidha.............. 🤗

writer chupi nahi thi ji............tumhi log dekh nahi paye........... 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Debz 😲😲😲🤗🤗🤗🤗
How in the world is it that I had no idea that you write so well??
It was just beyond freaking awesome 😃😃
I mean what we ever wanted to see in S2 you gave it to us right here
Mr. and Mrs. Sharma, their romance, love, masti and ofcourse their Pranav 😳
Gosh, it was so good. I totally am in love with it
It was just beyond adorable. And you write beautifully 😍
Please write more Debz. i'll be waiting.😃
Love ya <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
@Daania-i guess i never told bout my writing skills.... 😉

newayz,thnaks sooo..much fr liking it..

@nilam..thanks dear...........

😃 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Hello..guys..me back again...........Thanks to all who liked my 1st OS in my gallery.d comments mean a lot friends....... 🤗 🤗

and well,d great news of our Nupur coming back made the Artian in me also jump wid excitement and i decided 2 write one OS on them.a Rati's come back OS....,as ordered 2 me by my friend Vasu(arti4ever) .... 😃 🤣
newyaz,enuf of my bakbak b4 d actual thingy...😆



ArTi OS....Waiting for the miracle....


He had just finished with his shots and was sitting and chatting with Navina. Actually she was the one going on .Arjun was unnaturally quiet .It felt good, meeting her after a long time. The sets had been really boring these days, empty types. there was this familiarity which had been missing for so many days .but I t was something else too. Was he…Missing her..????
No. .It wasn't actually "Missing" her sort of stuff. .he was actually….feeling her ..Near him…..he could really feel her….

He felt the same familiarity, d same feeling of SHE being around.. very near to him…..

That same breath of fresh air,the fragrance . .which she brought along with her whenever she came.

Last time he felt that was when they had been together for the dance program on Colors .their rehearsals. It felt so wonderful to hold her in his arms after such a long time. He had missed those twirls ,the dances, their cute nok-jhoks ,the small disagreements between them about a particular step and then-of course-his manofying act for her.it was all so very cute…he had described their relationship really well-theirs was indeed the cutest relationship ever….….

"Arjun . .u here???i m talking to you"!!!! He was jerked off his reverie by Navina.

"Yaa,I m sorry…I missed u guys on the sets really…..sets badha soona-soona lagta hai ,without u all".

"I know..itz good 2 b back here again…….."

"Well, wait a minute..i will just b back .need 2 check something.".

He got up and walked towards the main office.
What was happening???His instincts told him that she was very much near him; just he needs to find her out. He walked ahead. The feeling was over powering now!!!!


Suddenly, d door of the office opened and….

RATI……OMG..!!! u here???!!!

Arjun dashed towards her and took her into one of the tightest hugs ever…

His instincts have been right .
She had been there and he he had finally found her. Why? What happened? It didn't mattered to him.the only thing that he knew was she was here with him now, at that moment. He had missed her terribly…

……and she had missed him too.But they had talked only 3 days back naa. .At the dance rehearsals. So, why this thing now.??




"OMG!! Why didn't u tell me u are here??i can't believe it! What happened??" He was ecstatic seeing her.

"Arjun…..wait"She broke the hug and he realized his gesture might have made her a bit awkward. ..she is a bit reserved when it comes to showing affections. Dude…

"Oh. .i m sorry…..I didn't mean to.."

"Sorry???? For what…...??"

"For..err…umm….For that attack like hug. I could have chocked you ,u know. ."He let go off her and smiled sheepishly.

"Never mind that.i know and am ok with your overtly expressive affections…"she smiled back…, the broadest and the most beautiful one he had missed so much.

"So, tell me. u here ???Are u…..??"He asked….hoping for the nth time for the good news….

"yaa,I m coming back..ur Nupur is coming back…finally..Happy now????She replied

"OMG!! u serious….??!!! HAPPY??!! Rati-I m super-duper HAPPY!!!I had waited for ur come back since the day u left

Thank you soo much for accepting the come back offer.

"Well,thank my fans for that.I came back by their efforts and for them…and…."

"And??"

"And for the character Nupur..that I missed like hell"….

And??

"And. .?? and for the good tracks ,the good story lines and of course-the new clothes I m going to get now…."She laughed at her own little joke…

"And…I won't say that. ok.. and most importantly NOT for u..HAPPY???!!! I won't tell what u want to hear. .got it Mr. Bijlani???!!

"You understand me so well naa"!

"Kya kare..!!! have to..we r co-stars and..

"Something even m ore than that kyaa???" He winked at her …

"Ok, stop flirting now..plzz…..well,..bye then….

"Bye??? U r not going to shoot????"

"Not today..i will begin from Thursday "

"Ok..wait a bit here naa. We can go out for coffee together . Navina's also here

"Navina's still here??Great !!!then. it would be fun "

"Yaa.Let me change.I'll just be back.she is there.Go.i will join you two in five minutes..ok??"

"Sure..come fast"

He walked back to his room.it was exciting and wonderful to work with her as he always said .he would get back that excitement in his life again.Somewhere in the back of his mind..he kept hoping for a miracle to happen….SOMETHING…..Special…

Coz, MIRACLES DO HAPPEN….!!!!
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So,guys..dats it...do tell me whether u liked it or not...

and vasu-kaisa laga ji????comment karna naa bhulio.... 😉

plzz..do press d like tab ppl.....nad don't forget 2 leave d comments too....

Love.... Debzz.....



🤗 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
res
Chk mine too

Edited

I loved it...
It was Artilicious...
I guess it hapnd like this only...

Waah... Waah...

Chupi hui writer!
Keep writing!

I am first
Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -sam-

res
Chk mine too

Edited

I loved it...
It was Artilicious...
I guess it hapnd like this only...

Waah... Waah...

Chupi hui writer!
Keep writing!

I am first



samidha..chupi hui write won't go chup-chup for long...i have come out frm my cocoon..babes..... 😉

thanks for liking it.... 😃 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
DEBZ ..what have u done debz...OMGGG an arti OS ..that too for me ....that too over rati's comeback......😍😍😍 i was imagining arjun and rati all thru the OS .....OMGGGGGGGGGG i m going craziest!!!!!!! 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
debz...u gave me the best gift jaana......🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Thank you soo much for accepting the come back offer.

"Well,thank my fans for that.I came back by their efforts and for them'and'."

"And??"

"And for the character Nupur..that I missed like hell"'.

And??

"And. .?? and for the good tracks ,the good story lines and of course-the new clothes I m going to get now'."She laughed at her own little joke'

"And'I won't say that. ok.. and most importantly NOT for u..HAPPY???!!! I won't tell what u want to hear. .got it Mr. Bijlani???!!

"You understand me so well naa"!

"Kya kare..!!! have to..we r co-stars and..

"Something even m ore than that kyaa???" He winked at her '

OMG ...this part is super duper cuuuuutttttttttttttteeeee....love the way she says ..Mr.Bijlani....😳

i hope this happens for sure.....TIGHTEST HUGG ...ahem ahem..someone is so eager to see this....other than myself....😉🤣
i hope navina gets some important call and leave these two love birds into their own world!!! 😉🤣🤣
purely ArTilicious!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Edited by arti4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
vasu....i followed ur order janeman.. 🤗 and tune apne comment mein hi mera OS aadha -likh diya yaar....

well,u want Navina 2 leave them??..ok..i m gonna write the next part on it..Navina leaving the two together n then...... 😉

and yaa,i m eager 2 see the HUG.. World's tightest hug ever!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Deblina_ArTi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Deblina_ArTi

vasu....i followed ur order janeman.. 🤗 and tune apne comment mein hi mera OS aadha -likh diya yaar....

well,u want Navina 2 leave them??..ok..i m gonna write the next part on it..Navina leaving the two together n then...... 😉

and yaa,i m eager 2 see the HUG.. World's tightest hug ever!!!!!!!!!

ohhh tu kitna sweet ho yaar ..meri jaanu....🤗🤗
🤣🤣 waise bhi main nahi likh sakti naa....toh socha tera OS se kuch copy paste karu....😉
wowie..navina will leave them ..wowie....acha ek kaam kar...navina ko uski BF ka call aya 😉..waisa kar(i dunno if she have or not) 😆😆 navina khush honge aur yahaan humare ArTi bhi 😳😳
even i m eager to see the world's tightest hugg yaar....i m sure we will get this on mayur's first meeting 😍😍😍..ArTi tightest HUGG aaj puri huyi shayad..aaj rati ki shooting start hua hoga shayad...😉

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